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God she’s beautiful chpt. 16
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Tina: Bette lets have a personal conversation
Bette: Ok ask me anything. Anything you like?
Tina: Well how many women have you been with?
Bette: Alot a whole lot
Tina: Like what 20 maybe 25
Bette: No like 35
Tina: Ouch your hot. Make em sizzle huh?
Bette: Not really I just wasn’t ready for a relationship
Tina: Oh so is that still your special activity or did you decide to change a bit?
Bette: Well actaually I decided to change a whole lot
Tina: Yeah why?
Bette: Because I met this beautiful woman that I think about everyday. From the top of her head to the bottom of her feet. I’m anxious to smell her scent. I love the way that she smells all over.
Tina: She sounds like a clean lady
Bette: Oh she is. But what I love most is she’s smart, ***** and beautiful
Tina blushes
Tina: Yeah and whatelse?
Bette: I wish that she would kiss me
Tina smiles at the request
Tina: Is that something that you would want?
Bette:No that something that I want and need
Tina smiles…She pulls the car over to the side of the road…She puts it in park…She unfastens her seat belt and leans over towards Bette…She runs her hand up and down the brunette’s pure skin…
Tina: Come here
Tina pulls Bette into her…She matches her lips with the brunette’s as their tongue’s dance…Tina sucks the bunette’s tongue hard as Bette moans in her mouth…The brunette opens her mouth wider as Tina penetrates her deeper tingling her throat…Tina releases the kiss…
Tina: How was that?
Bette: Perfect
Tina: Alright lets go
Tina puts the car in drive and pulls of…They are minutes away from Laguna Beach…Tina thought that it would be a good idea…
TIna pulls up and parks the car…She hops out and goes over to the passenger side and she assists Bette…The brunette gets out of the car and smiles…
Bette: Are we at the beach?
Tina: Yes. Just wait till you see what beach
Bette: I’ve never been here at night before
Tina: Well like you told me it’s a first time for everything
The brunette blushes
Tina: Come on where not there yet
Tina takes Bette and her items into her hands…She slowly guides Bette to their location…When she gets there her friend David is waiting there with a few of his friends from their music class…They will be performing a few pieces for them underneath the already smokey fire and a blanket waiting for them with their wine glasses and a nice bucket of ice with a bottle of expensive wine…Everyone is quiet until Tina gives the note to say surprise.. Which is when she taps her nose…Tina and Bette step over the banket
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Im hooked on your story keep them coming, every chapter is better
well to answer your question your doing pretty darn good, I normally don’t comment but I do occasionally with the stories I enjoy a lot and yours is one of them so keep the chapters coming.
such a sweet moment of evenin to spend. Tina gotta tell Eric…goodbye.
I love the way Bette and Tina’s relationship is progressing. I can’t wait for Tina to tell Eric to kiss off.
You are doing beautifully. Please give us more
You doing great and please continue. Good chapter, what a beautiful surprise Tina give Bette and they are have a good time together and can’t wait to see what’s next, oh when Eric is gone, I think the sooner the better. Post soon please, thanks!
You are doing just fine….tou will do even better when you manage to get rid of Eric….for good. I have a feeling that B&T are not going to have that “consumate moment” until Eric is out of the picture. The build up is nerve racking! Five sparklers for you!
youre doing great no need to rush.. Bette can take some cold shower for a little bit more..lol..great chapter post soon thanks V
Hey I’m just catching up Whoa! It’s just really great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
Your doing great, love this story. Tina needs to end it with Eric so that she and Bette and really move on. Bette’s not gonna share. There so cute and romantic, oooooooooooooooooh I get goose bumps with those two. Keep it coming.
I like Tina’s assertiveness. Let’s see Bette in action too? Would be great if Tina walked in and Eric’s things were gone from the apartment.
You are doing great Bette and Tina seems so happy together. Now lets get rid of Eric. thanks
SWT piece of literature ‘Im luvin it’…it’s tempting, addictive, & delicious…Now lets kill the love triangle&jus ditch Eric shall we…PLEASE Post s0oN…
You’re doing good but Bette is too Type A to let her woman be shacking up with someone else. She’s like the King of the Jungle and Tina literally is her pride. It’s a little odd that she’s this understanding. Bette’s not into sharing anything that’s hers…especially anything to do with Tina, the one she loves. So it’s time to either have Bette put her foot down or have Tina kick eric to the curb!
just caught up. you are doing great. love this B&T beginning they are so sweet together
You are doing wonderfully. Love this story. Post soon please.
Absolutely – Positively – Great !
Thanks for writing – Love This.
You’re doing great! I like this playful Bette and Tina, too much stress is not good for anyone! I would like to see Tina come clean w/ Eric and move things along w/ Bette. We know there’s chemistry between the two of them, now lets see that ignite.
Keep up the great work!
Good Stuff. Keep it going.
This chapter was very, very good. Vakkav, I just love this new begining for Bette and Tina, it is soooo cute and I love that they are spending a lot of time together. I hope that the opening of Bette’s Gallery will not ruin anything with them. Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter girl. Buh-bye. :-)
this was just plain fun and sweet. they are so cute together. love the way your writing this. keep up the great work.
When.I tell you this is a good fucking story, omg I’m so.in love with Tina right now she is just awesome, so carefree and the way you write her…in intrigued to the max