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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 3
Bette: “Well…I grew up in Upstate New York and I moved to California after I graduated from Yale. I majored in Art History and I loved art so much that I decided I wanted to open my own gallery. I’m not much of an artist so I thought that I could help new artist show their stuff. I actually just finished a show for an up and coming artist from Philly named Justin Taylor. His stuff is wonderful. You should come by the gallery when we get back and check out work. You do like art don’t you?”
Tina watched Bette’s mouth the whole time she was talking wondering what it would be like to kiss those wonderful lips. She took in every word that came out of Bette’s mouth and filed it away in her mind. She would find herself doing that many times as the week went on.
Tina: “Of course I like Art. Actually I love it! I loved the gallery at the unverstity. I used to go there and sit when I needed to get away from the hustle and bustle of school. It was very relaxing to me.”
Now it is Bette’s turn to watch Tina. This didn’t go unnoticed by Tina as she watched Bette’s eyes. She wondered if Bette was thinking the same thing that she thought. Just then Bette stops her from talking.
Bette: “Hey…would you like to take a walk outside? I really need to get out of this loud place. Plus I would love to smell the fresh sea air.”
Tina: “Sure, why not! Hey guys” She says to the ladies…”We are going to take a walk. I will see you later.”
Kristin and Lexie just smile knowing that something is going on there but not sure what it was yet! Tina really needs a release and they hope that Bette will be able to help her with it.
Bette and Tina leave the club and head to the outside deck. It is quite out there with a few couples sprinkled here and there. The night air was fresh and the skies are clear with all the stars shining bright!
Bette takes Tina’s hand in her own and then looks at her asking permission without saying anything. Tina in turn says yes and they walk hand in hand not saying a word. Then all of a sudden Bette speaks…
Bette: “Tina I have to tell you that Alice and Dana had to drag me on this cruise because I really didn’t want to come but now I am so glad that I did. “
Tina: ” Well Bette, I’m glad that you did too”
They smile at each other and continue to walk not letting go of each others hands until they got to the very front of the ship on the top deck. As they look out at the sea only one thought continued to go through Bette’s head. She has got to kiss this beautiful creature before she explodes. She looks at Tina and then as gentle as she can she turns Tina so that her back is resting on the railing of the ship. Looking deep into Tina’s eyes Bette then runs her index finger across Tina’s cheek and smiles, asking for permission to kiss her without speaking a word. Tina looks at her and…..
TBC
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(39 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
im gonna have to kick chicki’s ass for teachin you bout those cliffys…….lmao…….i love this….continue soon…….oh and make the chappys longer……..i wanna get into it good…..then continue readin for a while……great great story……and i’m with you all the way..dont worry bout that..
K
Tease! lol Great chapter. Love it all. Can’t wait for the next one.
Hey….why is everyone blaming me for the cliffy?????
Damn……LMAO…okay….I better sneak in and out fast before someone hits me over the head….Great chapter Nips….I don’t know why you didn’t like it….the pace is just right…nice….and…..slow…..allowing…things…to…build……..YESSSSSSS!!!!! I love the connection that B&T have made so far…..very sexy. Keep up the great work…
Anndddd……. what? She ducks and runs for her life??? Or she says she can’t and now you torture us some more? LOL. GREAT CHAPTER. Love what you’re doing so far.
Another update!!! You are soon becoming one of my favorites!!
You guys are funny! I love reading the comments. Good update. There will be one tomorrow?? RIGHT!!!!
have u taken any lessons from Chicki the queen of cliffhangers??? please post soon!
She closed her eyes and lean forward and kissed her. That fan fiction and fairy tales right. Thanks
another great chapter. short or long, cliffy or no cliffy, just please remember to continue with the next chapter.
Hey i am first to post yeh! You are doing a great job with this story you have me hooked please post soon!!!
tina looks at her and sneezes?? lol
damm that was really short, are you getting shorter by the chapter??
Am I first?It was great.
tina looks at her and giggles. this was great. am so enjoying just fun. cuz isnt that was a cruise should be FUN. keep it up. no more drama. thats my mantra.
Jesus Nipples….Tina what???. How can you do this to us…what..is she falling overboard or ?? Don´t keep us hanging here for long. Great update by the way. Do continue. Post soon
Ok I think Tina look at her and kiss Bette before Bette ask her permisson. Good chapter, post soon please. Thanks!
That was kind of mean how you ended this chapter. But I loved the QAF allusion. So sad that it ended. Great work nipples.
this story is going great. Please post more soon.!!!
Hi Nipples, great chapter, but don’t ever end it like that again! I hate those endings! but like I said, it was a great chapter so post soon please!
Let me be the one to say…What the?? Your a killer Nipples, always leaving us with a cliff hanger… I’ve only read a couple of chapters of your fanfic, but already loving it!! Keep up the great work…but i have to agree with CR00 are the chapters going to get shorter as the story goes along???
anyways cheers for the update
can’t wait to see what happens next
Okay Nip, you need to STOP reading Chicki’s stories! You both KILL us with your . . . endings! Arrg drives me crazy! Haha, I love this story already, please post again soon!
hey i just kind of stumbled upon this one, and i think i like where this is going. please post soon.
i agree it keeps the ladies wanting more but dont leave it to long b4 posting
YAY an update.. and wow what an update.. ok i’m not liking you alot at the moment, how could you leave me with a cliffy??
predictable?? oh C’mon it’s cool for me as a reader to guess some of the things and then be proven right.. that means you’re giving me what i want.. hehehe.. it doesnt mean u’re predictable.. ;)
does Bette said “i´m the queen of the world”..with Celine Dion music on the back..lol..i really love your story..and you said no DRAMA then i trust you..cant wait for first kiss..love it..post soon please