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How to lose a girl in ten days
Story written on June 22, 2008 by geek in the pink.
She took her phone and dialed. Jenny.
“Jenny, hi what’s up?” Tina whispered.
“Why are you whispering? Oh my god! You’re at her place! You are, aren’t you? The first night I can’t believe it!”
“Jen, I’m not going to sleep with her…”
“Oh you’re such a hussy, you can’t hide those lying eyes”
“No, no because I can practice some self control unlike some people.”
“That hurt…kind of” Jenny said.
“I’m going to dangle the bait.” Tina explained.
“What’s the bait?” Jenny asked.
“I’M the bait!” Tina exclaimed.
“Oh,”
“Yeah,” Tina said. She heard Bette coming up the stairs. “Listen I can’t talk I have to go.”
“Ok, call me later. You slut” Jenny said laughing.
Tina left the bedroom putting her bag on the nightstand.
“There you go,” Bette said giving her a beer.
“Thank you” Tina said, standing next to Bette.
“Your welcome” Bette said sipping her beer. The music played, they stood there and drank.
Tina looked at Bette, Bette looked at her and before they knew it they were kissing.
The beer forgotten Bette’s hand went to cup Tina’s breast. Tina moaned loving the feeling of Bette’s hands.
She grabbed Bette’s head deepening the kiss leading Bette towards the bed.
They fell on the bed and Bette stopped the kiss.
“Too fast” Bette panted.
“Too fast.” Tina agreed, shocked that Bette was the one who stopped.
“I want you to respect me” Bette said.
“I do” Tina said, still not believing that Bette was the one to stop.
“Okay,” Bette said trying to get her calm her heart.
“And I want your respect.” Tina said.
“I respect you for respecting me.” Bette said.
“I respect that” Tina answered.
“Good.” Bette walked Tina out. Tina walked out ‘forgetting’ her bag.
She walked towards the taxi and saw Bette waving to her from the balconey.
“Good night Tina Kennard” Bette yelled to her. Then silently added “oh, you’re already falling in love with me”
Tina waved to her and said quietly, “I’m going to make you wish you were dead”
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(56 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Priceless :-)
The dialogue was stupendous – especially the one word each round at the bar. I love this movie and your story is a wonderful take on the idea. PPS!
This is really good ! I’m loving this ! That’s a great idea you had turning that flick into a Tibette fanfic. This is hilarious ! PPS
Thisgreat glad to see a diferent beginning thanks
I am totally loving it. Can’t wait for more!
Bring it on… this is different and i love it! can’t wait to see what they both do to each other,lol :)PPS
I have a tape! LOL I love this movie.. PPS :D
awesome story and great start!! loved the movie!do we get a ‘she-kroll’? LOL!! please post soon!
This is going to be fun. I so loved the movie. Bring on the next chapter soon please. Thanks
THIS IS GOOD