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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 3
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Now it is time for Bette to finally speak to the Tina!
Bette: “So Tina…what brings YOU to this cruise? Are you looking for love?”
Tina: “I’m just looking to have a good time. Whatever happens happens. I didn’t come here planning to meet anyone. I just want to relax.
Bette: “Relax huh? Do you plan on relaxing alone or might you like to have a friend to relax with?”
Tina: “I haven’t really thought about it.”
Kristin: “Is that an invitation, Bette?”
Bette: “It might be Kirstin…It just might be.”
With that they all start to drink and begin to tell stories of their lives. Of course Kristin and Alice are in competition to see who can tell the best story. It is then that Kristin is glad that she didn’t hook up with Alice. This girl is REALLY getting on her nerves. Lexie can have her.
Kristin: “Alice you didn’t really get slapped in the face with a fish while you were swimming in the lake!
Alice: “The ***** I didn’t. We got off the boat and I was telling Chris, Scott, and D’Ann a story and a fish came skipping across the water and slapped me in the face. Since then they called me Fish Lips.”
Kristin: “That sounds like a total crock of *****!”
Dana: “No, Kristin, according to those guys it really did happen. I was there when they got back to shore and Alice was pissed because they were laughing at her to the point that they were crying.”
Kristin: “Whatever!”
Lexie: “What’s wrong Kris? Can you not come up with a better story than that? Has Alice one upped you? That never happens!”
Kristin: “***** you Lexie.”
Kristin gets up and walks off. In the meantime Bette has found a place to sit next to Tina and is trying to get her to open up. Bette must know everything there is to know about this woman. Bette was looking to get laid this week but for some reason those thoughts left her mind the second she laid her eyes on Tina.
Bette: “Tina, where are you from? You have quite a thick southern accent!”
Tina: ” I grew up in a little town just outside of Dallas. I moved to California after I graduated from high school and now I only go there for holidays. It was quite a cultural shock to move from there to CU but I really love it now. How about you Bette? Tell me about you!”
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im gonna have to kick chicki’s ass for teachin you bout those cliffys…….lmao…….i love this….continue soon…….oh and make the chappys longer……..i wanna get into it good…..then continue readin for a while……great great story……and i’m with you all the way..dont worry bout that..
K
Tease! lol Great chapter. Love it all. Can’t wait for the next one.
Hey….why is everyone blaming me for the cliffy?????
Damn……LMAO…okay….I better sneak in and out fast before someone hits me over the head….Great chapter Nips….I don’t know why you didn’t like it….the pace is just right…nice….and…..slow…..allowing…things…to…build……..YESSSSSSS!!!!! I love the connection that B&T have made so far…..very sexy. Keep up the great work…
Anndddd……. what? She ducks and runs for her life??? Or she says she can’t and now you torture us some more? LOL. GREAT CHAPTER. Love what you’re doing so far.
Another update!!! You are soon becoming one of my favorites!!
You guys are funny! I love reading the comments. Good update. There will be one tomorrow?? RIGHT!!!!
have u taken any lessons from Chicki the queen of cliffhangers??? please post soon!
She closed her eyes and lean forward and kissed her. That fan fiction and fairy tales right. Thanks
another great chapter. short or long, cliffy or no cliffy, just please remember to continue with the next chapter.
Hey i am first to post yeh! You are doing a great job with this story you have me hooked please post soon!!!
tina looks at her and sneezes?? lol
damm that was really short, are you getting shorter by the chapter??
Am I first?It was great.
tina looks at her and giggles. this was great. am so enjoying just fun. cuz isnt that was a cruise should be FUN. keep it up. no more drama. thats my mantra.
Jesus Nipples….Tina what???. How can you do this to us…what..is she falling overboard or ?? Don´t keep us hanging here for long. Great update by the way. Do continue. Post soon
Ok I think Tina look at her and kiss Bette before Bette ask her permisson. Good chapter, post soon please. Thanks!
That was kind of mean how you ended this chapter. But I loved the QAF allusion. So sad that it ended. Great work nipples.
this story is going great. Please post more soon.!!!
Hi Nipples, great chapter, but don’t ever end it like that again! I hate those endings! but like I said, it was a great chapter so post soon please!
Let me be the one to say…What the?? Your a killer Nipples, always leaving us with a cliff hanger… I’ve only read a couple of chapters of your fanfic, but already loving it!! Keep up the great work…but i have to agree with CR00 are the chapters going to get shorter as the story goes along???
anyways cheers for the update
can’t wait to see what happens next
Okay Nip, you need to STOP reading Chicki’s stories! You both KILL us with your . . . endings! Arrg drives me crazy! Haha, I love this story already, please post again soon!
hey i just kind of stumbled upon this one, and i think i like where this is going. please post soon.
i agree it keeps the ladies wanting more but dont leave it to long b4 posting
YAY an update.. and wow what an update.. ok i’m not liking you alot at the moment, how could you leave me with a cliffy??
predictable?? oh C’mon it’s cool for me as a reader to guess some of the things and then be proven right.. that means you’re giving me what i want.. hehehe.. it doesnt mean u’re predictable.. ;)
does Bette said “i´m the queen of the world”..with Celine Dion music on the back..lol..i really love your story..and you said no DRAMA then i trust you..cant wait for first kiss..love it..post soon please