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Cure-all, Chapter 21
… If she hadn’t met the woman who had turned her world upside down, and changed her life forever.
Bette’s smile appeared before her and for a few seconds, she forgot to breathe. God, she missed her so much already… She wondered how she was doing. How Shane was doing. She prayed that she would be okay. She was so young… It suddenly dawned on her that Bette might have tried to call her. But her phone’s battery had died and she hadn’t been able to replace it yet… Damn! she said out loud, hitting the steering wheel.
She thought about Carmen. Bette had said that she would call her from the hospital… Poor girl, she must have been shattered by the news. I’ll make sure that she gets regular updates on Shane, even if I have to call Bette myself, Tina thought decisively, grinning at her sudden resolution. Yes, anything to make Carmen feel better…
She suddenly felt more light-hearted, and turned the radio on for the end of the trip.
A few hours later, tired but having finally reached the house, she opened the front door to find Carmen in tears on the sofa.
She dropped her bags and was by the young latina’s side in no time.
"Carmen, sweetie… What is it?… What’s going on?" She asked her, fearing the worst.
"It’s… It’s…" The girl tried to say between sobs, "It’s Shane…"
Oh my God… Tina thought. She was starting to anticipate the worst scenario when she heard the next words,
"She woke up…"
"Huh?…" Tina could only mutter.
"She woke up… This morning… She is gonna be fine. She’s all buised and very weak, but she’s gonna be fine." Carmen said, her tears still falling but a smile on her face."
"Oh Carmen, that’s great!" Tina exclaimed, finally letting out the breath she’d been holding.
She grabbed Carmen in a tight hug, relieved for the young woman, but also for Bette.
"When did you get the news?" The blonde inquired.
"Oh, only a few minutes ago… Bette just called."
Tina’s heart missed a beat, ‘Bette just called.’
"Oh?…" She said trying to sound casual, "Just now?"
"Yes. She said she wanted to make sure that all of Shane’s tests came back positive so that she would give me only good news. That’s why she waited to call me." The young girl explained.
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ok…it’s official…i’m hooked!! i’m loving this story, you wouldn’t believe how excited i got when i saw it was 14 pages!! how long now before they get to speak again??? ppvvvvvvs!
Holy Moley Woman! You weren’t kidding when you said it was a loooong chapter. Loved it, but I’m dying here. Those 2 need to get together soon please. PPS!!
thanks for the lon chappy! loved it:) ok so now we need Tina to talk to Helena and Bette to hurry up and cure this disease so she can get back home where Tina tells her she left Helena for her….man is that it? I’m so hooked can you tell? PPS
Wow, what a dilemma for Tina. That was very bittersweet. PPS.
it’s time for tina to let go…of helena LOL
love this story… i think tina needs to go to helena and find her with another woman.. then book her flight and go to bette… so you are waiting for the presidents results here in the states… it should be a long night… wish us luck… so are you going to L5 next week in london… i am… if you are going… look for me…PPS
wow phew! u have ways with words. keep it up. im hoping that maybe, just maybe Tina will visit Bette. But i rather Bette find the cure and go home to Tina.
poor tina she must broke things with helena so she could fallow her heart and be with bette
wow such a long and well written update. I enjoyed it so. Well I see we have Tina attempting to be a mature adult, instead of cheating on Helena she wants to tell her how she feels first…so do it already and go to Bette.
Finally they both admit they have fallen in love. Such a great story.
that was beautifully written! thanks for the very long update!
What a wonderful chapter! I can’t wait for Thursday…OH..for your American friends, like myself, you should post a “victory chapter” on our Tuesday night. Must get to bed have to be at the voting booth at 6:30am. PPS
These 14 pages read like 2 – they flew by – so beautiful and touching. Your writing is such that I feel the passion and the love radiating from these 2 women. Here’s hoping there’s another 14 pg chapter waiting for me after I cast my vote in the big election on Tuesday……
awww – what a heart tearing story! I was so exicited about your fantastic loooong post! Thanks so much! And please post again before your trip – there is just no way that I survive the absence of your story for such a long time…. :)
Okay, they have fallen in love with each other and are not even in the same country, what is the next step? I hope that the survive this time away from each other. It also gives Tina some time to end her marriage to Helena.
” I needed to hear your voice one last time before I left. ” OMG, what an admission !! How could she hung up right after saying this ?! Well, actually… Actually, I can certainly see why she would do that, she just wasn’t ready to face the consequences of such a revelation, but at the same time she desperately needed to say those words to Tina for somehow it must be a relief for her… But how could she leave Tina like that ? With those words ?… This is so heartwrenching, no to mention excruciating ! … Anyway, off to read your last update now !
WOW This is so freaking good!
Wow…now thats what you call a chapter..nicely done love:) I am loving this story K…absolutely great…cant wiat for more….how many pages can you do this time;)
Finally caught up…phew..Fab update, great story telling but what do you mean by “…Since she couldn’t save herself.”?? I’m officially worried now, is Bette sick??Answers, please! ;)
ok, i’m dying here. so much love and sooo much pain. great chapter, great story! PPS
wonderful, just wonderful.. pps…
aaaahhhhh i can’t believe u could’nt even give us one kiss, your killing us woman, but i can’t wait to see what happens next!!!!
Thanks for the long post. I can’t wait until you can post an update. I know, I know—greedy, right? Heck, you just posted 14 pages and I’m asking for more! So DEMANDING…LOL! It’s such a bittersweet goodbye, it just broke my heart. Safe travels and PS.
oh wow, that hurt so much, brilliantly done. Thank u. pps