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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 20A
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Dana opened the bathroom door and walked out. She tossed her duffle bag onto the bed and looked around the room. She looked out at the spectacular view of the City and leaned all the way to the right and looked left to see if she could spot Alice’s apartment. When her eyes fell in the general area of her building, Dana sighed. She stepped away and back into the room. Dana slid her bag across the bed and walked around the beautiful plantation style 4-poster bed. On the other side, she sat on the bed, pulled a pair of sandals out of her bag and put them on. She stood, walked over to the opened closet and pulled the two doors together to flatten them inside the closet frame.
“Hello,” a voice said softly.
“Hello?” Dana said slowly.
“Hello,” the voice came from the closet.
Dana stepped back, then moved forward and opened the closet about two inches. “Hello?”
The closet doors were pushed forward from the inside and the two doors folded back on either side. The two women stood before each other.
“Dana?” Alice shrieked.
“Alice?” Dana said, totally mystified.
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8:30pm
Helena risked getting a ticket to get to Dylan as quickly as she could. She pushed through the perpetual traffic on Interstate 10, weaving between cars. Helena called Emma Garber and asked that she begin her surveillance on Tuesday at the location she gave her. She was downtown in no time and turning onto Figueroa toward the side street where Dylan lived.
Helena dialed Dylan’s number, but didn’t hit send. She wanted it ready in case she needed it. Helena leapt from her car, beeped her car locked, looked down the street at the men who suddenly seemed very interested in what she was doing, and she urgently shouted up to her. “Dylan! Dylan!”
The apartment door opened and Dylan called to her, “Helena? I’m right here.” Dylan grinned at her as Helena turned and walked the steps to Dylan’s door. Dylan let her pass, then grabbed her arm, pulled her back, and held her against her as she kissed her passionately. One of Helena’s hands came up, moved to the back of Dylan’s neck and drew her closer.
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Early Merry Christmas to us for getting an update! *doing a happy dance* Be back at some point for a real comment. lol
I’m really pleased to see a new chapter so soon. Excellent plan by Shane and Carmen to get Al and Dana back together. I have a good feeling that it’ll work. Dylan and Hels, what can I say? They’re hot. I dunno how they’re going to get rid of Danny completely, but I’d think besting him would be easy, because he’s a complete idiot. Can’t the Peabody billions just hire a couple of thugs to muscle his sorry behind out of LA? Bette and Tina: Eureka! I think Porter’s got it! I cannot *wait* for Nicastro, Colley, Marcos and any other hatahs to get put in their place. And last but not least, you actually made me like Henry. Maybe it’s Christmas cheer, maybe it’s that you gave him a heart. Either way, I’m very glad you posted, great chapter, and dare I ask that you post again soon? Why yes. Yes, I do. (She who dares, wins!) Post soon, please!
omg omg, I can’t believe you’ve posted again, so soon….Wow, how lucky are we, and regardless is you give us 30+ pages or 60+…it’s great all thru…No, I don’t wan’t this to end, we need to continue it to your version of S4 then S5….pls pls…Tks for your dedication portia
Thank you so much for posting so soon…I loved how you reversed the pov of the infamous photo. Good plan by Shane&Carmen,last chance for Dana & Alice and they better make good use of it. Great news all around for Bette & Tina. I hope Tina’s dream will be a beautiful one this time around. Thank you!
OMG you’re genius for getting danish back together, throw in some hot steamy danish making up and I’ll worship you forever lol :P
wow… i love this story… and i even like your henry now… i love how you are tying everything together… and i can’t wait till your next post…
i so hope that bette’s plan will work, tina will have dreams about bette and angie, and also for al and dana will work things out…thanks for this chapter, i hope that they all can have happy endings
You made me happy Portia and my monday a little less dreary! Merry X-mas to me!
Thank you for posting this chapter. Happy Holidays!
Shane covered her mouth with her hand to keep from laughing. When she was six or seven, she thought that the words lavatory and laboratory were the same words. Her father had caught her with a glass Pyrex dish and a steak knife in the bathroom on her knees, pulling her poop out of the toilet to begin some experiments in her laboratory. She recalled that her dad threw away the baking dish. – LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Nicastro has got to GO! At least Bette got the ok from Henry to see Tina and that Bette is working on a plan. Helena and Dylan was freakin’ HOT!!!!!!!
Ahem…”I only know what I know…the passing chapters will show…you’ve kept TiBette love so alive and so new…cause time after time you’ll hear me say that I’m so lucky to be reading you…Thank you!
Here’s my vote [X] for best reconceptualization of Season 3. I raise my glass in toast to your excellent series. Thanks Portia!
Brilliant. I like the ending of this chapter soooo much better than the last. Lots of good scenes in this chapter from funny to sexy. Thank you so much for this top notch story.
The day seemed to end too perfect for B&T what drama do you have planned next? I just want Tina to get better and get up out of that hospital real soon. Stephanie is going to get the help she needs in jail if she keep taking that man’s money. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
What a brilliant chapter. I’m glad that Bette didn’t end up in the slammer! I can’t believe that Whit wouldn’t have thought of the new Power of Attorney if that was plausable…I’m not seeing that as a viable option,,,get to the retreat, Bette!
Beautiful story! Helena & Dylan are hot!pps. thank you!