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Dana’s Double Life Chapter 2: Life through the curtains
“You mean Papi? Yeah I met her the other day. She’s nice.” I hear Carmen reply.
For those of you who haven’t been keeping up, Papi’s Lara’s new “Latino” girlfriend. From what Lara has told me, she’s the “Hottest, prettiest, and most sultry girl she has ever met.” Can’t help but feel a little rejected. I guess there will always be that tension between me an Lara. It’s nothing that I can’t handle. If I can hack up a criminal like sushi and be home in time for Jay Leno, then I can surely handle a little tension from my ex.
The group suddenly turns their gaze to the front door. Lara happily walks into the Planet wearing her chef’s uniform with a huge goofy grin on her face while the Latino girl next to her whispers something into her ear. It must have been pretty funny. We could hear her giggle from across the room. Well at least some one was able to make her laugh.
“Hey guys.” Lara greets us with a cheery tone in her voice. Her face grows a little more serious as her eyes connect with my own. “Hey Dana.”
Yeah. The drop in tone was definitely noted as she greeted me. I could feel the uncomfortable tension growing between us and the group. It’s about as thick as blood right now as they make up some lame excuse to leave. God I really hate Drama. I could kill some one, serve a tennis ball, win a tournament and wing an important interview and still come out on top looking like a pro. But when it comes to dealing my ex and my current girlfriend in the same room together, I’m about as helpless as a palsy victim performing brain surgery.
“Shit uhm. Al I got to go. I’ll call you later babe.”
I hate myself for giving her such a lame goodbye. It sounded so obvious I was trying to get out of the situation. Alice seems to think so to. I can tell by the puzzled look on her face.
“Oh well. I’m still meeting up with you tonight right? We have that party to go to at Wax later on.”
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Oh my god, it’s Papi, did Al say her name right this time? I love it… and I like Dexter… but, then again, I’m a serial killer… Hmmm… maybe I should be careful… LOL… loving it and waiting for more
If Dana tells her, maybe Alice will join in with the killings? She’s got that investigative nose for such things right? Hey in this fanfic anything can happen which is why I love it.
If a person can killer the whole gang and love this story You are in girl. I can’t even picture Dana doing anything like this. Mild manner Tennis player. So Lara is with Papi.How long will this last. thanks for posting
I really like this story because it reminds of ‘Dexter’ and I love that show also..I really love how you put Dana in that situation and I love your writing!! keep it going!!!
Great stuff, looking forward to the enxt chapter :) Will she get caught is the question?
Poor Dana, that’s a bit too much for anyone to have on their plate. I liked the inclusion of Papi, nicely done…although I get the sneaking suspicion she’ll factor into the plot as more than just Lara’s girlfriend. The court scene made me think of Boondock Saints…does Dana give a bendiction after she kills? :) I hope she’ll get up the nerve to tell Alice before the pressure makes her crack. Damn, I’m loving this!
Another great part. Yeah, definetly a troubling life. I wonder if Dana’s going to open up about her other life to Alice!