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Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (10)
Tina saw
Shane regained her breath. She had no idea that Tina was behind her.
Well then tell me Shane she said smiling reassuringly. It almost sounded like a mother talking to her child.
Shane had no idea where to begin. Did
I think Tina killed my father Shane said simply, for some reason glaring at
Well that wasnt the answer I was expecting
Shane laughed. That crazy insane laughter that you sometimes hear at the dentist when someone is in pain they just dont give a *****. She had no idea why she was laughing but she justified it with the fact that if the situation was crazy, why couldnt she be?
You think it took you by surprise Shane said coolly and fell silent. She wondered where
Shane if you didnt want anyone else to die then think about it, why let yourself die?
Shane had to admit the woman made a bloody good point. She lowered the gun
Tina saw Shane let her arm drop. If Shane had shot herself then Tina would have considered it blood on her own hands. Tina piped up Well thank god for that. Shane heard Tina and spun around. The sight she took in was unimaginable. There was Tina with blood oozing out of her chest. Tina who should be cold and dead right now. Tina who has been lying on the floor last time Shane had looked. And it wasnt like Tina was just barely alive groaning and gurgling, nup here she was standing actually smiling. Shane felt light headed. A groan of pain from Dana sent her over the edge. Her eyes rolled back into her head and she felt as if her mind was slipping away from her. As she hit the floor her weapon discharged a single round. Shanes finger had still been against the trigger. Betts body gave a jerk as she was hit.
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LB, you have a new fan, I do have to say you are up there with jade/janet and windrider, and if there are any other writers that have twisted plots then please tell me. I love these stories maybe you should pair up with jade god knows she needs to come back. You know I’m a B/T fan put i get so fucking sick of tina as a granola. It’s about time someone gave her some balls, and Dana fucking funny, I always knew she had a 9mm in her tennis bag.Bette in the air vent had me on the ground and the rat just added to it. And thank god someone finally shot Bette why didn’t tina say anything like haha or you know something funny, anyways. I hope you post soon. There are so many other things I want to say the whole marina thing in the bushes wow she is a crazy chick. And LB were can I get a vest like tina had that might come in handy one of these days for me.
LB just wondering how your golf game was going, I just started playing, ok I’m lieing, I just like to drive the cart around and leave big ruts in the green grass, so far have broken 2 windows and can hit the ball about 100 ft, it’s getting better, I’m having a blast.
about flipping time you came back. I am in south Vic too… maybe we are nearby each other, and don’t even know it. Well… I remember why i love your writing. I am officially rehooked, and not so patiently awaiting the next chapter. I am guessing that bette is now dead from Shane’s shot…… so, you really are killing them one by one? hee hee… good plan, and I can’t wait to see who cops it next time. LOL post again soon, if you can…. and I hope that the accidents stop coming your way.
please somone comment or i will cry ….. or write me at: katya_114@hotmail.com
good chapter, although i think need to look at the previous chapters to follow the story. but please continue, i am interested to see what happens.
I was laughing my ass off. And yes, we Yankees understand centimeters and millimeters
Yay you’re back! It was as good as ever. Please post again soon…
Well I’m still here and I still love the story. Good Job.
DUUUUUDEEE!!! ur bak! hellz yea this is partly my fault! ur humour is too much sometimes seriously u crack me up, I love Bette gettin shot multiple times, having her as a weak charecter totally fits who she actually is (I realise I may get lynched for that comment!)
I mean this in the best way possible but hopefully u will take ur time healin.. dont wanna get bak in the fray too soon yunno, chill out a little let the creativity run free!! rite enuff yabberin.. Dana is still a hott bitch oh and wtf is Alice!!!! long live Marina!
See ya on the otherside LB MWAH!!
The amazing ladybiege is back!!! you have made my week! Great chapter, keep em coming!
ok so this is the first time I have read your story so why am I sitting laughing my ass off, I don’t know but this was some funny ass shit. I will be back to comment again after I read the story from the start, I hope you go on I hate when you get into a story and the writer goes MIA
mad crazy but i’m loving it, update soon.
Awesome…I just read all your posts and the story got better and better…glad to see you carried this one on…and I am gonna guess that Alice and Bette aren’t your favorite characters????…anyhow…keep it coming