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Always Her – (Chapter: chapter sixteen)
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I woke the next morning with a crick in my neck from sleeping in the chair and a huge headache from crying. I looked at the bed where she was curled in a ball, still asleep. I wasn’t sure of what to do. Part of me wanted to stay there just watching her. Another part wanted to crawl in with her just to hold her again. Yet another part just wanted to leave and not look back, although that was definitely the smallest part. In the end I scribbled her a note asking her to meet me at the diner across the road. If we were going to continue talking I figured a bedroom wasn’t the best place for it.
I sat there, slowly drinking my orange juice trying to figure out what would be said between us. She had managed to explain herself and I guess I understood her, even if I didn’t agree with how she went about handling things. I had yelled and spoken my mind which I admit lifted a big weight off my chest. We had both done enough crying for more than a lifetime. We were both hurting and I think we were both more scared than we’d like to admit. About what I wasn’t sure.
She said she wanted to figure it all out before she left. Would we be leaving together? Honestly I didn’t know. It’s what I wanted, she’s all I’ve ever wanted, but things had seemed to spiral out of control lately.
An hour later she walked through the door looking around anxiously to find me. We locked eyes and she let a small smile cross her face as she walked toward the booth. The waitress immediately ran over to take her order, giving me a final minute to try to collect and compose myself.
After ordering she looked to me. There was a bit of everything in her eyes- fear, guilt, anxiety, hope, and love. We sat there for a minute, just looking at one another. I wasn’t sure what was reflected in my eyes, but I was so broken that I was sure she was looking directly at my soul. I felt vulnerable, something I wasn’t used to feeling, and something only she could bring about. Even after all this time I was still amazed at how she could affect me.
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I have literally been crying off and on since chapter six, (more on than off ;). Your story has so much raw emotion, I’m a bit overwhelmed at times! I really think that Spence should be all like ‘Ash! I know what your thinking and you are good enough, your better than good enough your great!’ and then Ash should just fall into her arms sobbing and crying about all the stuff she is feeling and then they should live happily ever after! But from what I can tell you like your sad, heartbroken, angstyness(I know not a word, but Oh well…), so I doubt that’s what happens…Great story, your an amazing writer! I hope you post a new chapter soon! Until then I bid you Adu(SP?) OH! and sorry if this seems sort of ramblyish…I’m running on about two and a half hours of sleep here…:)
that’s so hard for ash cause seriously she went a really long time being with a girl who just up and decided one day that she was gonna have a boyfriend too. come on spence, step up ur game! awesome post, sad its almost over! but pms soon
Oh my! That was a treat to wake up to :0)soooo glad you found time to post. I was half expecting Ash to be gone in the morning as I know you like your angst so I was pleasantly surprised she was ready to talk. Karma is a great righter of wrongs, if it’s shown Ash that she’s been no better than Spencer at times it’s all for the good and Spashleyness can abound…please?? It’s Saturday morning so I’m not quite with it yet, I’d rather be in bed so my reviewing skills are not fully functioning just yet lol! It was great, can’t wait for the next chapter even though it’s the last *sobs* Glad I could cheer you up a bit and it wasn’t too lame xx LD P.S. PMS!!! lol!
I agree with Littledragonfly its a great thing to have this morning. Thank you for posting. Karma really is a great thing. Ash is good enough but right now its up to Spencer to so her that she is again. Well awesome post. Good job. Waiting for the next one. :)
I love it I’m at work reading this and it’s worth getting in trouble but I feel like Ash sometimes I wonder what it would be like if I just left would she even care but me don’t know anyways keep up with what you’re doing can’t wait and see what Ashley does… Pms!!
You write with so much emotion I forget their not real. I love the story for that reason. I just wish it was longer
awesome!!! pms!!!
Great update! The emotion you can capture in your writing is just ridiculous. It’s amazing how you can do that. I love this story because of it.
i just started reading your story and i love it i can’t wait for you to post more i love how you do the point of views hell i just love your story all the raw emotions are really great in the story spence really shouldn’t have cared what everyone else thought about her love for ash and just went for it but anyway can’t wait for more post soon?please…….PMS PLEASE