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    GETTING TO THE GOOD PART—Ch. 1

    Story written on January 19, 2007 by toribio.
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    Number of Comments: 27
    Words: 5400
    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=64097
    Author Notes:

    A different spin on the B&T characters

     

     

    “James I need you to cancel all my appointments for today and try your best to get them all rescheduled but before you do that can you please get Alan Kellerman on the phone. I’ll be in my office.”

     

     

    Things at the office were a bit tense until Bette had to leave. As she expected Alan passed on the possibility of meeting with Bette again. He was temperamental to begin with but canceling their meeting on the day of was a mild insult according to Alan.

     

     

    As Bette drove along the coast towards Peggy’s beachfront property she was silently griping about the weeks she lost by canceling on Kellerman today. She put the work in to find out all she could about this artist only for it to go to shit so she could deliver some artwork to their new board member.  More and more Peggy was reminding Bette of Helena she was annoyed with Helena’s tendency to tell her to drop everything. Now she would have to start all over again first she’d have to find someone new to court and convince to display their work for the upcoming exhibition.

     

     

    Bette followed the delivery truck to a gorgeous beach house. Bette had to give it to Peggy she had good taste the house was exquisite Bette could only dream that one day she’d have a place like this. The best feature was the houses location, the beach had always been a big draw for Bette and this house was right on the beach. A woman walking along the water captured Bette’s attention. For some unknown reason Bette found herself smiling at the sight of this woman. The woman had her jeans rolled up as she walked along the edge of the water. Her beautiful blond hair shining in the sunlight. When a big rush of water came at the blond Bette heard her sweet laugh as she tried to make her way out of the water.

     

     

    As the delivery guys were unloading Peggy’s purchases Bette walked away to get a better view of the woman as she began to walk further away. She couldn’t seem to take her eyes off this woman the way she walked the way the wind was blowing through her hair. There was just something about her that made Bette smile.

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    1. HEY T! YOU HAVE ANOTHER WONDERFULL STORY STARTING AND IT SHOULD BE QUIET INTERESTING TK AN ARTIST.YOU CANT LEAVE US HANGING.you said you had alot things going on butt you have to find the time to come back for updates for both stories..tk a daughterinlaw not for long with bette around!

    3. Toribio…this was absolutely wonderful. It really evoked images of what your narration describes. I hope you’ll continue it. If you do, it is sure to be one of the seminal pieces. It grabbed me…it’s really quite good. Please continue.

    4. Oh, no you didn’t just leave me hangin like that! Hmph, the nerve! LOL! Come on, you’re killing me here! I have tpo know if it was Tina she turned around and saw. i bet it was…. uess I’ll have to wait and see. Please post soon!

    6. i think you should continue with that…so tina is a daughter-in-law? and this is her who just came in? i hope bette won’t get involved with helena again

    18. This story is going to be full of twists and turns. Bette has to meet with Helena 3 times a month and TIna is an artist, who is Peggy’s daughter in law…..interesting. How long before Bette gets Tina to express her “artistic” abilities in a personal setting ? LOL! Please continue….

    19. Yes you should continue this story. I believe that Bette has found her next artist for the upcoming show. I hope that Tina is not with Helena and that the daughter in-law statement was more of a passing issue. It would not be a good situation for Bette to take Tina away from a Peabody.

    20. A T&B beginning,love them. I hope you continue with this one…Tina is PP’s Daughter-in-Law, now is it through Helena, PP has another Daughter or is it the Son. And to top it T is an Artist. Great Start, looking forward to reading more. Thanks.

    21. I’m hooked! I love any story that features Bette and Peggy. But better than that I love the twist you’ve put on things w/ Bette having already had a failed relationship w/ Helena. This should be very interesting…..Is Tina married to Helena or does Peggy have other children? So excited to read where you go with this story. You are off to a great start so please continue.

    25. Wow T this sounds like another great story! Franklin is an ass through and through. And it’s really not cool for Peggy Peabody to force her daughter in Bette’s face – it’s unethical on Peggy’s part to put Bette into that position. Peggy should pay to have her daughter educated elsewhere…you know she could tell that Bette didn’t want to do this part of the “proposition.” I wonder if Peggy has alterior motives. Tina as an artist sounds very inspirational. Can’t wait for more!

    26. Het Tori, A brilliant beginning. Fabulous to have the gang together and having a blast. Bette was overwhelmed by the beauty she saw on the beach and here’s hoping it is the same beauty now asking her if she needs some assistance. Terrific twist to have Tina (I hope) as the artist even if Bette has to put up with teaching Helena about art. Maybe Bette could use Tina’s paintings as an illustration. Getting to know the painter can only help appreciate the art. As always you have crafted a beautiful drama here. Full of promise and excitment. Please continue soon. A Fan.

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