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Family Woman (Chapter 12) – The Finale
“Shhh,” came the chuckled response from under the covers, before Tina continued her enticing talent.
Bette tried to be quiet, but as she felt close, she moaned again. “T …”
This time, Tina didn’t even stop. She had confidence that they could pull it off this once – to give Bette an orgasm without being interrupted. She was beginning to master the art of it.
Thankfully Bette stayed quiet for long enough, and she came hard before they heard the little thump they expected from down the hall.
“Shit!” Tina laughed quietly, slipping the shorts back onto Bette before climbing back up the athletic body from underneath the covers. “Shhh!”
“You shhh!” Bette laughed back, pulling Tina in close as they both pretended they’d been asleep the entire time as they heard the little voice from the hall.
“Mommy! Mommy! Mommy!” the little squeal was quickly accompanied with an excited jump onto the bed, which brought Bette some much-predicted pain. She groaned as she rolled onto her back, always finding a smile for her little girl.
“Morning Angie.”
“Hi Mommy,” the child smiled back, cuddling in with her mother and feeling totally at ease.
Tina was just trying not to laugh at the fact that it was always Bette getting kneed or accidentally hit in the midst of one their games. “I’ll be right back,” she smiled, pulling herself out of bed to wash her hands.
“Do you have to pee?” Angelica asked with big, curious eyes. Tina couldn’t help but laugh at the bold question, like so many others like it. She had learned over time that it was best to simply answer with honesty.
“Yes, baby. Mommy has to pee.”
Bette tried desperately not to laugh, holding their daughter with a protective nature she’d always felt over her. She would do anything for Angelica. “Why don’t we make Mommy something nice for breakfast?”
“Cheerios?”
Bette had to laugh. “Sure, hunny. Cheerios.”
“I can makes it all by myself.”
“Make, Angie. And yes, you can make it all by yourself.”
While they were taking out the cereal in the kitchen, Angelica turned to Bette with her usual curiosity. “When did you know you wanted to be a mommy forever?”
Although absurd, Bette liked to answer all the questions she could. “The very first time I knew was with Momma T. She always wanted babies, but I wasn’t sure at first.”
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(67 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
You deserve to be in the spotlight. I am going to watch Family Man although, somehow, I think I’m going to be disappointed in it after your story. Thanks again and good luck to you.
From my very short experience in the land of fan fiction, I believe you truly deserve the accolade as your stories have kept me thoroughly entertained. Bette Porter is so much sexier than Nicolas Cage!
Spotlight totally deserved, Biissexi! I don’t think I’ve missed a story from you ever since you started writing on this site, and I have loved witnessing the evolution of your stories and of your writing. You have sometimes taken risks, and it has always paid off. You’re one precious writer on this site. Now about the story, I’ve loved it from beginning to end! I’m always a sucker for Tibette versions of existing movies, and you haven’t disappointed with this one. Glad you changed the end though. Oh, and YAY for letting Bette keep the watch, LOL! Thanks a lot for this story, and please come back soon with a new one! ;) K.
Biislovelybeautifulsexi. Loved it bi thank you so much for such a beautifully story. In my long list of favorites of all time. Have a great semester :)
*bows deeply* That, chica was…gracefully, charmingly, and fufillingly done. Yet another reason you should be in the spotlight. :) I can only hope my creative writing piece turns out as beautifully as this. Good luck on the essay and midterm – I’m struggling through Stats this quarter so, I’m feeling you. Don’t forget to take some time for you, even when it gets crazy. Thank you for the journey!
Once again, I’m in awe of a beautifully written story – congratulations on the Spotlight – truly well deserved.
This was a great story, really loved it. Thanks so much for sharing your writing talent with this site. Looking forward to your next story.
CONGRATS!!! on the spotlight. And I loved every minute of this story. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.
Love, love, loved this story. Soo glad you got the spotlight and that you are being recognized for your great storytelling. It is fun to see you soo excited and am so happy that this site is here to bring us all so much joy! Thank you again for all of your stories and looking forward to new ones. Now,… get back to your homework! :)
loved this… and like i said i am sad to see it end… but school is more important… come back with another story when you have time… thanks again…
This whole story had me rather confused for quite some time. I haven´t seen Family Man, so nothing made sense. Well it does now and I´m definitely going back to reread the entire piece. I´m awed by your talent and you definitely deserve the spotlight. Thank you for every beautiful story you have shared.
THANK YOU!
So sweet – great ending, b! – Thanks for writing it. :) *And please feel free to write more when you get the chance… Presidents Day?… Spring Break?… rignt now?… ;-D
A perfect ending to a truly wonderful story! To quote the great Bette Porter: You are such a fu**ing rock star! And congratulations on the well deserved appearance in the Spotlight. I know I should be responsible and say concentrate on your school work…… but I’m not going to be! I want another story!!! Oh, and keep breathing into that paper bag! Thank you for one of my favourite stories.
Thank you for giving us this beautiful love story, enjoyed it all the way!!!!
Thank you for posting this chapter, I love this ending (way better than the movie). You deserve to be in the spotlight, you’re a great writer and your stories are fresh and captivating. Please post soon!
Your story was thoroughly enjoyable and you more than deserve to be in the spotlight. I have read more than a few of your stories on this site and loved them, you write Bette and Tina so well especially the sexual side of their life, and when Angie is thrown in, how can one go wrong.
You definitely deserve to be in the spotlight. Love this story and the what a wonderful ending. Thank you.
I loved this story from beginning to the end. You always come through for our girls. I can’t wait for your next story. In the meantime, I am going to re-read your other stories. Your stories always make my day.
Ahhhhhh pure perfection! when i saw that you’d posted i couldn’t smile wide enough! i have adored this story from the first to the last chapter, you’re so talented i could read your stories allllll day :) so glad you’ve confirmed you’re writing something else and congratulations on being in the spotlight…truly deserved ;)
Thank you so much for this wonderfully romantic story. I think it was one of the most enjoyable rides I had in this site.
What a way to end the story. NC17 and A HAPPY ENDING. ..any new story soon?
You deserve to be in the spotlight.I love your stories,and this is a beautiful one.Thank you very much and come back soon.
“You’re simply the best, better than all the rest” Tina Turner “The Best”
That was excellent and awesome ending, so happy for them and glad they are together at the ending. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon with a new 1 soon, thanks!
Whoo-hoo…a personal shout-out!!! Thank you Bi…for the fantastic story! I really loved how you ended it. It is a nice wrap up…with your dash of Alice-humor; Tibette something-something, and then the cuteness of Angie and family togetherness. All wrapped up in this chappy. You are good…and so deserving of The Spotlight! I hope that others who have not read you before, will finally get to experience your creative gifts and your kindness to your fandom. Thanks again!!!! (hah-hah…for a Canadian you have a great sense of humor. LOL!)
That was one of the best I’ve read. I cant wait for your next one :)
Hey biissexi, That was so much fun and so hot. Firstly I lvoe how insane Bette was. Even Alice was lost for words. Especailly as it was her future self that brought them back together. Their need was intense and so sweetly consummated. Just perfection. An adorable finale to a fabulous fan fiction. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
This story is full of fun, love, and passion, just like your other stories. I just can’t stop myself reading it. But also I am terribly at waiting for next chapter, that is why I waited until you finished this story. And it definitely deserves waiting. You are one of my favorite writers on this side since ‘Days without you’, you deserve the spotlight!!! Hope we can see your works again soon.
I just love this story! It’s my second time re-read this! :-PThanks a lot Biissexi for sharing this beautifully written heart warming story! (^,^)_V