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GETTING TO THE GOOD PART—Ch. 3
“Hmm it sounds like Peggy picked up on your attraction to Bette. But I think you’re right you need to start off slow and your Ms. Porter might be too much for you after a two year drought. We can go out to a club or a bar you know just to sort of ease our way in.”
“I don’t know. I mean even before I met Will I wasn’t really into that whole club scene.”
“Come on Tina you convinced me to move down here, and don’t get me wrong I love the perks that come with having a best friend that literally lives right on the beach, but I’ve been down here for almost a month and I haven’t gone out once.”
“Please come out with me we can take your baby sister with us you know that Jamie’s going to want to go out. Please pretty please say you’ll go out with us Tina.” Carmen capped of her plea by giving Tina the puppy dog eyes.
“Fine I’ll go out with both of you.” Tina said feeling a bit anxious about caving in so easily but knew that Carmen and her sister could be relentless when they wanted to be.
Carmen threw her arms around Tina, happy that she was finally at a place where she was comfortable going out again.
Tina pulled away. “Don’t be so happy one of you is gonna have to pretend to be with me.”
“Aren’t you the confident one, but you’re right you’re going to get meat-tagged I’ll be your date because it’d be too traumatic for you if your little sister pretended to be your girlfriend.” Carmen shuddered at the thought.
Tina smiled at Carmen’s show of revulsion. “Well thank you for taking the hit and saving me from having to pretend to be with Jamie.”
“It’s not like I’ll be making much of a sacrifice I’ll have the prettiest blond on my arm.” Carmen said as she linked her arm with Tina’s.
“Don’t you forget it. Come on there’s something I need to drop off before we pick up Jamie at the airport.”
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(40 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
“With great effort Bette threw the envelope into the wastebasket.” aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh … . on a positive note, i just LOVE this story and the way it’s unfolding. hope i’m not first.
I know that envelope had better not stayed in that trashcan…what is Bette thinking? I think they all need to meet up at whatever club Tina & Carmen are going to. More please I love this story.
love this T and yes try to keep them away from each other for a little while.. but they soon will meet again.please! p.p.s.
i’m in love!!! post again soon please……thanx……
OK – so how long is it going to take Bette to look inside the envelope – and find an original Kennard!
Oh, nooooo! Toribio, I can’t believe you did it to me again! Jeez, I know it’s going to happen, and still I dive head first into it!… Yes indeed, you HAVE done it, you’ve made me addicted to this story, just like you’ve made me to “A helping hand…”… Arrgghhh… Okay, I guess that’s what talent is all about… No, seriously, I know you don’t have too much time, and I should be just happy that you decided to continue this story, but I’m gonna have to have an update of this in a near future, this is soooooooo good! And I think we all need Bette and Tina to see each other again… Okay, well, I guess this means Thank you for another brillant tale! Please come back soon.
so good, so intriguing…i hope they will all meet at the club and after that won’t be able to stay away from each other
We all know as soon as Bette views the picture, now safely in her desk drawer, she will realize the true identity of “Kennard.” I am certain that That Tina’s style runs through all her work, no matter what the medium may be. Make her look at it soon. PPS.
She should open it up because it just might give her a hint that Kennard is Tina. The style and the possible subject matter may lead Bette in the right direction.
Between the pursuit of the elusive Kennard and the romantic slant of it, I’m not sure which aspect’s got me hooked more. I really enjoy reading this story.
lovely
ARG! SO good! But why is it not longer?! ;) Sorry, just can’t get enough of this story.
Hope Bette will call Tina after she open the letter,or envelope. Love this I believe Bette will turn Tinas world up side down. If Helena finds out that is when the dyke drama will come in thanks
great post, Bette must to go and get the envelope back from the wastebasket!
OPen it already and then call Tina.
this is a really great story – i hope to read more chapters from u soon! =) you’re a very talented writer =)
Oh this is so good and let see more, thanks!
Love it. Thank you.
This is a really good story…and I so enjoy reading it
really enjoying this ride…
Toribio, Another wonderful installment to this charming and delightful story. It is so full of near misses and almosts that is could be cynical however given your light and gentle touch it is full of hope and inspiration. Bette and Tina have both been hit by a bolt of lightening and are now trying to find out what the hell it was and ahow it has changed them. Good to see that Alice is still the one with her foot in her mouth syndrome particularly around Bette’s love life. What you captured brilliantly was the group conversation as all the characters had their own voice and story to tell. Good to see that TIna has Carmen and Jamie to provide her with the truth and to try to get her to leave the santuary of the Peabody mansion and live a little. Thank you for painting such a bright and hopeful pisture. I love it. Much gratitude from your Loyal Fan.
I didn’t think I would like the Bette and Tina cool down you mentioned, but what do I know? I’m totally digging it!! :D