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A Life I Never Meant Chapter Fourteen
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“What does Ally think about all of this?”
“She thinks that I should find out, that I should talk to Bette. It was almost like she was pushing me away to see if I would find my way back to her.”
“So, Alice, Ally and I all think that you and Bette should talk to each other. Bette wants to talk to you but doesn’t think that you want to talk to her and well, this is going to sound harsher than I mean it, but you’re just scared to talk to her.”
“Thanks for that summation of events so far Shane.” I say, sarcasm cutting through my small laugh.
“That’s what I’m here for. A rational mind amongst all the chaos.” laughs Shane, before wincing in pain.
“Are you OK?”
“I’m fine.”
“You looked like you were in pain. Do you want me to get the doctor?”
“No, it’s alright. It’s probably because I was out of bed earlier and now my body’s complaining about a little bit too much exertion.”
“If you’re sure?” I reply, not totally convinced about Shane’s explanation of events.
“I’m sure.” confirms Shane.
I pull my chair a little closer to Shane’s bed, almost to see if I can read her mind as to how much pain she is really in. Of course, I get nothing because I trying to read the past master of covering up any kind of pain.
“Are you really thinking about leaving?” Shane asks, disappointed, but I can tell that she is trying to change the subject away from something that concerns her.
“You’re on the mend. I have a lot of making up to do with Ally. She trusts me more than I trust myself and I should get back there and make good on that trust, and there’s the small matter of my continuing gainful employment.”
“Don’t go just yet, stay a few more days.”
“I want to Shane, for you, but I know that Alice is going to stay here a while longer and soon you’re going to be at home, next door to Bette.”
“Actually Bette asked me to stay with her after I leave here.”
“Shane I can’t step foot back in that house. It would be too hard.” I say, getting upset, even though I know that I don’t really have any right to.
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plz plz tell me next chapter they r gonna talk
damn..you are killing me…please have them talk…have Bette chase her to NY this time. post soon
Love is not about Safe…..is exactly the opposite, you gamble a part of your life everytime you make a decision, you can win or you can loose,but when you win, OMFG….And I don´t think Ally would like to be with Tina because she is the “safer” choice. This is a wonderfull history, thank you very much for sharing it with us. a humble reader and loyal fan.
Wow – you write the most amazing dialogue for these two. Shane is just so direct – hopefully Tina is listening and will do the right thing by Bette.
Damn, pls pls don’t make me wait too long for the next chapter, I’m almost falling off my seat!!!
Shane is a really good friend. If Tina wants an end with Bette, she should at least let go of Bette.
Great chapter CG.
please don’t leave me hanging! hehehe i love this story! so well written! kudos to u! i can’t wait to read more! LOTS LOTS MORE! =)
Man, you are killing me. Urgh.. why taken them so long just to TALK! Bette has to do something NOW before too late. Great chapter.. more please :)
The option is to love whom you love or who loves you. Everyone has different reason to choose. And, I feel sorry to say this: Tina, forget Ally, she is great, but Bette is the one.
The entire damn mess makes sense to me now thru Tina’s (your) commentary.I like how you have the anvil not falling too hard on either of their heads. Reflective honesty. If she truly can’t get passed”working so hard that the quicksand won’t happen again” then Tina really should let Bette go”. Carnage is a harsh term but if Tina truly feels that way she’s better off playing it “safe” with Ally. Poor Ally. Bette deserves a fresh start and Tina at this point seems seriously Bette fatigued. Tho i can’t tell if she’s being pragmatic or just tired of thinking about it. What are you doing tonight? More please…. This fwas an excellent chapter in a great story. Sue
I suppose I can forgive Tina’s avoidance of Bette on this occasion. Moments like that can be quite a jolt. But she needs to get her shit together and talk to Bette, just like Shane was saying.
Your story is amazing – the pace the wanting and the fear of rejection and taking the wrong path – just awesome how you are laying it all out. and letting Alice be wise is a stroke of genius – life seasons people and loss and you have written this really well. Thank you for sharing your figts with us.
So sorry – that’s sharing your GIFTS – your wonderful marvelous writing with us- the phone rang as I was typing and I jumped sky high and just hit send . Again, thanks
I think Ally will leave Tina whether Tina chooses her or not, cause this is a make or break deal. Ally knows this that’s why she is puching for tina to talk to Bette. Ally is a smart girl and knows that Tina is more safe with her than anything else. Ally does not strike me as the type to “settle” on being a safe choice with anyone. Tina needs to stop being a pussy and just talk to Bette. Bette needs to get off the “woe is me” express and step back into reality and talk to tina. Still don’t want a Tibette reunion but who knows I may change my mind. Post soon!
post more. good job.
i understand why tina wants to keep it safe but this is not what love is all about..i hope talking to bette will help her to see that she and bette belong together
You have left me wanting more. Hope the next chapter is soon.
This story is so complex. You write it beautifully. Thanks.
Safe is not always what it is cracked up to be. If Tina stays with Ally that safe will turn into longing and then depression. You can already tell that Tina is scared because just one look and she is already beginning to unravel. I already get the impression that Bette desperately wants Tina back and hope that Tina will eventually want to return to Bette. Do I get to dream so that my tibette heart still has the chance to beat strongly again.
So, Tina will use Alice/Dana as her justification for staying. So, the return ticket is already bought. Tina always has a back channel, back burner going, doesn’t she? Does Ally know what she is getting into? I think it is patently clear which way Shane wants this to go. Whether it will, it remains to be seen, and that’s the beauty of your fanfic. Thanks!
Pls pls let them talk before Tina leaves. They are meant to be together! The dialogue between Tina and Shane was written so well. Thanks!
If Tina returns to NY before talking to Bette, whatever that outcome may be, she’ll never get the closure she thinks she may have by escaping back to her girlfriend. Wonderful dialogue between Shane and Tina. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I’m so enjoying your thoughtful, intelligent approach to this story. It’s truly heart-wrenching to read but always leaves me anxious to read your next chapter. Thanks for sharing it!
please hurry ‘the talk up’, I’m desperate here on the edge, lmao
Please don’t let anything be wrong with Shane. That wince of pain was far too ominous. Love your writing and cannot wait to read your telling of B&T’s reunion (B&T together forever PLEASE :)). Great chapter, thanks city
Heartbreaking…
WOW!!!!! Great Chapter. Please have Tina talk to Bette. Thank you
post now
Slowly building to the conversation… I like it. Fabulous. I just hope there’s a happy Tibette ending…
Wonderful as always! Still have my fingers crossed btw :-)
I echo what others have said about being “safe.” If I wanted to be “safe,” I would have never admitted to myself that I’m gay and I’d still be in a relationship with a guy who makes watching paint dry on a wall sound like fun. It’s great to feel safe when you find the one and know they’d never intentionally hurt you, but playing it safe is bad.
Nice contrast between this story and the ‘Angie off to college’ one. You do a great job writing both versions of B&T&co. Thanks!
I’m jumping on the bandwagon that Tina NEEDS to talk with Bette. Its obvious she still has felings for me Bette that is why she is ducking and diving. They both need to love each other like they never been hurt; put it out in the open and wipe the slate clean. Nobody wants to be with someone just to say you have someone- there needs to be love and a connection, not just some safety blanket b/c you’re afraid you’re heart will be broken again.
This is killing me, Tina soo Belongs to Bette and she could never go back to Ally as she will always think what if, please make her see sense
WOW!!!!