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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Twenty Four, Part Two (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on February 27, 2014 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75164
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    Part Two: White Flag of Surrender..

     

    Bette disagreed, of course. But donning a mask of meekness and obedience that she hardly possessed, she decided to steer clear from trouble, clamp her lips shut and keep her opinions to herself. Which, in all honesty, was eating her up inside. She was expressive. She was passionate. And to bottle in such emotions – especially negative ones – was proving to be a daunting task.

     

    She was sorely disappointed. And though she was happy that the deal was just moments from being finalized, she couldn’t help but think of the disservice the simpleness of this gathering was to all the sacrifices she and her dad had endured just to reach this point. She had almost destroyed her relationship with Tina because of this deal. So she thought, at the very least, that they deserved a conference hall that was adequately decorated for this very special occasion. Instead, they were doing it in a room which was, frustratingly, all white and drab and dreary. There were no colorful banners. No eye-appealing tarpaulins. No helium-filled balloons. Heck, there wasn’t even a single plant or flower to decorate and breathe life to the flatlining place. The only source of color in this amazingly boring room was the bright yellow dress that Alice wore and the navy blue asymmetrical blouse that she herself donned. Everyone else, and by that she meant all the fifteen souls allowed inside to witness the signing, were dressed in either black or gray suits – pitifully adding to the monotony of it all.

     

    For the umpteenth time, Bette sighed at the lost possibilities. This thing could’ve been so much more. For all the heartache and drama that led up to this moment, it annoyed her to no apparent end that her and Jill’s dad conspired to downplay its magnanimity and importance by dialing down the flashiness and ostentatiousness that this momentous occasion was due. This was the pinnacle, the climax of months worth of work.. of wooing.. of desperate ass kissing. This was it. And to her, it fell.. well.. flat. This was another moment in her life when reality failed to match up with her grossly unreachable expectations, of the once promising present ending up to be such a disappointment. Bette blew out a breath and leaned back against the wall, angry at herself for bringing this annoyance unto her own self. It was her fault for expecting too much. Cause really, aside from gaudy banners and cheesy balloons, what was she expecting to see during the signing? Did she think that fireworks would come shooting out from the end of their pens after their dads had signed the last page of the contract? Was she expecting confetti to explode out of Joyce’s ass the moment she stops holding in her breath from all the excitement that she was barely bottling in? Did she in any way believe that a choir of angels would suddenly manifest themselves and start singing their heavenly song the exact second Melvin and William stood up and shook hands? What?

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    1. “I see you” very Avatarisque Alch ;) Enjoyed so much where Tina drew the line with Jill. But she didn’t do anything evil with our beloved Tina up in the mountains right? Urgh

    3. Aclh….You really didn’t do that did you? Keep refreshing the page….still the same. You are so very bad. Bad, bad fanfic writer! LOL. I enjoyed the whole Tina / Jill exchange. Good stuff…PPS

    4. Aclh….You really didn’t do that did you? Keep refreshing the page….still the same. You are so very bad. Bad, bad fanfic writer! LOL. I enjoyed the whole Tina / Jill exchange. Good stuff…PPS

    5. Wow, finally Tina is going after her woman. It took a lot of courage for her to face Jill. But now Tina is missing, and Bette is falling apart. Hope Tina is safe.

    6. love this story but for some reason sometimes the pages won’t open then my piece of crap comp freezes and then shuts down. glad you still have it going tho

    7. I love your story and your long chapters. I’m up way pass my bedtime :) I just had to finish reading. Looking forward to losing more sleep reading your story. Thanks

    10. Wonderful update.. Loved the ‘snow fight’ and the fuck, kill, marry game.. they cracked me up.. I hope Tina’s okay.. Thanks for posting. PPS

    12. Awesome! Love the “fuck, kill, marry” game. I recognize the ski trip episode there, will you follow along the lines or gives us an alchy version? Either way it will be loved. Thanks for the update.

    15. I’m so glad to see you posting! Do you need any helping creating books to add chapters to the book? If so, just email me, and I’ll be happy to walk you through it. admin@ lesfanf.com (remove the space).

    16. Alchemy im so pleased you are back posting iv so missed your writing please tell me if you are going to post the wedding chapter soon it seems like years since we read chapter 2 please post soon and im not shy in begging pretty please with a cherry on top pps.

    19. Did this story not get transferred from the old site? That would have been a sad loss. Although, I still have the copy that you sent me Alchy. In a flash drive sitting a fish bowl without fish or water. You are the bomb diggity!

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