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Boundary of Fear and Love 4
This just sucks. I miss the levity and fun. Im the first to admit, I use humor as a shield in life. But you know what, you get used to laughing and you like it. Yeah its a shield and self defense and yada yada, but it works. I like it. This, I dont like. So I need to get some chutzpah and talk to her. Oh my god, Im a 70 year old Jewish woman. Where the ***** did chutzpah come from. I guess it sounds better than balls.
5:56, almost there. Is it possible time stopped or just slowed down to ***** with me? It feels like it. I cant keep pacing my apartment like this. Im going to wear down my carpet and it wasnt such good carpet to begin with. Maybe that will be a good thing. Itll be an excuse to get new carpet. That would be fun. Something different, a little change in scenery. I could use that. Ooh – 5:59. Shell be here in a second. Who would of thought I should have been thinking of carpeting to pas the time. That wouldnt have dawned on me. I think I need to invest more time in domesticity.
Theres the door. Thats Dana for you, right on time. She hates that I make us late all the time. I need to work on that. OK, I can do this. Just be calm, honest and totally not you for the next few minutes. Im talking to myself, that cant be a good start.
She just walked in, but knocks after she has already opened the door. Ive never understood the purpose of that knock. But look at her. Shes beautiful. Her hair is pulled back with a few strands loosely cradling her face, wearing a tight tank and sweats. I dont know if anyone else on heart could wear that outfit and elicit this response from me.
Hey Al! Dana said, smiling this huge smile at me. I feel my heart melt. I have to do this.
Hey Dane! How was your day? I say, walking over to her to give her a kiss. I just leaned in to give her a brief kiss, but she held on. Her arms wrapped around me and I was home.
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(51 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
What great insight to what Alice is really thinking! I love the story but ya stopped it right what it was getting good…! Post soon!
Yay you continued! Good thing cause I really didnt wanna follow through with my threat…;) “Lara thing is going to come back and bite us in the ass.” Not before I bite her!
I agree with Atenea, Dana doesnt need to see Lara to know that she wants Alice. I love reading Alice’s POV in this story, post soon!!!!
Hell, yah! You’ve got to keep going with this, girl! You handled Alice and Dana’s thinking really well. This is how I hoped season 3 would be like. Dana being firm on how she feels about Alice? Great! And the “chutzpah”? …loved it!
are you kidding? of course tbc :P I don’t know why all the people has to have a lot of relationships, life and the way we wanna live it, is so different for everybody
I love your story, and happy to have a spoiler-free one. Alice made me cringe in this, but loved how you wrote her thinking. And Dana was great. Can’t wait to see where you take them next . .
You did a wonderful job of expressing Alice’s insecurity. I was happy that Dana came across as strong in this story, rather than wishy-washy.
YES tbc!!! :D and since you’re writing a spoiler-free story, you know you cant make them break up right? yay!
How can I miss this? I didn’t notice you posted. There’s no question here, you must continue! So damn good!
How you are writing this story is how i envisioned my ideal season 3 playing out–and then i had to go and be a spoiler whore! Anyway, i think you should continue on with this story–it was nice to see Dana be so decisive. I think it would be great if Lara isn’t the problem for them in the long run, you know, maybe all their drama could come from them just being an everyday couple. that would be nice to see. however you choose to portray this, I’m sure it will be brilliant. You always seem to do an amazing job. Keep up the good work!
please continue. i love how this story is coming along so far.