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Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (10)
right then if you’ve never read any of my ***** b4 i suggest that you have a crack at the previous chapters of this story because it would be mighty confusing if you didnt ; )
rebuttal ~
Hi5 ~ sorry that i stopped writing after you decided to comment if your still around i would love for you to comment again and really there were about 18 or so comments last time so i see it like this. if i write these stories for comments then this story is written one 18th for you ;) take care and have fun
boney~ hey lol profanities in the vent well i think i cucked some in here just for you ;) take care hope your still looking at the sight and take the time to glance at this
booTeeful ~ lol yup arse kicking aboud this isnt quite finnished yet but hey its about 3 times as long as my usual posts so yeah … have fun ; ) (i like the idea of tee in denim and leather too)
Gina ~ lol one of the reasons that i bother with this story is to make ppl laugh. that you said that you did laugh brings a little light to my day. Tankyou
Incendiary ~ you know to some degree this post is all your fault ;)
JanetMG ~ did you say something aobut not holding your breath? wel thank god because your right i would have been responsible for deaths….. lol hope you catch this i know your still around ; )
alexandra ~ mate i hope youre around to read this. Yeah im an “L” lady Lol my name is Lucy. its longer but not sooner. take care
Ness ~ lol thankyou for saying i made you grin *blushes and feels all warm inside* no i was nowhere near the cyclond im from down south (no pun) victoria and the weather is ***** freezing. lol hope your haing fun ; )
TheReal JLO ~ lol mirror writing is basicaly writing what you would see if you held normal writing up in a mirror. so basicaly you write it and it looks normal if you then hold the piece of paper up to the light and look at it from behind. anyway i hope your still around to read this ; ) take care mate
Phonix ~ well it looks like you’re about to see what happens when the forces converge if you’re still around to see it. : ) thanks sooooo much for the comment.
Think pink ~ oh wow thankyou so much for your comment and now i feel bad that i have let you down by not posting for so long. thanks and i hope you get a chance to read this ;)
Mr.Piddles ~ thanks so much for your comment and your email. i dedicate this piece half to you because i can honestly say it probably wouldnt have been written if i hadent glanced over your email while in hospital. thanks mate
Windrider ~ lol i love the egg metaphores. heh thanks for the comment. i hope you get a chance to read this. Thankyou
im me ~ lol i like the idea of putting images in ppls heads thanks sooo much for the comment. Take care mate
Mr.Piddles ~ again mate thanks
IF YOU READ THEN COMMENT
now on with the show
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Tina knocked on the door not surprised when she saw a huge guy open it. Like seriously huge. 7 foot tall huge. Holy ***** Tina thought to herself with an internal smile. Where the ***** did Dana find these guys? She must have some weird trial breeding between humans and bears in the basement Tina felt like she didnt care what happened tonight. There was just something in her that wanted this ***** to be over.
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LB, you have a new fan, I do have to say you are up there with jade/janet and windrider, and if there are any other writers that have twisted plots then please tell me. I love these stories maybe you should pair up with jade god knows she needs to come back. You know I’m a B/T fan put i get so fucking sick of tina as a granola. It’s about time someone gave her some balls, and Dana fucking funny, I always knew she had a 9mm in her tennis bag.Bette in the air vent had me on the ground and the rat just added to it. And thank god someone finally shot Bette why didn’t tina say anything like haha or you know something funny, anyways. I hope you post soon. There are so many other things I want to say the whole marina thing in the bushes wow she is a crazy chick. And LB were can I get a vest like tina had that might come in handy one of these days for me.
LB just wondering how your golf game was going, I just started playing, ok I’m lieing, I just like to drive the cart around and leave big ruts in the green grass, so far have broken 2 windows and can hit the ball about 100 ft, it’s getting better, I’m having a blast.
about flipping time you came back. I am in south Vic too… maybe we are nearby each other, and don’t even know it. Well… I remember why i love your writing. I am officially rehooked, and not so patiently awaiting the next chapter. I am guessing that bette is now dead from Shane’s shot…… so, you really are killing them one by one? hee hee… good plan, and I can’t wait to see who cops it next time. LOL post again soon, if you can…. and I hope that the accidents stop coming your way.
please somone comment or i will cry ….. or write me at: katya_114@hotmail.com
good chapter, although i think need to look at the previous chapters to follow the story. but please continue, i am interested to see what happens.
I was laughing my ass off. And yes, we Yankees understand centimeters and millimeters
Yay you’re back! It was as good as ever. Please post again soon…
Well I’m still here and I still love the story. Good Job.
DUUUUUDEEE!!! ur bak! hellz yea this is partly my fault! ur humour is too much sometimes seriously u crack me up, I love Bette gettin shot multiple times, having her as a weak charecter totally fits who she actually is (I realise I may get lynched for that comment!)
I mean this in the best way possible but hopefully u will take ur time healin.. dont wanna get bak in the fray too soon yunno, chill out a little let the creativity run free!! rite enuff yabberin.. Dana is still a hott bitch oh and wtf is Alice!!!! long live Marina!
See ya on the otherside LB MWAH!!
The amazing ladybiege is back!!! you have made my week! Great chapter, keep em coming!
ok so this is the first time I have read your story so why am I sitting laughing my ass off, I don’t know but this was some funny ass shit. I will be back to comment again after I read the story from the start, I hope you go on I hate when you get into a story and the writer goes MIA
mad crazy but i’m loving it, update soon.
Awesome…I just read all your posts and the story got better and better…glad to see you carried this one on…and I am gonna guess that Alice and Bette aren’t your favorite characters????…anyhow…keep it coming