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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 3
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Previously:
Just then the door opened and in walked a goddess to say the least. Tina looked up and all she could say under her breath was…”Now THAT is my type.”
Suddenly Alice say,” Bette…Over here.”
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Bette comes walking over swaying her hips from left to right in what seemed to Tina to be in slow motion. This was the most beautiful and confident woman that Tina had ever seen. No one has ever worn a pair of lowrise jeans and a tight lace blouse as well as this brown hair goddess. Her feet were covered by a wonderful pair of black Minolo Blanik strapy heels that were almost as ***** as she was.
Alice: “What the ***** took you so long, Bette?”
Bette: “I’m in no hurry to do anything this week, Alice. I don’t know why you are. This is a week of rest and relaxation.”
Alice: “YOU are going to rest and relax! I won’t be holding my breath for that. I would like to you meet my friends.”
Just then Lexie comes back to table with Alice’s drink so the whole gang is there! Lexie gives Bette a head to toe look then looks over at Tina and smiles. Tina is in a daze and Lexie knows just were her head is and where it will probably be for the rest of the trip.
Alice: “This is Kristin. Lexie, who saved my life the second I walked in the door. And Tina.”
Bette smiles at the one by one and says hi. Then she gets to Tina. Tina looks shy and won’t make eye contact with Bette. It makes Bette smile even more. Bette is used to having that effect on woman but there is something different about Tina.
Bette: “Nice to meet you ladies. So, what brings you to this big love boat?”
Kristin: “Well Bette…It sure isn’t love! I’m here to get drunk, get a tan and meets some nice ladies but not love!”
Lexie: Looking over at Alice, with a sultry look…”I’m here for whatever happens. If love is in the cards then I’m all for it!”
It is now Alice’s turn to blush and become shy. This makes Bette and Dana laugh because Alice is the entertainer of the group and she is the one that makes other people blush. But it looks like Lexie has turned the tables with Alice.
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im gonna have to kick chicki’s ass for teachin you bout those cliffys…….lmao…….i love this….continue soon…….oh and make the chappys longer……..i wanna get into it good…..then continue readin for a while……great great story……and i’m with you all the way..dont worry bout that..
K
Tease! lol Great chapter. Love it all. Can’t wait for the next one.
Hey….why is everyone blaming me for the cliffy?????
Damn……LMAO…okay….I better sneak in and out fast before someone hits me over the head….Great chapter Nips….I don’t know why you didn’t like it….the pace is just right…nice….and…..slow…..allowing…things…to…build……..YESSSSSSS!!!!! I love the connection that B&T have made so far…..very sexy. Keep up the great work…
Anndddd……. what? She ducks and runs for her life??? Or she says she can’t and now you torture us some more? LOL. GREAT CHAPTER. Love what you’re doing so far.
Another update!!! You are soon becoming one of my favorites!!
You guys are funny! I love reading the comments. Good update. There will be one tomorrow?? RIGHT!!!!
have u taken any lessons from Chicki the queen of cliffhangers??? please post soon!
She closed her eyes and lean forward and kissed her. That fan fiction and fairy tales right. Thanks
another great chapter. short or long, cliffy or no cliffy, just please remember to continue with the next chapter.
Hey i am first to post yeh! You are doing a great job with this story you have me hooked please post soon!!!
tina looks at her and sneezes?? lol
damm that was really short, are you getting shorter by the chapter??
Am I first?It was great.
tina looks at her and giggles. this was great. am so enjoying just fun. cuz isnt that was a cruise should be FUN. keep it up. no more drama. thats my mantra.
Jesus Nipples….Tina what???. How can you do this to us…what..is she falling overboard or ?? Don´t keep us hanging here for long. Great update by the way. Do continue. Post soon
Ok I think Tina look at her and kiss Bette before Bette ask her permisson. Good chapter, post soon please. Thanks!
That was kind of mean how you ended this chapter. But I loved the QAF allusion. So sad that it ended. Great work nipples.
this story is going great. Please post more soon.!!!
Hi Nipples, great chapter, but don’t ever end it like that again! I hate those endings! but like I said, it was a great chapter so post soon please!
Let me be the one to say…What the?? Your a killer Nipples, always leaving us with a cliff hanger… I’ve only read a couple of chapters of your fanfic, but already loving it!! Keep up the great work…but i have to agree with CR00 are the chapters going to get shorter as the story goes along???
anyways cheers for the update
can’t wait to see what happens next
Okay Nip, you need to STOP reading Chicki’s stories! You both KILL us with your . . . endings! Arrg drives me crazy! Haha, I love this story already, please post again soon!
hey i just kind of stumbled upon this one, and i think i like where this is going. please post soon.
i agree it keeps the ladies wanting more but dont leave it to long b4 posting
YAY an update.. and wow what an update.. ok i’m not liking you alot at the moment, how could you leave me with a cliffy??
predictable?? oh C’mon it’s cool for me as a reader to guess some of the things and then be proven right.. that means you’re giving me what i want.. hehehe.. it doesnt mean u’re predictable.. ;)
does Bette said “i´m the queen of the world”..with Celine Dion music on the back..lol..i really love your story..and you said no DRAMA then i trust you..cant wait for first kiss..love it..post soon please