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I have to have her.
Oh my god, did I just say that out loud. To a perfect, and yes I do mean perfect stranger?
She slowly turns to me, and gives me a quizzical look.
“Well I am sure it keeps you busy. It looks beautiful in here. I have walked by here a few times before, but was a little intimidated to come in. I don’t know very much about art, and didn’t want to seem like an uneducated dolt.”
I look at her and see total honesty in her words, and on her face.
“You would never be considered an uneducated dolt, I am sure by anyone.” I manage to utter. “Please feel free to walk around, I have no plans this evening that are demanding, so I am free to give you a tour if you would like?” Hoping she accepts with all of my being.
“Um, I really should go wait with my car”, she chokes out, as I walk closer towards her.
“In case they show up early.”
Disappointed, I manage to grab one my business cards from the counter. I write my cell number on the back, hoping she gets the hint to call me. I pass her the card as she walks toward the door leading out.
“Please come by, or call me if you would like the tour. I would be honored to show you how intelligent you are in regards to art, and to personally educate you on the points you aren’t aware of.”
She offers her hand to shake, and thanks me once again for my time, and the use of the phone.
“Tina?”
She turns to me in the doorway.
“Yes?”
“You do know you owe me a favor now right?” I cockily throw out to her surprise.
“Um, uh, I am not sure what you mean.” she stumbles out.
“You owe me a favor, for letting you use the phone. And I would like to collect it right now if you don’t mind.” I can’t believe I am being this obvious, but my god, I cannot let her leave with out this one bit from her.
“Uh, oh, okay, what? I mean what do you want as your favor?” She looks terrified, but a little intrigued too I think.
“Your full name Tina, just your full name.”
Relief, and it looks like a little disappointment wash over her face as she takes in my request.
“It’s Kennard. Tina Kennard.” She looks at me one more time, then turns and walks out of the gallery.
Tina Kennard, Tina Kennard. It is a chant, a hymn, a song that lifts me higher into the night, until I see her once againTBC?
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(47 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
Appears to be a good start to me. I like the bit of twist in how they met. Besides were always suckers for new B&T beginings. Looking forward to the next update.
Viva! A new TiBette story. It’s a wonderful start. Please do go on. =)
“TBC??” .. my responce HELL YEA! :D
I must confess I have not read this story yet, but I absolutely LOVE the title: “I Have to Have Her.” Love a woman of conviction! I assume that is Bette speaking.
Great start. Always love B/T beginnings especially when they are different. Looking forward to more.
This kinda reminds me of ‘Umbrella’ by SNS. High compliment, indeed! Please, continue. I Have to Have It!
Yes, techgal is right on – this story does have that “Umbrella” feel to it and by this I mean it is a very interesting twist on a TiBette Beginning and I love it and please, please continue!!!!!! ……… I have to have it, too!!!!!!
Loving the B&T beginnings. Great start, I hope there’s more very soon. Looking forward to see if Tina comes back (but I think we know the answer to that)
i love me some new B&T beginning…please continue
good start….continue soon…..
Please do continue, really like your beginning characterizations of B & T.
Love B & T beginnings, please by all means continue.
I love your beginning. Please let there be no Eric, pretty please. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
good start
this is a great start to a story and for a begginer its amazing. plz continue
WTF Tina would rather go wait by her car than stay and talk to Bette? It’s not like she was out in the sticks and didn’t have much of a choice in places to wait while help came along (I’ve been there and would’ve gladly let Bette keep me company and then taken her home lol). Methinks the majority vote is “yes” so please continue!
I think that I have read one of your stories a few years ago on the other site, but I never saw this one and I must say for your first try at FF this is very good and as another commentor noted, I like the difference in the way they met.
yes, yes, yes more please….we are all suckers for B and T beginnings!!!
Great great great…I love B&T beginnings. Please continue, this was very promising…
please keep going it was a wonderful start
This is good and like it!