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    Wings of An Angel – Bette and Tina – Chapter 10

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by Leo Paradise.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60478
    Author Notes:

    Just another love story from the beginning.

     

    The accusation of this being Johns fault could be felt and heard by the sudden tension snapping in the wind.  John turned his back on his partner and spoke, Nick, take the crew to the site to begin the emergency evacuation and I will be along shortly.  John continued to stand with his back to Mike after the team left the station five minutes prior.  Patiently waiting for his flared temper to calm down, John turned to Mike and asked, What would you have me do Mike?  Allow a childs blood to be on our hands knowing full well that we could have prevented his death.  Do you honestly think that a woman of high standard, such as Bette, would take a second thought to stop and think of the consequence of risking her life for the sake of saving someones life?  John stood mere inches from Mike with his fists planted loosely at his sides and strongly recommended, Dont you ever question my ability to do my job again; this company is my life.  We sacrificed time to be without our families for hours on end while they waited patiently at home for us every single night.  We put a lot of sweat and tears into this business and I will be damned to take the responsibility of this unfortunate incident alone.  John walked backwards to the door and before leaving stated uncaringly, You can either make yourself useful and help or just go home.  What ever your decision, I have a job to do.  Both men knew that this one fatal mistake could be the end of their hard working careers.

     

    John retreated from Mike with urgency for they both knew that an altercation between friends was not warranted at this critical point in time.  Mike continued to stand at the empty hull of his impending sinking ship; a ship that would soon be covered with bad publicity, unemployment, sunken assets and the ruination of ten years of respected hard earned reputation.  This cant be happening to me.  This is not my fault.  We did everything possible to avoid any type of error.  I dont make mistakes.    What are you saying Mike.  You know damn well that John wouldnt destroy our business.  This company is our life.  The feeling of guilt began to take over the feeling of fear as Mike remembered the unbelievable look on Johns face with the accusation slapping him in the face, Mike knew he was sorry.  Blaming John entirely for this horrendous situation was not the answer to rectifying this accidental mishap, after all, it was their company; therefore, their problem to fix.  Than why the hell am I still standing here.  With heavy laden shoulders and legs, Mike walked towards the door to exit into the disturbed culture of the underworld.  As he progressed, his eyes caught sight of the silent technological device that caused havoc with his life and many others.  Blunders of this magnitude are not supposed to happen.

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    2. I actually have to agree with slipperynipple. I like this story and love how you don’t just rush through things (unlike IC & Co. since they only have a maximum of 60 minutes a week to play with), but I actually had to keep stopping while reading this so I wouldn’t wear myself out. Introducing the supernatural was a good idea seeing as it would take a miracle for someone to come out of an incident like that alive.

    5. I found your story today and spent my afternoon reading it. This is intriguing me. The thing I am most curious about is the little boy, something is weird with that situation. I am wondering if this is going to be an adventure like the movie “What dreams may come.” Will we find the little boy helping Tina face the Angel of Death? This story is also reminding me of Stephen king’s book “Rose Madder.” Although I really enjoy this story and your writing is great I would have to agree with slipperynipple about the length in certain parts. It can take away from the story. other than that I am enjoying it, please continue!

    6. Cool! I seem to be drifting into the dark side of the world lately. The fight between Tina and the Dark Lord was intriguing. The Angel of Life just seemed to stand their and let Tina fight for Bette. The only time that you saw it or it was mentioned was when they were running down the hall and that Angel was running beside Bette. It will take all that Tina can give to Bette to keep her alive. Please post soon.

    7. Good to see you back Leo and this is good chapter. When Tina talk to the Angel of Death is scary, ok glad Bette ok now and hope she will wake up soon. OK post soon please, thanks!

    12. Leo, god damn – you have been gone so long and then you give us the chapter from hell :o)……holy christ this was intense leo – absolutely amazing. Pleas do continue – We so want more, but please not so much drama on the next one eventhought we love it :o) Post soon

    13. Well, so you disappear and then out of nowhere….BANG, after that chapter you once again have our attention…pls don’t ever go away that long again….I will assume that you are busy writing the next, and the next, and the next chapters….as you owe us big time….almost forgot….THANKYOU

    14. Ya know this will be the first time I will write this. The story is good but this was too much. I think I skipped to the ending. The middle took to long and took me along a path I was not very interested in. But believe me this does not mean that the story did not have the desired affect but sometimes less is more. Could of done without some of the death part and the construction site part. Thanks for the story

    15. Three months and thirteen days……..three months and thirteen days is how long you had a woman waiting…(its this how you threat your women)…….LE0, three months and thirteen days………..BUT it was worth the wait………….This chapter by far is your best……The struggle that Tina is going through to keep Bette where she belongs is heart felt…………The fight that she has with the Angel of Death clearly shows how in love she is with Bette and how far she will go to keep her…………..Now PLEASE let Tina win this fight so we can find out the mystery about Bette and Kit………..WE want a happy ending………Now I’ll only waiting THREE HOURS AND THIRTEEN MINUTES this time…………Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    17. Leo, welcome back although it’s been WAY TOO LONG. What an ambitious and complex chapter, thank you! If you ever feel another writer’s block coming on consider writing a simpler 1 or 2 pager to keep the creative juices flowing and keep in touch with your readers.

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