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    Window of Opportunity ch.37

    I took her into my arms and felt her finally relax as I held her. Her crying didn’t subside and I stroked her hair and knew that we had just passed our first test. Of the things that could have derailed us, Candace Jewell would have been it. I held her for more than an hour with neither of us talking. I thought she had finally fallen asleep but she looked up at me with tears in her eyes.

    “Are we really ok?”

    “Yes we are. I love you. Tonight doesn’t change that at all. I’m just so glad that I was here when you got back. Baby, why don’t you look in your rolodex and see if you have Suzanne’s card in there? You’ve told me what happened tonight and if you want to talk to her, I think it would be a good idea. You and I have not had the conversations that you’ve had with her about what happened with Candace and she knows you and may be able to give you some insight on how to handle this. I don’t think that you need to worry about it any longer. In my mind, it’s over.”

    “You’re ok if I call her?”

    “If something big happened to me would you be ok if I called Dan?”

    “As much as I’m surprised to hear myself say this, yeah I would be. I know you tell me about your sessions but I know that you don’t tell me word for word so he probably knows a lot more about some things.”

    “Exactly. All I can ask of you is that you come to me first and let me try to help but still have your other options available. Bette, unless you let this consume you, we made it through it.”

    She sat up and hugged me. Even with tear stained cheeks, swollen eyes and a runny nose, she was still so beautiful.

    “I think I will call Suzanne if you’re sure you’re ok with it.”

    “Go clean yourself up and call her. I’ll get something together for you to eat and although I know you’re going to say you’re not hungry, not eating isn’t an option.”

    “Thank you T.”

    “There is no reason to thank me. I love you and part of that love is being here to support you.”

    Comments

    1. I am savoring the back-to-back postings. What a treat! I love your writing style and find myself rereading paragraphs. Thanks for all the updates and enjoy the rest of your break!

    2. By some strange coincidence…you often write something that touches deep within my soul and that makes it extremely heartfelt. Amazing. Thank you again for writing.

    3. As always another truely amazing post! I so what you mean with the painting and friends and booze…just say you couldn’t decide which color, it worked for me for awhile anyway! lol Hope you had fun at lunch:)

    4. The od Bette needs to come out at times. Having a temper doesn;t not hurt, Now she will need to get a new phone.so in a way she hurt herself..Glad that Tina was so supportive of Bette then she explain to Bette about what she said It was the doing not what she couldnt control. thanks

    5. Wow, I am sooooo glad that you had some extra time to write this. I am awestruck at your ability to write like this in such a short amount of time. This was a beautiful chapter demonstrating just how far they have come with their communiction. I am always left with wanting more of this story and yet you haven’t teased me once with a cliff hanger…the mark of a really good story teller!

    6. Great challenge to the relationship and it all worked out so smoothly — at least for these two. I hope these two get a break though – Kit’s right — they deserve a moment without additional stress. Anxiously awaiting family day and how they are going to tell the girls….

    7. Bette lost it for a second but pulled it together when she saw that Tina was 100% behind her and believed she did nothing to encourage Candace. Great chapter can’t wait for what comes next. PPS

    8. Awesome as usual..yeah painting, BF and wine don’t mix well. I found that out with cooking :) Have fun with your lunch, and just take it easy. Anybody ask about your painting..just say its abstract..:) PPS

    9. another great update! enjoy lunch! wow if candance causes to much trouble the gang will have to step in case tina needs a hand. cuz tina will sure take care of her if need be! :)

    10. WOW, you’re on a roll, newagegirl! I haven’t even managed to leave a comment yet to your last two, long and enjoyable chapters but then you came up with another good one. Talk about prolificness! I’m really amazed. You write when you’re under pressure from your important project, in the middle of the night when you can’t sleep, when you’re pissed off because of botched weekend plans and before or after painting your kitchen. WOW! I salute you, newagegirl! Btw, a million thanks for granting my requests! You know, I started squealing when I read Tina and Bette’s recollection of the night when they first made love. I was beside myself with joy because that’s what I wanted to read and you granted my wish! And you followed it up with the account of their first out-of-town trip to Moscow, Kentucky! Excuse my language but holy sh*t, this just keeps getting better and betterer!!! This chapter’s a good test for them. Ghosts from their past are bound to haunt them but the difference now is how they react to them, how they handle the tricky situations individually and together. Looking forward to the Saturday barbeque. :> I’m keeping my fingers crossed that the beautiful memories of their rings, their commitment ceremony will be in one of the next envelopes. This could segue way into the bitter, painful memory of the day they stopped wearing those rings. Thanks a lot for this update, newagegirl! And may your Muse continue to inspire you whatever real life crisis or inanities you’re dealing with right now. PPS. :>

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