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I swear you’re as subtle as a brick in the small of my back
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“Spencer, you have to go. You heard your father.” There was no response to Ashley’s plea. “Spencer, now.” And still no response. Gathering her singers amazing lung capacity in her diaphragm Ashley yelled with her full range. “Spencer. BACKSEAT. NOW!”
Spencer’s head shot up, but she looked past the brunette at her fathers pleading face. She made her way up off the floor and vacated the bathroom. Listening intently, Ashley heard two sets of feet trundle down the stairs and took a breath. Job well done, and she followed them.
Don’t believe me when I tell you, It’s something unforgivable.
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I swear, you have no idea, the jealousy that became me thinking that you always had it too easy
It was cold in the Carlin driveway. California was not cold but the driveway was. Parents not speaking to each other, Spencer not speaking at all. Ashley watched them get in the car. Spencer was still standing on the gravel her hand paused on the back door. Arthur and Paula waited. In her own time.
It’s just what anyone would do.
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I started something I couldn’t finish
Spencer,
I’m so sorry. I’ll never do this with the style and grace you would have because I am inarticulate. This is not about you. When the time comes, please come. Please speak. Please tell the world I wasn’t all bad. You were the only one who ever believed in me. Believe me it was enough, you were always enough. I just wasn’t. I was never enough. For you, for my mother, for this world. I’m so sorry. Take the time to talk about it yeah. I know you. You’ll never say anything unless someone pushes. Best friends Carlin. Best friends means forever. I’m sorry.
Ashley.
Best friends means I pulled the trigger.
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Soaking in sympathy
With Ashley Davies suicide note tucked in her pocket, Spencer Carlin opened the door and stepped into her parents car. She would leave her driveway and go to the funeral. She would find her voice and say the words that no one else would say but everyone would hear. The note would burn its way through her chest. One day she would need to read it no longer to know what it said. One week and it was burnt into the flesh of her heart. One month and she could recite it backwards and sideways. Hiding it from friends who never loved her half as much as she did.
Ashley watched her go from the driveway. It would be a long haul but she would stick around. Someone needed her, and best friends means… forever.
Best friends means you get what you deserve.
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sooo sad. im crying right now.
I CAN”T BELIEVE THIS!!!!! Great job writing this story!!!
Seeeeez! You killed Ashley! :( You’ve certainly been miss one-shot downer, now haven’t you? Between this and the Voyeur. ::sigh:: I still loved it. How could I not? I’m a bit teary, though. Poor Ash. Poor Spence! I just want to cuddle them both. Hey! No WONDER they keep running away from you! You treat them so roughly! At least they got a vacation recently with Jesus. (He says hi through his tears after reading that.) :sniffle sniffle:
To cheer y’all up. We just rescued a bird from our boarded up fire place. Then we let it go and the magpies attacked it. But we rescued it again. now we’re taking it to the RSPCA. Wow…
damn. i vote that song lyrics are hear and forever forbidden for oneshot challengs. cause that sure as hell lead to sadness…..it was well written though and i enjoyed it. as always YOU SO ARE!!!!
omg tat was truly so sad… my eyes are getting teary from it all…the suicide note in all its simplicity is so emotionally powerful.. u so rock man!!
Okay, I’m not much of a crier…but that was absolutely tear jerking. Amazing job.
OH and to whom ever can figure out what she’s talking about in her notes. I’ll only go if you’re some place cold
Forget cheer. The bird died.
Go bird rescue squad! Save that bird! And, damn! Are magpies really that vicious? We have bald eagles and red tailed hawks here. No magpies, though.
This post was really moving. The death of Ashley was a bit of a shocker, to say the least, but it was very well written!! Kudos!
*tear* I usually got a lot more in me to say, but right now that’s about all I can manage… :'(
I HATE YOU!! How can you even begin to think about sleeping after this..Or grocery shopping, breathing and more importantly..LOVING..gah..u made me cry..and i didnt wear my water proof mascara!!! GAH! You killed her..u actually killed her…as in she is NEVER comming back..she is not EVER gonna get the chance to actually “SEE” ever again..there can be so much love in this world..untill people like YOU and others, im not gonna say any names, but you people completely take the rug from under its feet..How is love suppose to strive and stand tall and strong..if its on the floor with a broken everything cause of YOU!! Oh girlie the fluffy kids are not happy…They love you like fluffy kidds love slim fast…yeah the icky banana kind….but you are an amazing writer and you were just responding to a challenge…You did an excellent job..but could you like warn me next time..cause i cant take no more heart ache *tear*..PMS..please that is ;)
Woah…I guess since I’ve never listened to or heard of the song I can definitely say “didn’t see that coming.” I’ve been reading your work for awhile, and you truly are an excellent writer. Great way in literally using the lyrics about the trigger. Suicide is a disturbing topic, and can be made even moreso when it is poorly written about or even glamorized. Ok, I think that’s all I wanted to say. Kudos.
OKay, im soooo mother fluffin proud of you for managaing to implement everything the right way…it was a bit depressing but i guess thats what i get for giving you depressing lyrics. I blame myself. lol WELL DONE THOUGH!
i have the bad urge to cry. not many things have that power to me, so this was absolutely awesome.
sooo sad. im crying right now.
I CAN”T BELIEVE THIS!!!!! Great job writing this story!!!
Seeeeez! You killed Ashley! :( You’ve certainly been miss one-shot downer, now haven’t you? Between this and the Voyeur. ::sigh:: I still loved it. How could I not? I’m a bit teary, though. Poor Ash. Poor Spence! I just want to cuddle them both. Hey! No WONDER they keep running away from you! You treat them so roughly! At least they got a vacation recently with Jesus. (He says hi through his tears after reading that.) :sniffle sniffle:
To cheer y’all up. We just rescued a bird from our boarded up fire place. Then we let it go and the magpies attacked it. But we rescued it again. now we’re taking it to the RSPCA. Wow…
damn. i vote that song lyrics are hear and forever forbidden for oneshot challengs. cause that sure as hell lead to sadness…..it was well written though and i enjoyed it. as always YOU SO ARE!!!!
omg tat was truly so sad… my eyes are getting teary from it all…the suicide note in all its simplicity is so emotionally powerful.. u so rock man!!
Okay, I’m not much of a crier…but that was absolutely tear jerking. Amazing job.
OH and to whom ever can figure out what she’s talking about in her notes. I’ll only go if you’re some place cold
Forget cheer. The bird died.
Go bird rescue squad! Save that bird! And, damn! Are magpies really that vicious? We have bald eagles and red tailed hawks here. No magpies, though.
This post was really moving. The death of Ashley was a bit of a shocker, to say the least, but it was very well written!! Kudos!
*tear* I usually got a lot more in me to say, but right now that’s about all I can manage… :'(
I HATE YOU!! How can you even begin to think about sleeping after this..Or grocery shopping, breathing and more importantly..LOVING..gah..u made me cry..and i didnt wear my water proof mascara!!! GAH! You killed her..u actually killed her…as in she is NEVER comming back..she is not EVER gonna get the chance to actually “SEE” ever again..there can be so much love in this world..untill people like YOU and others, im not gonna say any names, but you people completely take the rug from under its feet..How is love suppose to strive and stand tall and strong..if its on the floor with a broken everything cause of YOU!! Oh girlie the fluffy kids are not happy…They love you like fluffy kidds love slim fast…yeah the icky banana kind….but you are an amazing writer and you were just responding to a challenge…You did an excellent job..but could you like warn me next time..cause i cant take no more heart ache *tear*..PMS..please that is ;)
Woah…I guess since I’ve never listened to or heard of the song I can definitely say “didn’t see that coming.” I’ve been reading your work for awhile, and you truly are an excellent writer. Great way in literally using the lyrics about the trigger. Suicide is a disturbing topic, and can be made even moreso when it is poorly written about or even glamorized. Ok, I think that’s all I wanted to say. Kudos.
OKay, im soooo mother fluffin proud of you for managaing to implement everything the right way…it was a bit depressing but i guess thats what i get for giving you depressing lyrics. I blame myself. lol WELL DONE THOUGH!
i have the bad urge to cry. not many things have that power to me, so this was absolutely awesome.
Damn i was already sad. This just took the cake. Poor spencer.
Damn i was already sad. This just took the cake. Poor spencer.
First of all, I luv this song. If u haven’t listen to its sister song “Seventy-Seven times Seven”. Its just as good. Anyways, I luv this story. I luv all ur stories actually. Please keep them coming.
First of all, I luv this song. If u haven’t listen to its sister song “Seventy-Seven times Seven”. Its just as good. Anyways, I luv this story. I luv all ur stories actually. Please keep them coming.
okay… i have to talk this one out. i think i understand it, but i don’t know. it’s so deep… okay, so in the beginning… was it ashley’s spirit helping spencer? was it her spirit pulling her away from the fence and her spirit bandaging spencer… her spirit yelling for spencer to get up. guiding spence until she was ready to be let go…and ash killed herself… because she felt unworthy.wow… this really leaves me confused, but moved. amazing, kid… truly amazing.
okay… i have to talk this one out. i think i understand it, but i don’t know. it’s so deep… okay, so in the beginning… was it ashley’s spirit helping spencer? was it her spirit pulling her away from the fence and her spirit bandaging spencer… her spirit yelling for spencer to get up. guiding spence until she was ready to be let go…and ash killed herself… because she felt unworthy.wow… this really leaves me confused, but moved. amazing, kid… truly amazing.