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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 29
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 29
Tina started to stir when she felt the sun filtering into their bedroom she wasn’t sure what time they actually went to sleep just that they both had thoroughly exhausted each other. She woke with a smile on her face as she felt the soreness in her body and what they had done the night before to make her so sore…they had a lot of lost time to make up for and their bedroom activities the night before was definitely a step in the right direction although it would kill her if she had to keep up this pace. Tina softly laughed as she stared across at the beautiful woman sharing the bed with her. Bette was still passed out but like Tina she had a smile on her face. Tina was sure that after their night together Bette would be able to get over her hang up about making love with Eli asleep down the hall.
Tina continued looking at Bette with a big smile on her face as she remembered how soft and tender they were with each other how she felt that she was now completely reconnected with her soulmate…then there were a few moments when their sex was completely uninhibited where they felt an intense need to satisfy the other…other times they were playful. As Tina ran her hand down her body she recalled a point in their night where they used some ice cream…they started to get a little hungry and Bette had offered to go to the kitchen to get them some snacks. Of course after their sticky lovemaking with the ice cream they scrambled to the bathroom and reintroduced each other to the joys of making love in the shower. Both had felt completely satisfied at this point and had began walking back to the bedroom with the intention of falling asleep in each other’s arms but as they walked back into the room they noticed that the sun was beginning to come up so they walked out to the balcony wrapped up in each others arms. They softly kissed each other whispering loving words as she they stared into each others eyes. Both were very tired at this point but were so overwhelmed with the love that they could see in their partners eyes that they and found themselves walking back into the room hand in hand as they felt the need to show each other one more time how much they loved each other. What followed was gentle and loving…it reminded Tina so much how they made love to each other their first time but the big difference was that they now knew each others bodies so well…they found their sweet release together as they stared into each others eyes professing their love for each other. As their exhaustion set in they wrapped their arms around each other and finally submitted to their sleep.
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(70 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
So fucking cute…=)
Thanks for all the time and effort you put into writing this story, it is so good, just love it. Thank you.
Love Eli, Bette is so including Eli in this. It so cute that she want his permission to marry his Mom. Thanks for posting and do forget us thanks
this was great longer
i think everything is falling into place right now for B&T and melvin is the last piece of the puzzle…thank you
I agree with Sea…I love the length of your chapters. It’s a lovely story. I hope Bette will be supportive of Melvin and Tina talking alone.
Awwww I love this amazingly sweet story, I’ve really missed an update, but totally understand your prioritys. Looking forward to the next one – btw I just loves the plans they’re making :o))
I’ve been following this story from its beginning. It is so awesome. I also love that you write detailed and layered chapters. You take the time to have the story unfold at a realistic pace. Great job. Bette is so accomodating w/o being a doormat. Being a diehard TiBetter this is how I pictured their life together. I hope this happens on the TV show.
Excellent as always :D Your writing is great!.
Tina and Melvin… this should be interesting, bring it on!
WOW!!!! SO Great. I so love this story. I am happy for Bette and Tina. Thank you PPS
Great job once again, toribio! Wish I could write such long chapters! The way you have everyone talking things out is great–filling in the gaps the show left. Can’t wait to see how Tina’s convo with Melvin goes–it was neat how you connected him and Peggy. All these characters are true to form. Please post again as soon as you can!
You, of course, can’t see it, but I’m doing my happy dance. :) Glad to see this story back, finally! You peg Peggy pretty dead on; that stream of words without stopping. Ah, I do love her so! I had to laugh at Bette getting sleepy with Tina stroking her hair; I’m the same way. I think it’s cute that Bette wants to ask Eli’s permission. Seems about right if she’s going to be stepping into their lives. As for Tina and Melvin alone… yikes. Can’t wait to read all about it, though! Love how long your posts are, and I hope you don’t keep us waiting as long next time!
Great as usual. I really missed this story. Thanks for posten.
Is this story every worth the wait. Great job. Love how B&T are actually talking to each other, how Eli is included in all they’re plans and thoughts, especially Bette. Melvin will come around now that Peggy got a hold of him. I agree with AmandaMG, a baby sister would be good.
The talk that Peggy had with Melvin seemed to have kick started his want to maybe make things right. He maybe doing this for Bette and Himself but in the long run it will also be for Tina and Eli. I am so glad that they are working towards becoming a true family.
This is awesome and let see whats next, thanks!
1/2 finished I’ll be back!
love this s tory… and i hope you have no plans on stopping this… i think eli needs a baby sister… don’t you think
EXCELLENT updateand Amanda, you took the words out of my mouth. I sooooo totally agree with Amanda and love you writing and comittment to this story, PPS :o)
Toribio, this is absolutely fan-fucking-tastic!!! Sorry, but there are no better words! And great of Tina to let Bette in on her talk with her father, it would be an aweful move to start their new life with a lie indeed! I loved every single word of this chapter… Wrong, I loved every single word of every single chapter of this story!!! Thank you so much and please come back soon with either of your stories, you’re a fantastic writer!
I love this B&T (and Eli) I love how they communicate better now…how they are with each other. I am proud of how Bette is so protective of her family. I like how they were both willing to compromise about the move. I guess in a nutshell I love this story. Thanks for continuing to post and giving us something wonderful to read.
I like how long your chapters are. Thank you. This is such a sweet love story. Totally love Eli, although I don’t agree with Bette feeling like she has to his permission to marry Tina. It is cute, but Eli is still a nine year old child.
Awesome, I have been waiting, and waiting and you ceertainly didn’t disappoint
Dude, you have totally made me cry. Good Job Buddy!!
lovely, just lovely…sigh…then you have introduce Melvin Porter???? what’up girlfriend!!!?????? PPS, make it shorter, I’ll read it anywayz…