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Traced in the Stars: Chapter 20-A Home Turned Upside Down
Hermes is fine. He’s at the fire station where he is being pampered I am told by all the fire fighters.
Shane I love you dearly and this is very hard for me to do to you but I cannot bear the thought that it is my fault for nearly loosing you! You are the love of my life and I promise that one day we will see each other again. I want you to know that I will miss you unbearingly but will love you unconditionally.
As for you Alex, you turned our lives upside down. We’ve helped you through mistakes, and you’ve helped us through ours. You gave us what we needed most in life and filed in all the missing gaps.
You may not know it but before you arrived, you mother would be up in the middle of the night, reliving her childhood through nightmares. The doctors said it was because she was missing something in her present. Well, after we adopted you, those dreams went away. Alex, you made both of our hearts swell with content which is why I can’t imagine life without you!
But somehow, I am going to get by but I want you both to know that it will not be easy for me and I hope you never forget me!
With all the love that I posses,
Madre
Carmen
Shane looked up at her daughter and shook her head.
Shane: How could she? Just leave us!
Alex: I don’t know mom.
Shane’s face was covered in tears. She then broke down and reached out for Alex. Alex took her into her arms and held her mother close. Shane pulled the teen into bed with her.
Alex: Mom, she was pregnant.
Shane looked up at Alex.
Shane: She left us.
Alex nodded and they both cried together.
Shane couldn’t believe that Carmen had left, she couldn’t believe that she was going to have their baby. She couldn’t believe that Alex was being so sturdy for her, if anything she should be comforting Alex. But no, Alex looked down at her with strong eyes.
Alex: We’ll get through this mom, we’ll do this together. Stick by each other, remember?
Shane: Thank you so much for saving me, but honey thanks for saving your Madre and the baby! I know that took a lot of courage.
Alex: I wasn’t gonna leave you there and I knew that if Madre went in, all three of you would never come out. There was no option.
Shane cried and clung to her daughter. Alice walked in, crying.
Shane: Alice?
Alice: Alex called me up, filled me in. I spent all day looking for her. Wherever she is, it’s not in LA and she definitely doesn’t want to be found. Thank god you two are okay!
Shane: where’s Lara?
Alice: Still looking.
Alice went over and hugged each of them.
Alice: I envy you two because no matter what, you two will always have each other.
Shane looked down at Alex and she knew that no matter what, Alex would always be there to lean on. She already missed Carmen but now, as much as she still loved her, she knew Carmen was in her past. Right now, it was her and Alex against the World.
A/N: Thank you all again for reading! I know it’s not the happy ending you all anticipated, but it leaves room for a sequel? Well all I know is that this is where I wanted this part to end so now, I’m gonna take a break. I’m in the middle of writing a movie then we’ll cast and shoot it. It’s one of my summer projects. SO here it lays, the final chapter of Part 1 of Traced in the Stars that I post on my birthday! So umnm once again, thanks to everyone for reading and supporting I hope you all enjoyed it as much as I did. You will definitely hear from me again but until then, I wish you all a happy and healthy summer! May you always let your imagination soar!
-AlexM
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Man! that was really sad. i hope carmen comes back. I really like this story, good luck with your movie. and happy birthday!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
For not being a Shane and Carmen fan, I really enjoyed this fic. Gosh! Shane got over Carmen quick. Good luck with the movie. HAPPY B-Day!!
what! how can it just end like that? Shane can just know that carmen is “in the past.” it’s a really great story and I really hate to see it end this way. Happy birthday
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BABY-GIRL!!!!!!!I love this story it fuckin’ kick ass!! I really don’t want to see this end . . . and so sadly :( . . . Shane can’t just let Carmen go like that . . . I have faith that those two are gonna’ find each other with Alex’s help, of course!! I’m excited for this sequel, don’t keep us waiting for too long!! Good luck with that movie, I’m sure it’s gonna’ be off the fuckin’ chain!!! And again, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!”, and like always, LYLAS ;-p
Happy birthday beautiful!! I heart you!! Can’t wait for Rush tomorrow and wow! what a great story u loser! xoxoxo
Happy Birthday TODAY WAS amazing had lots of fun hope u liked ur presants um i liked the last chapter but HATE you for making me wait to read them 6 fucking hours its just not nice ARHHH and after that awesome present and everything… HAPPY B-DAY
That was great and I can’t wait for the sequel I think that would be better in some way thanks for all the great updates good luck with the movie and happy birthday and please post a sequel soon I loved every bit of it
Please write a sequel!!!!! i’ll die without one..jk
Happy birthday and I hope to read the sequel soon. you did a great story! Enjoy your summer!