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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: Loose Ends)
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‘Fuck off Austin,’ Maggie yelled at me.
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‘Sorry!’ The red head apologised with a smirk, Maggie just flipped her off and finished her breakfast.
I was still shocked by Austin’s teasing. Maggie and I were both top of the pile where girls were concerned, any girl we wanted would come running if we asked. Who the hell had Maggie running after her? The thought of my friend and lover submitting to anyone but me made a unwelcome emotion flare up. I was jealous.
It was silent for a while and then Maggie switched her phone on and it started going fucking mental. I watched the brunette read through the messages. By the pained look on her face and the way she was subconsciously rubbing her neck they were probably from my new arch nemesis. Yeah, I’d promised Maggie I would let it go, but if ever found out who it was she would wish she’d never touched my friend.
‘Fuck!’ Maggie muttered under her breath before pushing away from the counter. ‘I’ll meet you in the car in five,’ she muttered as she left the kitchen.
Maggie looked upset and I debated going after her, I started to get up but Austin put a hand on my arm
‘Things have changed around here Ash, let her go’ she shrugged as she released me. Yes, I could see they had.
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The ride to school had been silent. Both sisters were preoccupied and I was too busy brooding about what had happened to Maggie to feel like talking. I sat in the back of the car and watched the world pass by as my thoughts tumbled around in my head. When Maggie pulled up in the lot Austin waved to a very cute blonde haired girl who smiled and waved back.
‘See ya! Annie can give me a ride home,’ the red head bounded enthusiastically towards the smaller blonde who was waiting, Annie I presumed. I saw Austin give her a peck on the lips and a hug. Interesting, I’d have to find out more about that later. Amy would probably know. Fuck! Look at me, I was turning into a gossip.
‘Need a lift home?’ Maggie spoke her first words of the journey and interrupted my thoughts
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OOOO first commenttt!!!PMSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
omg so much is going on and i can see why spencer is so upset especially with the way ashley had responded to her words and touch at the hospital only to have her basically tell her to fuck off when she saw her again and than have her ‘kissing’ her friend. Spencer is in a hole and her friends need to help her i hope maggie can forgive her because i think spence is going to have a harder time forgiving her self…and sex will probably not be the same if she has it at all without feeling guilty pms
UMMMM INTENSE !!!! but who’s to blame hmmm… But seriously INTENSE !!!!!!!
the hospital scene was amazing. Im so excited for the next chapter! post soon please :)
what emmelts said. PMS
dude…u’ve rendered me speechless with this one…i wonder if ash realized it was spence that was there n not maggie…i also wonder what ash gona do once she realizes its spencer that raped maggie…im like hooked on this story…pms!!!!!
man I knew I shouldn’t have checked to see if there were any updates because as soon as I saw you’d posted I decided to forgo studying and read the chapter instead… so if I fail my chem test tmrw I blame you and your amazing story!!! but for real, this was sooo awesome. I can’t wait to find out what happens next! pms!!
Ok, wow. Everyone pretty much said everything I wanted to say but not Are Kyla and Ashley sisters in this? is that Why Mads was staring at her like that? Who does Ash think Spencer is? Uh, one more thing, Love triangle is SUCH and understatement of what all Spencer’s got going on. It’s more like she’s a spider and each girl has her own line of web and sometimes they get tangled together. LolPost more soon, everyone secretly goes through withdrawl waiting.
okay, lemmie just say this: there is a 95% chance of maggie getting screwed over BIg time at the end of this if she loves spencer/ashley equally (half each). and i’ve come to realize that this whole thing is just one huge shit about to hit the fan, drama infested, love polygon story. AND I LUVS IT! haha. I contimplated being thirty minutes late to my first period class cuz i was reading this in school when i started haha. I love this so much because i feel like im a part of the action, like MY junkie friend just came back or something– writing like that (like how you write) takes talent and skill :) I hope one day I can write like that!
First, let me start off by saying that my time has not been my own lately. I usually do all my ff reading when I’m at work, but your last couple of updates were at a time when I hadn’t been at work. Well…can I just say that today was a really, really good day a work. I got to sit here (Clearly not doing work) and just read several chapters. It was AAAA mazing. Especially this chapter, not to say the others weren’t great as well, but I was really interested in seeing the whole Ash in the hospital thing and the wait soooo paid off. It’s so awesome to see how intense their connection is! I’m so excited for the next update, well, I’m always excited for the next update, but I’m getting manic about it now, so unless you don’t want to see me go insane and therefore unable to do any activities (such as the ones you yourself did this weekend- subsequently pissing off A LOT of ‘friends’ of mine) update asafp!
I know Spencer did a bad thing, but poor Spencer. I hope Maggie forgives her, cause I actually like them together. PMS please!!!
it made my day just to see this posted :-)
There’s so much shit going on but I love it and want more of it! Great, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, spectacular, stupendous, and every other word that’s a synonym for great, update! Can’t wait to read more!!
wow how do you keep track of all this? wait I know.. it’s because you’re freaking brilliant! holy shit I can’t believe everything that went down in the hospital. no wonder spence is so upset, after all of that and then ash being a complete bitch to her?! and wow if and when ash finds out it was spence who hurt maggie… oh man shit’s gonna fly then. yea I can definitely see this being a long VERY bumpy road to spashley! but I’m loving it. and so hmmm where do maggie and spence stand.. is that them together in the teaser… there’s going to be some major tension there that needs to be worked out. anyway rambled enough here.. pms please!
Damn didnt see that coming