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    Can She Ever Love Me? Chapter 12-The Finale

    CARMEN:  Wow, this is sooo beautiful shane. You really out done yourself.

     

    SHANE:  Cmonnn, you know this is nothing.

     

    CARMEN:  Yes it is…Wait, do I smell Thai?

     

    SHANE:  That you do…Are you hungary?

     

    CARMEN:  Yes…Im starving.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Shane and Carmen gets their food and begins to eat. While they are eating, they keep taking little stares at each other and smiling. After they were done, Shane puts everything in a nearby trash can. Shane comes back and lays on the blanket across from Carmen.

    SHANE:  I love coming here after work to unwind.

     

    CARMEN:  This place is sooo peaceful and beautiful.

     

    SHANE:  (Looking at Carmen) I want to say something to you, but I dont want you to talk until im done.

     

    CARMEN:  Okay, I wont talk.

     

    SHANE:  I need to get all this off my chest before i loose the nerve too. Im very nervous right now, but i need to say this to you.

     

    CARMEN:  Take your time, shane…Im not going anywhere.

     

    SHANE:  (Breathing heavily)  Here it goes…Carmen, I first want to tell you im sooo sorry for leaving you at the altar. Everyday, since that day…I have died inside. I should of told you, my father said I was just like him. I got scared because I thought he was right. Ive hated myself for thinking that ever since. Carmen, I did want to marry you…What am I saying, I still do want to marry you.

     

    CARMEN:  (Looking like a deer caught in a headlight)  What?  You want to marry me, still?

     

    SHANE:  Carmen, you promised you wouldnt talk until I was done.

     

    CARMEN:  (Apologizing)  Im sorry…please continue.

     

    SHANE:  Okay. Carmen, Ive been in love with you since the 1st day we met, and I still love you. I kept trying to be with random chicks to get you out of my head. Carmen….It never ever worked. I took more drugs than a drug store pharmacist could make up, but you were still in my heart. Baby, you are my light at the end of the tunnel. You are the air that I take into my lungs. You are the 1st thing I think about when I wake up in the morning. Your the last thing I think about when I close my eyes. That night at the party when you snapped at me. you crushed me sooo hard. I thought that night to take my own life.

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    1. Wee! I’m sooo happy. :D I’m sorry I wasn’t able to comment earlier, and for the other posts also. long story short, my parents found out… about me and my girl AND… it wasn’t good. I’ve been banned from the L-word since. Boo! this made me feel a lot better. :) thanks :D

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