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Young Love: Chapter Thirteen
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“I think that’s him,” Carmen sat up from the curb and rubbed her hands over her butt. Shane flicked her cigarette and exhaled the smoke. She stood up and fixed her shirt. “Do you really want to do this? We don’t have to.”
“No,” Shane shook her head. “I want to do this.” The white Range Rover pulled up to the curb and stopped. Drew jumped out and walked around. He smiled when he saw Carmen.
“Hey,” Carmen smiled back.
“Hi.” He looked over at Shane.
“Who is this?” Carmen wrapped her arm around Shane’s waist.
“This is Shane—this is my girlfriend.” Drew looked at Carmen and then at Shane.
“Girlfriend? What do you mean? I thought you were dating someone.”
Carmen smiled. “I am dating someone, it’s Shane.” Shane looked over at Drew with a smile.
“So you’re a dyke?” Drew looked at the two of them. Carmen scuffed.
“I think the proper word for it is lesbian.”
“I-I don’t see anything wrong with that.” He smirked nervously. “We can still go out if we want.”
“Umm—I think we’ll take a rain check Drew.” Shane nodded. “Thanks for the invite man,” she smiled.
“See ya,” Carmen waved at him, and they walked away to Shane’s car. Drew stood there, completely mystified as they walked off.
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“Do you want to move in with me?”
Bette looked at Helena. “What?” Helena grinned.
“Do you want to move in with me?” Bette sighed as she lay in her bed, and Helena sat next to her.
“I-I don’t know, I mean—don’t you think it’s too soon to ask me that. We’ve only been dating for almost two weeks now.”
“I know it’s soon, but I thought I ask. I mean—it’ll just be me and you. Aren’t you ready to get out on your own?”
“I do, but can you give me some time to think about it?”
“Yeah sure,” Helena nodded, and Bette grabbed her hand.
“I’m not mad are you?” Helena shook her head and smiled.
“No–of course not, I couldn’t get mad at you.” Bette sat up and pushed Helena’s hair off her shoulder. She kissed the outside of her mouth, and Helena turned towards Bette. She kissed her softly and pulled away. “Take off your shirt.”
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Aki didnt expect a chapter today, and I liked it. Poor Al having to hide when Sharon comes and leaves before saying bye to Dana. Shane is really into Carmen and you see a softer side to Shane, she is cool, and loyal to her friends and family but she finally sound somehting worth while and its Carmem. And I always love to leave my fav couple for the last…I see that Bette and Helena are realing falling for one another. Cause it was so sweet,loving and tender when all Helena wanted to do was just lay on the bed hugging and feeling Bettes skin on her’s nothing more, that was sweet. GReat chapter aki.
“She rubbed her nose against hers, and Carmen giggled softly.” Okay, that’s gotta be one of the cutest lines I’ve ever read. Digging the story.
I loved it, didn’t expect a post today, but I’m glad. Love Shane’s softer side, and Helena and Bette are cute. Poor Al, but if she loves her she has to be patient.
I loved it, didn’t expect a post today, but I’m glad. Love Shane’s softer side, and Helena and Bette are cute. Poor Al, but if she loves her she has to be patient.
great update! love reading your stuff!
Akira, nice move of how you got rid of Drew. Shane’s little love confession made sense. I wonder if it is too soon for B to move in with H. Though, it was great to see everyone helping H move. What a nice group of friends! A stood out again with all her complaints and I loved it. Any Danish interruptions were fine with me. It would just make the final connection so much better. You are right those two were so cute. I can never read enough about Danish love. Thank you Akira.
great chapter, loved it as usual:)
love this story!!!!! i feel a little sorry for alice though i cant help feel shes gunna get hurt is she?!!? lol hope not neways ur story rocks!!
shane’s confession is sweet, then they are getting closer to the bedroom? no, i mean it’s time for carmen to confess, it’d be super sweet too :)PPS!!