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True love – Chapter 21
Shane’s POV
It was 7 a.m now and we were sitting here for 2 hours now. I looked over to Carmen who smiled at me happily. She leaned forward and kissed me softly. She pulled back only a few inches so that the gap between us was so small that I could still feel her breath. This time I leaned forward to her and gave her a kiss. It was impossible for me to resist. It was like holding up to fingers vis-à-vis and trying to avoid that the fingers close the gap. I really don’t know how to explain why it seems to be impossible, but it is. Well at least I can explain why I can’t resist Carmen.
Carmen: “It’s not that I don’t like to spend time with you…”
Shane: “But?”
I looked at her with my puppy dog eyes because I knew that they always made her melt.
Carmen: “Aww, come on, babe. Don’t look at me like that.”
Shane: “What? I’m not doing anything.”
I continued to look at her like a puppy that just has been kicked. To defend herself she put her hands on her eyes so that my gaze couldn’t influence her anymore, which made me chuckle. Suddenly she gave me a severe look which muted me immediately.
Carmen: “Shane, baby, you have an appointement in 45 minutes, you should get dressed and I’ll make you some pancakes, okay?”
Shane: “I just had breakfast.”
Carmen: “That was two hours ago. Come on, you need to eat something. You can’t go to the physiotherapy with nothing in your stomach.”
Shane: “I just ate a bowl of cereals and fruits.”
This time she was the one giving me a pitiful pleading look.
Shane: “Hey! You’re using my tactic!”
Carmen: “Does it work?”
I looked at her again and had to admit that my own tactic works pretty well on me, too. You just can’t resist you lover’s pleading gaze.
Shane: “It worked.”
She grinned and gave me a quick kiss before she stood up and helped me up.
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(38 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
well worth the wait! a cliff, you sure know how to get that hook in deep!! :)
oh my god enough with the cliff hangers, you are killing me…lol…i have to admit that i could stop laughing when i read the “you want me to rape her” comment…cant wait for the next chapter! PPS
hey landon, the one thing i really dislike to see in your fic is a cliffhanger, lol. thanks for the update, great as always :) i laugh when carmen asked alice for the rape… i have no idea how carmen managed but if i were she i’d really rape her~!! and its funny to read that carmen checked/ tidy her look after shane left the kitchen, lol. PPS!!
oh, i forgot to say (this is a bit annoying)… is the noddle soufflé done? when shane asked carmen to wait i was thinking if she’s going to fix the noddle soufflé, lol~ maybe i was hungry all i could think was food, lol