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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–CH. 15
Tina: "I did it because I loved you and I knew that your relationship with your father meant very much to you. Don’t get me wrong I hated how you would turn into daddy’s little girl whenever he was around but it was only a few times a year so I put up with it. He made you happy so for a few nights I would ignore the fact that he could care less if I was there or not and that you would act like an ass."
Bette: "I was wasn’t I. God I was such a bitch to you sometimes…I’m really sorry T. I promise it won’t ever happen again. I know it’s just words but I really mean it, Melvin can either treat you and Eli the way you deserve to be treated or he can stop coming to visit me."
Tina: "Wow. You really mean that?"
Bette: "I should have done it a long time ago T."
Tina: "Thank you for telling me Bette it really means a lot to me that you would do that. Stand up to Melvin for me and Eli."
Bette: "T I know that we’re still up in the air about us, but I want you to know that I have changed. I don’t know what’s going to happen between us, but I do know what I’d like to happen."
Tina: "What?"
Bette: "T I want to be a part of yours and Eli’s life. I don’t know how it could workout with us living on opposites ends of the country, and I know we still have a lot of talking to do but I’m willing to do anything to try and make this work, if you are."
Tina: "I’m willing but babe, it’s not just me anymore. This decision effects Eli just as much as it effects you and I. We’ve been talking to each other for five days how can you be sure that this is what you want. I can tell the you’ve changed but so have I. What if we’ve changed too much?"
Bette: "I know we’ve only been talking over the phone, but I can still feel a connection between us. I can’t wait until the end of the day when I can hear your voice again. I’ve been thinking about you like crazy. I’ve missed you so much. I have never loved someone as much as I love you…I have never loved anyone other then you. Since you’ve been gone I’ve been in relationships where I cared for the other person but I think that I will always be in love with you. I’m really sorry I wanted to be able to say this to you in person, but I’m still not the most patient person."
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(48 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Nice long chapter that was greatly appreciated. I just had a feeling that Eli would get hurt while skateboarding. Don’t make his injuries severe, please. We don’t want B & T’s reunion and summer at the beach ruined. ;-)
OMG….U ARE STOPPIN THERE???? I KNOW WE GOT ALOT OF PAGES TO READ…BUT…..COME ON……WE NEED MORE……AND SOON……THIS IS GONNA BE SOOO DAMN GOOD…..BRING IT ON….
what a place to stop…….how long b4 u update??????
Dont leave us in suspense like that! I love the way this story is going.
Loving this story. Keep up the good work. Post soon.
Next chapter please!!!!! I love this story……
Just when it was getting so good :P Update soon !! loving the story :)
Oh man, what a place to stop. I hope Eli is going to be alright. Please continue soon.. can’t wait for more! :)
Thanks for the long chapter. I had a feeling something was gonna happen at the skate park, hopefully it’s nothing serious. Please don’t let Tina flip out. Too bad her surprise was ruined. I hope Bette gets to spend alot of the summer at the beach house (with some NC-17 rated chapters) I am glad her and Eli are bonding so well. Please post soon.
Tina so better not blame Bette for this..she told Bette to let him do it. Hope Eli is gonna be fine.Post soon!!!
This is a heck of a way for Tina to come face to face with Bette. But this will also will allow her to see just how much Eli means to Bette. I hope that after Eli is taken care of the Bette and Tina get to spend some quality time together. Thanks for the post and anytime that you write is appreciated.
Um… Surprise?!?!
OMG….How could you just leave us like that. Please post soon and I hope T isn’t too upset or angry. We know accidents happen..especially with kids on skateboards. great chapter.
Awesome story, you threw in a little drama but I’m hoping that your story isn’t going to go the way of other stories and have Tina become a villian.
Great post, but please let little sweet Eli be ok. I’m glad that Tina is already in LA, when this happened. Post soon…
I’m so thankful that it doesn’t seem too be a life-threatening injury to Eli! I’m also glad that Tina is there. Please post soon–I love this story and appreciate the nice, long chapter to tide us over. Love between B & T will soon be rekindled!
Please Don’t let Tina get to mad at Bette. I hope Eli is going to be OK. Thank you Please Post Soon Great Chapter
Brilliant. I hope eli is ok. Tina’s suprise would have been perfect. I hope our girls will be fine, with this. Now i guess bette has to move in with tina to help out with eli, cause now she wont let eli out of her sight.Can’t wait for next chapter, thank you
excellent chapter with a little drama, i hope Eli will be well and he has minor lession, but finaly Tina is in LA i hope she won’t freak out and figth with bette because the accident!
i hope tina won’t freak out about eli and won’t blame bette..i hope eli will be better soon so B&T would have a nice reunion
Wow. Bette really has mellowed out. She apologized to the nurse for yelling at her. Now let’s see if Tina can stay cool and not flip out.
Great upadate and so happy that you let Tina get to CA right away. Don’t let her be made with Bette about the accident. But please let them get together and be really close right now for their own sake and for Eli’s. Please let them show their love for each other. Thanks for a great story.
Long chapter or one page we will take your story anyway we can. I love Eli and love how Bette is so in love with that child. She acts like a Mom. with her baby. Gee,if they had only done this sooner. Bette is smart but She still hasn’t seen the simalary with her name and Eli. thanks so much for posting thanks
Hope Eli is ok, this is getitng more excited!!!!!!!!!!!!