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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 20A
“Brilliant.”
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7:10pm
Carmen was pacing on the terrace while on her cell. “Yeah, yeah, yeah. Dana, you shouldn’t be alone. This party is kickin’ and you don’t have to be in the room where they’re smoking pot. You’re an athlete and we don’t want you testing positive for chemicals. There is so much going on here.”
“I don’t know.”
“Do you really want to be hanging out by yourself thinking about all of this?”
“No. It’s just that Alice might not want me there. I mean she called you guys about the break up.”
“Yeah, but I guarantee that she’s going to stay in West Hollywood. You know, Alice, she’s going to want to be around people she knows. She’ll probably go to the Planet.”
Dana thought about it. “Yeah, that is Al’s style.” She smiled thinking about her.
“So you’ll come up.”
“Yeah.”
“Here’s the address. We Mapquested it and there wasn’t a problem. It was exactly right.”
“Okay.”
Carmen gave Dana the address to the weekend party and told her she’d see her soon. She stuffed the phone back into the pocket of her tiny, tiny Daisy Dukes’ shorts and then rubbed her hands together in anticipation. She had talked to Shane on her cell while Shane drove to Alice’s. They had concocted a plan. Everything had to go perfectly to pull it off, but they thought they could do it. Carmen had convinced the producer/host to go along with this little deal once she cut the price of her services in half. Dana and Alice were worth it, she thought. Those two are so not going to break up. If it takes a weekend, they’re getting back together.
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7:30pm
Bette had been waiting for Dr. McPherson’s call. When she got it, most everything was in the car except for the humans. Bette carried Angelica out and Theresa slid in the front passenger’s seat while Bette secured Angelica in her car seat.
“Ready to see Mama Tee? We’re seeing a lot of her today. Let’s not tire her out, all right? You look so pretty, boo.” Angelica was wearing a cute, yellow striped footie and before putting the tiny yellow skull cap on her head, Bette kissed her. “I love you, Angelica.” Theresa smiled. She heard Bette say that to Angelica twenty times a day at least. And yesterday, her daughter had done the same. Angelica was certainly adored by her mothers. The baby’s back was to Theresa in the rear facing car seat and Bette set up a small black and white mobile to amuse her until they got the center.
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Early Merry Christmas to us for getting an update! *doing a happy dance* Be back at some point for a real comment. lol
I’m really pleased to see a new chapter so soon. Excellent plan by Shane and Carmen to get Al and Dana back together. I have a good feeling that it’ll work. Dylan and Hels, what can I say? They’re hot. I dunno how they’re going to get rid of Danny completely, but I’d think besting him would be easy, because he’s a complete idiot. Can’t the Peabody billions just hire a couple of thugs to muscle his sorry behind out of LA? Bette and Tina: Eureka! I think Porter’s got it! I cannot *wait* for Nicastro, Colley, Marcos and any other hatahs to get put in their place. And last but not least, you actually made me like Henry. Maybe it’s Christmas cheer, maybe it’s that you gave him a heart. Either way, I’m very glad you posted, great chapter, and dare I ask that you post again soon? Why yes. Yes, I do. (She who dares, wins!) Post soon, please!
omg omg, I can’t believe you’ve posted again, so soon….Wow, how lucky are we, and regardless is you give us 30+ pages or 60+…it’s great all thru…No, I don’t wan’t this to end, we need to continue it to your version of S4 then S5….pls pls…Tks for your dedication portia
Thank you so much for posting so soon…I loved how you reversed the pov of the infamous photo. Good plan by Shane&Carmen,last chance for Dana & Alice and they better make good use of it. Great news all around for Bette & Tina. I hope Tina’s dream will be a beautiful one this time around. Thank you!
OMG you’re genius for getting danish back together, throw in some hot steamy danish making up and I’ll worship you forever lol :P
wow… i love this story… and i even like your henry now… i love how you are tying everything together… and i can’t wait till your next post…
i so hope that bette’s plan will work, tina will have dreams about bette and angie, and also for al and dana will work things out…thanks for this chapter, i hope that they all can have happy endings
You made me happy Portia and my monday a little less dreary! Merry X-mas to me!
Thank you for posting this chapter. Happy Holidays!
Shane covered her mouth with her hand to keep from laughing. When she was six or seven, she thought that the words lavatory and laboratory were the same words. Her father had caught her with a glass Pyrex dish and a steak knife in the bathroom on her knees, pulling her poop out of the toilet to begin some experiments in her laboratory. She recalled that her dad threw away the baking dish. – LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Nicastro has got to GO! At least Bette got the ok from Henry to see Tina and that Bette is working on a plan. Helena and Dylan was freakin’ HOT!!!!!!!
Ahem…”I only know what I know…the passing chapters will show…you’ve kept TiBette love so alive and so new…cause time after time you’ll hear me say that I’m so lucky to be reading you…Thank you!
Here’s my vote [X] for best reconceptualization of Season 3. I raise my glass in toast to your excellent series. Thanks Portia!
Brilliant. I like the ending of this chapter soooo much better than the last. Lots of good scenes in this chapter from funny to sexy. Thank you so much for this top notch story.
The day seemed to end too perfect for B&T what drama do you have planned next? I just want Tina to get better and get up out of that hospital real soon. Stephanie is going to get the help she needs in jail if she keep taking that man’s money. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
What a brilliant chapter. I’m glad that Bette didn’t end up in the slammer! I can’t believe that Whit wouldn’t have thought of the new Power of Attorney if that was plausable…I’m not seeing that as a viable option,,,get to the retreat, Bette!
Beautiful story! Helena & Dylan are hot!pps. thank you!