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You and me – Part eight
Sit down here”, Carmen leaded Shane to the bathtub.
Shane sat waggly down at the edge of the bathtub while Carmen closed the bathroom window and let warm water in the tub.
“Okay, baby tell me how are you feeling”, Carmen said and kneed down in front of Shane.
Shane just looked at Carmen.
“Shane, I know you don’t like to complain but please tell me”, Carmen begged and stroked softly Shanes cheek.
“My head hurts, Im feeling dizzy and its cold”, Shane answered silently and looked next to her.
Carmen forced Shane to look at her and raised her eyebrows.
“Yeah and I feel sick, too”, Shane admitted childish.
“I think Tina is right. You really might have concussion”, Carmen said worried and toughed carefully Shanes wound.
Shane jerked quietly.
“Sorry, babe”, Carmen apologised and looked guilty in Shanes eyes.
“Let’s get your wet cloth off. It will be a miracle if you didnt catch a cold”, Carmen said and took of Shanes chucks.
She stood up and took of Shanes jacket, also.
“Carmenyou don’t have to do this”, Shane said shyly and looked down to the floor.
“What?”, Carmen asked astonished.
“You don’t have to do this all for me. I can do it by mys.”, Shane started but was immediately interrupted by her girlfriend
“***** Shane, I love you. And I want to make you feel better.
Don’t look like you don’t deserve it that I take care of you. It breaks my heard”, Carmen explained herself.
Shane looked thankful up to hear girlfriend, who was close to cry.
Carmen took off Shanes other close and let her sit down into the bathtub.
Her cold skin burned in the hot water.
“I’ll be back in a second, baby”, Carmen said and rushed out of the bathroom.
Carmen came back with some little candles and a lighter in her hand.
It broke her heard as she saw Shane in the bathtub.
She held her legs tight to her body and her head was resting on her knees.
Carmen was close to cry, she never saw Shane so vulnerable, but she didnt cry. All she wanted was to be strong for Shane and give her the shelter that she needs.
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Hey thanks for the story! it was great! i love Sharmen and happy endings :)
Aww…I’m all Tingling inside..thnk u 4 writing..Post so0N..
Sorry that you ended this story. You did so on a happy note thanks
I so loved the story, and I really like your writing style! You have to write another story very soon!!!!
Thanks for the story. It was wonderful I’m glad that Shane and Carmen are back. Will there be a Sequel?
Your story was so good, I liked it so much. I was just telling myself how I find your way to write so real and true. Sincerely, I’m gonna miss your story so much. I’d be able to read it forever. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
that was great I think that they are make for each other