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UNBREAKABLE CH NINETEEN
CHAPTER 19
The moment Tina and Angie walked into the apartment, Tina knew something was wrong.
Terribly wrong…
The smell of whiskey was almost overwhelming…
"No!" Tina thought "No…Please……not tonight…"
Her eyes frantically searched the room for Henry – She couldn’t see him anywhere….
"Mommy?" Angie whispered, clinging to her mother’s leg…
Tina reached her hand down and touched her little girl in an attempt to relax her..
"Henry’s mad again, isn’t he?" She quietly asked.
"I don’t know baby…. I don’t kn…" Tina’s answer trailed off as Henry appeared in the doorway of their bedroom…
He looked scarier than Tina had ever seen him before…His hair was wild, his shirt untucked, the sleeves rolled up…
He smelled like a distillery. But his eyes….. The obvious blaze in his eyes sent tremors down Tina’s spine…
His dark eyes were almost black with rage, the whites of them had become bloodshot from the booze…
To Tina they looked like the eyes of something pure evil.
"Well, well, well.." Henry slurred, leaning against the door frame, crossing his arms over his chest…
"Look who decided to come home!"
"Henry," Tina whispered, as she and Angie slowly backed away…
"Angelica, go to your room!" Henry ordered.
The little girl didn’t move an inch.
"I said go to your room!!" Henry repeated louder.
"Daddy….." Angie whispered, tears falling down her cheeks.
"NOW!!" Henry roared, taking a few steps forward…
Just then Mikey opened his door…
"Dad…. Dad, you promised you were just gonna talk…"
"Shut up boy!! – I know what I said!" Henry cut him off, never taking his eyes off Tina.
"Angie, come over here with me" Mikey said.
Tina looked down at her daughter and tried to smile.
"It’s ok peanut, go over with Mikey…Daddy and I are just gonna talk…. that’s all" Tina tried to sound reassuring.
Reluctantly, Angie let go of her mother and slowly walked over to where her brother was. They went back into Mikey’s room, but didn’t close the door all the way. Just in case……
"So" Henry said, "did you enjoy your day with your dyke friend?"
"Henry…. don’t call her that."
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NOOoooooo, IILWT… you didn’t just stop there! That’s just pure mean! You gotta post real soon, please.
Oh that is so bad. Bad for Tina and bad for us that you stopped there. Wow poor Tina I hope she’s able to turn this around somehow. Thanks for the chapter
Oh that is so bad. Bad for Tina and bad for us that you stopped there. Wow poor Tina I hope she’s able to turn this around somehow. Thanks for the chapter
Grrrrrrrrrr I feel sick to my stomach reading this but you got me hooked damn it!! I just wish Bette could swoop in and take her away from all of this…Great writing even though I find it very difficult to read…PPS
NOOOOO!!! Please post soon!!! I can’t take this; my stomach just dropped and you’ve got me worried sick! C’mon Mikey, grow some fucking balls and call those bloody detectives already! LIKE NOW!
Arghhh this just sucks for Tina. If Bette only knew!!!!
I have to comment again because I couldn’t sleep well last night. This story keeps invading my thoughts and has made me painfully aware of domestic violence and the damage it does. Men who beat women (or women who beat men) are just bloody cowards and should not be allowed to breathe!
(heavy shigh)…
This is a fucking bad and sad, hope Bette come in time and save Tina and kick that baster ass. PPS!
Oh you’re so mean! Pleae don’t let it be bad! I just knew this would happen. Damn Henry. Thank you for this story.
you have got to be kidding? How could you end the chapter righ tat that spot?I will not be able to sleep untill I read what happens next please you gotta post soon or I will be walking around like a zombie. Awesome story by the way totally keeps me on the edge of my seat.
She should Bobbit him
No no no gosh!!!
*GASP*