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    Ugly Duckling Turn Into A Swan ( My Version) Chapter 5

     

    Dana calls Alice.

     

    Dana: “Hey Al

     

    Alice: “Hey Dana wow you sound so happy, did you win the lottery?”

     

    Dana: “Well no I was just thinking you want to hangout tonight to watch a movie at your house”

     

    Alice: “That a great idea, I was just thinking just now what I m suppose to do for tonight. Thank you for saving me.

     

    Dana: “Ok it a date then, see you at like 7 if it ok”

     

    Alice: “Yep that will be great”.

     

    Dana: “Ok bye bye babe”

     

    Before Alice could answer back, Dana happily shut the phone and suddenly realizes what she had just said. Date and babe she thought, I just hope she would feel the same about me.

     

    Shane’s house.

     

    Shane was freshly bathed and dresses in a black pants and a white button down shirt and a black tie loosely around her neck and her hair messily style to perfection.

     

    I look good Shane said to herself and put on her tennis shoes and grab her keys as she went out the door.

     

    Front of Mercedes house.

     

    Shane still in the car.

     

    Shane: “Ok calm down deep breath”

     

    After Shane got enough courage, she got out of the car and walks to the porch and knocks on the door.

     

    ??? : “I will get it”

     

    Shane heard someone shout from the other side of the door.

     

    Carmen slutty sister: “Hello and you are”

     

    Shane: “Yeah I m Shane, is Carmen home”

     

    Carmen slutty sister keep her eyes transfixed on the sexy Shane.

     

    “Yeah she is come in; she will take a long time trust me” Carmen slutty sister said.

     

    Shane just nods her head and step into Moralez household.

     

    It was really noisy inside and when Shane appears into their view everybody went quiet.

     

    Shane stand there nervously as everybody stare at her.

    Maria was walking down the stairs and saw Shane and she went to greet her.

     

    Maria: “Hey Shane”

     

    Shane: “Oh hi Maria”

     

    They hug and kiss on the cheek.

     

    Maria: “Don’t worry Carmen will be down here soon”

    Comments

    1. I love this story, but could you please get someone to edit it before you post because the incorrect english tenses are kind of annoying and distract from the story.

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