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Neighbors–Ch. 1
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Neighbors CH. 1
Dean was having a good time he didn’t think he would, Shane practically had to drag him out to this bar, which if you knew Shane didn’t happen very often. He had just broken up with his girlfriend it was mutual break but Shane thought that going to a bar was a good way to celebrate. So they drove inland to some bar in Hollywood, Shane had wanted to check out a band that’d be playing there so they drove for a little over forty minutes to check them out. The bar had a lot of nice looking girls, Shane always had a knack for finding hot women. Right now he was sitting at their table nursing the same beer for the past hour and a half Shane went over to the bar to get another beer but somehow ended up talking really close to some hot brunette at the bar. He wasn’t lonely for too long after Shane left he was now talking to Donna and her friend Liz they had just started their second year of college and were thinking about pledging to a sorority. They were really good looking and were good company but they weren’t Dean’s type. Donna was getting kind of drunk and was starting to get a little too friendly Liz on the other hand didn’t need alcohol to make her move. She had suggested that they leave and go somewhere more private he could of left with her but unlike Shane he wasn’t really big on one night stands.
Every so often he’d look over to make sure Shane was okay, they had been best friends since kindergarten when Robbie Barnes had pushed him on the ground and Shane came to his rescue. Now it was the other way around Dean was 6’1 and in very good shape. His height and broad shoulders were inherited from his dad but thankfully that was all he inherited from him at least that’s the way he saw it. Even though he was only seventeen it was easy to mistake him for some one older. Whenever they went out together Shane was popular with the ladies but not so much with their boyfriends so he always made sure she was okay.
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Like the story :-). Looking forward to the next chapter.
Love this beginning and can’t wait for the next chapter
this looks real good
Oh yeah, I’m gonna like this one…
Dude, I already feel the obsession beginning Wonderful start. PPS
wonderful new story…i can see bette and tina, dean and claire, cool :)
Great start I can’t wait for an update. :)
I’m hooked already.
Looks good. like Dean and shane in this Bette and Tina. thanks
You are fast becoming one of my favoritest (I know not a word, but it fits) authors. I do hope that you will continue with this story along with your other one. Good luck in school and have fun.
This is a very interesting start… I can’t wait until the next chapter of this story and your other story.
loving this story please post soon
This is interesting and good start, I like it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Different twist on things, but knowing you were going to love it. Now for Tina and Bette to meet. Bette has a daughter, no mention of husband, or Tina. I know you’ll fill us in as we go along.
Awesome beginning! Please post the next chapter soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn… can’t wait… glad school is going well!! Thank you!
This is a different twist on the story. I like it. So Tina’s straight, eh? Until she’s not (when she meets Bette).
Good start, I like it. Thank you.
Good start, I like it. Thank you.
Hey buddy! i had seen this new story of yours but didn’t have time to read it at the time and then I just forgot, sorry! But now I caught up with the first chap and am off reading the second one… It’s awesome! i love this start. Of course I totally think of Dean as a grown up Eli and it’s just fantastic to see what a wonderful young man he’s become (and still this great bond with Tina). And you think of it that way too, huh? You actually wrote Eli instead of Dean on the last page… Cute! I love the idea of a new beginning for B&T. But I’m wondering if you’re planning a love story or a brother/sister bond between Dean and Claire… We’ll see! But i love it, please continue! My only reserve is that it doesn’t take you away from Eli’s story… Thanks!