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God she’s beautiful chpt. 16
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Bette blushes…
Bette: I hope that I can handle it
Tina: It’s funny that you said that because I was just thinking the same thing too…
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DAY 10…THAT EVENING…
The time is 20 minutes to seven and the brunette is running late…She can’t find her brush…The one that untangles the hair…She finds it…She grabs her packed bag and she exits the house…She throws it in the backseat and starts the car…Off she goes…
MEANWHILE AT TINA’S HOUSE…
Eric isn’t home this is his night to work over night…She had time to herself and defintely wanted to spend it with Bette…The blond gets the basket off of the counter…Inside lies a surprise for her date…Will tell later though…Her cellphone rings…
Tina: Where are you?
Bette: Outside. Are you ready?
Tina: I am I’m on my way out now
Bette: Don’t keep me waiting
Tina: I won’t I’ll be right out
Bette: Ok
Tina ends the call and sprays herself down one more time…She turns around in a circle about 5 times before leaving…It helps when your in a rush the smell isn’t too strong…She gathers her things and exits the house…
Bette is outside the passenger side….She smiles at the sight of seeing Tina…The blond reaches her and hugs her…She also kisses her on the cheek…
Tina: I can’t wait till we get there
Bette: Me either. Are we going to change here now or later?
Tina: We can change right now
Tina takes the blind fold out the basket…
Tina: Turn around and put your hands up
Bette looks at Tina
Bette: Are you kidding me?
Tina: Yeah I am just turn around and close your eyes
Bette: Ok
Bette turns around and Tina blind folds her…
Tina: Can you see?
Bette: No
Tina: Are you sure there is no peaking
Bette: I’m sure I swear
Tina smiles
Tina: Ok lets go
Tina guides Bette to the car…She watches the brunette’s bottom that rattles back and forth with every step…She gets wet at the thought of Bette in a thong
Tina: Ok now watch your leg so I can close the door
Tina closes the door…Tina makes her way over to the driver’s side…She gets in and takes off…
Tina: You trust me?
Bette: Yes I do. Otherwise I wouldn’t be sitting here blind folded
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Im hooked on your story keep them coming, every chapter is better
well to answer your question your doing pretty darn good, I normally don’t comment but I do occasionally with the stories I enjoy a lot and yours is one of them so keep the chapters coming.
such a sweet moment of evenin to spend. Tina gotta tell Eric…goodbye.
I love the way Bette and Tina’s relationship is progressing. I can’t wait for Tina to tell Eric to kiss off.
You are doing beautifully. Please give us more
You doing great and please continue. Good chapter, what a beautiful surprise Tina give Bette and they are have a good time together and can’t wait to see what’s next, oh when Eric is gone, I think the sooner the better. Post soon please, thanks!
You are doing just fine….tou will do even better when you manage to get rid of Eric….for good. I have a feeling that B&T are not going to have that “consumate moment” until Eric is out of the picture. The build up is nerve racking! Five sparklers for you!
youre doing great no need to rush.. Bette can take some cold shower for a little bit more..lol..great chapter post soon thanks V
Hey I’m just catching up Whoa! It’s just really great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
Your doing great, love this story. Tina needs to end it with Eric so that she and Bette and really move on. Bette’s not gonna share. There so cute and romantic, oooooooooooooooooh I get goose bumps with those two. Keep it coming.
I like Tina’s assertiveness. Let’s see Bette in action too? Would be great if Tina walked in and Eric’s things were gone from the apartment.
You are doing great Bette and Tina seems so happy together. Now lets get rid of Eric. thanks
SWT piece of literature ‘Im luvin it’…it’s tempting, addictive, & delicious…Now lets kill the love triangle&jus ditch Eric shall we…PLEASE Post s0oN…
You’re doing good but Bette is too Type A to let her woman be shacking up with someone else. She’s like the King of the Jungle and Tina literally is her pride. It’s a little odd that she’s this understanding. Bette’s not into sharing anything that’s hers…especially anything to do with Tina, the one she loves. So it’s time to either have Bette put her foot down or have Tina kick eric to the curb!
just caught up. you are doing great. love this B&T beginning they are so sweet together
You are doing wonderfully. Love this story. Post soon please.
Absolutely – Positively – Great !
Thanks for writing – Love This.
You’re doing great! I like this playful Bette and Tina, too much stress is not good for anyone! I would like to see Tina come clean w/ Eric and move things along w/ Bette. We know there’s chemistry between the two of them, now lets see that ignite.
Keep up the great work!
Good Stuff. Keep it going.
This chapter was very, very good. Vakkav, I just love this new begining for Bette and Tina, it is soooo cute and I love that they are spending a lot of time together. I hope that the opening of Bette’s Gallery will not ruin anything with them. Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter girl. Buh-bye. :-)
this was just plain fun and sweet. they are so cute together. love the way your writing this. keep up the great work.
When.I tell you this is a good fucking story, omg I’m so.in love with Tina right now she is just awesome, so carefree and the way you write her…in intrigued to the max