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You Have Got to be Kidding Me Ch. 11
When Tina opened her eyes she was in a long but wide white marble hallway. The ceilings were also white marble and looked to be at least 75 feet high. Tina was in awe of the sight before her. She had the urge to touch the marble walls and did so. The feel of the marble was surprisedly smooth and not as hard as she thought. Tina walked slowly but purposely down the hallway. As she continued to walk the hallway the walls turned from marble white to black ash marble. Tina turned to touch the black ash marble wall just like she did with the white marble but stopped dead in her tracks when she felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand up and the warmest feeling come over her. She turned and meet Bette’s penetrating stare. The two were many feet apart yet there appeared to be an invisible string that irrevocably bound them together. A magnetic force that neither could see but felt. Bette purposely tried to still her movement to prevent herself from approaching Tina. They stared at each other for what seemed like hours and thought their body and soul had obey their minds but without conscious effort they were drawing closer to one another.
The realization of what was happening frightened Bette but yet she had no power to stop herself.
When Tina approached Bette she quickly but softly took Bette’s hand to re-assure her that it was okay. Tina rubbed Bette’s hand and then instinctively kissed Bette’s hand. The electricity flowed even greater between them and with a bold move Tina grabbed Bette’s neck with both hands and drew their lips together. The fierceness of that one kiss made Bette’s head spin. Bette didn’t know what cause Tina to come and she had so many questions running through her mind but Tina kissed her with such intensity and at this point their body were already mold together that Bette’s worry was secondary to her need.
That night Tina had made love to Bette much like a tornado but with firing burning every inch of Bette’s body. There was no place Tina left untouched on Bette’s body. Bette’s body screamed for release but Tina would take her to the edge and than deny her the release she desire to prolong both their pleasure. Bette was thrashing in the bed and trying to pull Tina closer to her but Tina continued to deny her release.
Bette: Oh Tee, please take me know!!!
Tina: Open your eyes babe. I need you to see me, to know the truth.
Bette: On God Tee what are you talking about! Please don’t tease meee! Oh God!!!!
Tina: Come on baby, open your eyes.
Bette obeyed Tina and forced her eyes to slowly open. The sight before her became mesmerizing. She had never really seen Tina during their lovemaking before and the realizing hit her like a tons of bricks. The vulnerability and need she saw in Tina became apparent like never before. She began to see through Tina her vulnerability and need and Tina’s vulnerability need for each other was the same. Although they may have seemed different they were infact the same.
With this knowledge Bette began to cry and climax at the same time as Tina barely touched her most sacred organ. With this slight touch Bette’s orgasm ripped through her and she felt love and lust collide with sweet concession.
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hey you!I just ended with the reading your 11 chapters.I have to admit I already love this storry! =) I think it was a great and unique idea to “tear” Tibette away from “our world”.Most of the writers on this page stick to a wellknown reality, to the world we are living, but you, you did something extraordinair!All I can say: go ahead and post ASAP! and thank you very much. =)
Ok, where is the rest of it? Surely there is more than 1 1/2 pages?! See, the price you pay for writing an awesome story!!!
i still don”t trust hrt mothrt… great update… pps
TiBette are on a interesting adventure indeed. Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments.
WOW!PPS
WOW that was great and love it. Hope they will talk and work things out. Please post more, thanks!
This stuff rock!!!! So dig the story line.
if only there was a “thud” here
“With this slight touch Bette’s orgasm ripped through her and she felt love and lust collide with sweet concession.”, If for some reason you cannot find Bette again, give ME a call. Great update. I am enjoying this adventure.
Great update! :o)
Yes! You updated. Thank you that was an amazing update. Love it :)