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God she’s beautiful chpt. 16
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Tina: Sit down
Bette does…Tina steps behind her
Tina: Ok ready 1…2…3..She taps her nose and undoes the fold
Everyone: SURPRISE!
Bette places her hands over her eyes…Tears weld in them as they fall slowly down her cheek…David gets tears in his eyes as well
Bette: Tina! My god when did you have time?
Tina: I planned it this morning while I was at the planet. The feeling that you gave off made me want to share this with you. I understand how you feel about me and my situation. But baby that ain’t stopping me from being next to you. I care for you alot Elizabeth Porter and I want you to know that
Bette’s tears weld up more
Bette: Thank you for saying that and thank you for all of this. I don’t know what I should say or do-
Tina: Shhhh
She places her index finger over Bette’s mouth
Tina: Let’s have a good time ok. Remember no worries
Bette smiles and wipes her face
Bette: No worries
Tina smiles and hugs the brunette…She kisses her on the cheek
Tina: Let me introduce you to my friends
Tina does…She pours two glasses of wine…She gives one to Bette…The two toast before clicking their glasses together…Tina and Bette kiss again…Tina turns towards David
Tina: Play us something
David: I thought you’d never ask
David and his friends play their tunes for Bette and Tina…Bette held Tina in between takes and they even danced to a couple of songs…David surprised Tina by adding a view more songs…Bette and Tina clapped at the ending of their last song…Tina and Bette stand
Tina/Bette: Bravo bravo
David and his friends stand and bow…This makes Bette and Tina laugh…
David: Tina we must go
Tina checks the clock
Tina: I’m so sorry I lost track of time
David: It’s ok you deserved it. But otherwise enjoy your date
Tina smiles
Tina: I will
David and his friends say their goodbye’s before being on their way…Tina turns to Bette
Tina: So how was it?
Bette: It was the best gift I’ve ever had. Thank you
Tina: Your welcome. I hoped that you liked dinner
Bette: I did. Chicken Cordon bleu is one of my favorites. And to have it by you is a blessing for me anyway
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Im hooked on your story keep them coming, every chapter is better
well to answer your question your doing pretty darn good, I normally don’t comment but I do occasionally with the stories I enjoy a lot and yours is one of them so keep the chapters coming.
such a sweet moment of evenin to spend. Tina gotta tell Eric…goodbye.
I love the way Bette and Tina’s relationship is progressing. I can’t wait for Tina to tell Eric to kiss off.
You are doing beautifully. Please give us more
You doing great and please continue. Good chapter, what a beautiful surprise Tina give Bette and they are have a good time together and can’t wait to see what’s next, oh when Eric is gone, I think the sooner the better. Post soon please, thanks!
You are doing just fine….tou will do even better when you manage to get rid of Eric….for good. I have a feeling that B&T are not going to have that “consumate moment” until Eric is out of the picture. The build up is nerve racking! Five sparklers for you!
youre doing great no need to rush.. Bette can take some cold shower for a little bit more..lol..great chapter post soon thanks V
Hey I’m just catching up Whoa! It’s just really great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
Your doing great, love this story. Tina needs to end it with Eric so that she and Bette and really move on. Bette’s not gonna share. There so cute and romantic, oooooooooooooooooh I get goose bumps with those two. Keep it coming.
I like Tina’s assertiveness. Let’s see Bette in action too? Would be great if Tina walked in and Eric’s things were gone from the apartment.
You are doing great Bette and Tina seems so happy together. Now lets get rid of Eric. thanks
SWT piece of literature ‘Im luvin it’…it’s tempting, addictive, & delicious…Now lets kill the love triangle&jus ditch Eric shall we…PLEASE Post s0oN…
You’re doing good but Bette is too Type A to let her woman be shacking up with someone else. She’s like the King of the Jungle and Tina literally is her pride. It’s a little odd that she’s this understanding. Bette’s not into sharing anything that’s hers…especially anything to do with Tina, the one she loves. So it’s time to either have Bette put her foot down or have Tina kick eric to the curb!
just caught up. you are doing great. love this B&T beginning they are so sweet together
You are doing wonderfully. Love this story. Post soon please.
Absolutely – Positively – Great !
Thanks for writing – Love This.
You’re doing great! I like this playful Bette and Tina, too much stress is not good for anyone! I would like to see Tina come clean w/ Eric and move things along w/ Bette. We know there’s chemistry between the two of them, now lets see that ignite.
Keep up the great work!
Good Stuff. Keep it going.
This chapter was very, very good. Vakkav, I just love this new begining for Bette and Tina, it is soooo cute and I love that they are spending a lot of time together. I hope that the opening of Bette’s Gallery will not ruin anything with them. Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter girl. Buh-bye. :-)
this was just plain fun and sweet. they are so cute together. love the way your writing this. keep up the great work.
When.I tell you this is a good fucking story, omg I’m so.in love with Tina right now she is just awesome, so carefree and the way you write her…in intrigued to the max