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    So much more than just a kiss…

    Story written on February 2, 2008 by JobadgeJustlovesB+T.
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    Part 1 – Tina and the kiss…

    So much more than just a kiss

     

    Tina

     

    I was watching the content of my glass, as I gently swirled it in my hands, surprised how well the fluid seemed to mould with my thoughts, my emotions… The ripples, as little circles, like a stone could evoke as it had been thrown into a lake, spreading till it reached the glass border, and then moving back towards the centre where it all started. I sighed deeply, taking another sip, hoping, somehow, the strong alcoholic beverage would sooth the pain.

     

    What had I been thinking?

     

    I shook my head, feeling how my shoulders dropped several inches more, and sighed, deeply… What had I been thinking coming to a place like this? How could I ever think Brenda could be the one to mend my heart…?

     

    Oh my god, she looked so wonderful tonight… I felt how my breathing stagnated, and every time I closed my eyes it was as if I saw her, as if she was a source of bright light I had looked into and she was now forever burned into my retina…

     

    ‘Bette’

     

    I whispered the name as a prayer, and was disgusted hearing my own desperation. How could I ever move on? How could I ever move on if she kept haunting me in my dreams, the ones in waking and in sleeping hours? How could I even have a chance of getting over her if my heart kept jumping up with love and hope every time she walking into a room?

     

    Oh and when she had put her arms around my in that self-defence-class… Inhaling sharply I tried, with all my power, to control the ripples of feelings that went through me… Not prepared to feel the hopeful jitter of my heart…

     

    Had she been jealous earlier, when I had been introducing her to Brenda?

     

    And before, when I had told her I had indeed slept with her on the first date? Told her as if I was proud of it?

     

    Pushing my drink away, I reconsidered and took another swig, clenching my jaw together, feeling my face wrench as the burning fluid found its way to my stomach.

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    2. I cried when I watched them on screen but now reading you have Me sobbing! I am one of those that has now watched that scene over 20xs and I am awestruck at how much more you read in it, just from Tina’s pov. Awesome!

    11. As I said before, you two are the Dynamic Duo!!! LOL. This had me weeping, while my wife wondered what was wrong. I just pointed at the screen and said it was an incredibly beautiful chapter that I had read. Tina’s point of view just tugged at my heart strings. I can’t wait to read Bette’s. Thanks!!!

    12. This story left me as breathless as Tina. So well written. I felt each and every moment as though it was standing still. Truly impressive. I can’t wait to read Bette.

    20. i dont know what else to do except bow down to u both and applaud u…i just dont have the words and i wont ramble so whewwwww is all i can say right now.. u are just both fantastic at writing…absolutly astounding and breathtaking..i had tears flowing from my eyes b/c this was just so amazing writing….this is just i dunno i dunno u leave me to speechless…

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