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    Ugly Duckling Turn Into A Swan ( My Version) Chapter 5

    They were standing close in the crowded place looking at the posters.

    Carmen: “Well … I want to see that one”

     

    Carmen happily pointed at a scary movie poster.

     

    Shane face went pale because she hate scary movie and not to mention that she sleep alone in an apartment.

     

    But who she was to reject Carmen wishes and Shane complied buying the ticket and the popcorn.

     

    Carmen: “Let go”

     

    Shane: (Weakly) “yeah”

     

    After the movie

     

    Carmen came out laughing.

     

    Carmen: You should have told me you are afraid of scary movie Shane. So that way you wouldn’t have screamed like a little girl in there.

     

    Shane pouted and cross her arms.

     

    Carmen: “Oh come here”

     

    Carmen grabs Shane arms and pulled Shane close to her and kissed her cheeks.

     

    “Does that make you feel better”, Carmen asks.

     

    Shane shakes her head no; but just as Carmen was going to give Shane more kisses a muscular jock purposely ran into Carmen causing her drink to spilled all over her.

     

    The jock turn back and jokingly said a sorry and went back to a group of girls that Shane recognizes. It was same group of girls from the gyms that was always all over her, main one Rachael.

     

    Shane: “It ok, let go to the bathroom to get you all clean up”

     

    Carmen huffed defeated the one day she hangout with Shane was the day she spilled a drink on her self.

     

    Inside the empty bathroom.

     

    Shane: “God that guy was an asshole he purposely do that to you”

     

    Carmen: “It ok it was an accident”

     

    Shane: “No it was not”

     

    Shane said as she slowly wipes Carmen cleavage unconsciously as Carmen clean the mess up make up on her face.

     

    Second later Shane was blushing as she realize what she was doing. Staring at Carmen asset and touching them actually cleaning them.

     

    Carmen: “Ok I think I got all of it”

     

    Shane: “Nope a little smudge here”

     

    Shane said as she got close to Carmen and wipes it off. After gotten the smudge Shane remain close to Carmen looking her in her eyes. The butterflies in Carmen stomach was going crazy as she stare back into the perfect sparkling green eyes. Shane looks up and loses Carmen hair that was tie up. Carmen hair was long and wavy and in that instant Shane thought she have never see anything this beautiful and so perfect.

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    1. I love this story, but could you please get someone to edit it before you post because the incorrect english tenses are kind of annoying and distract from the story.

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