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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 20A
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“It’s like some freaky movie where people all get together in this mysterious house and one by one they’re picked off—one is hung, another stabbed to death, shot, thrown off the roof, poisoned, a fall down the. . .”
“Alice! Stop it. What is this? Is this a joke?” Dana pushed on the wood that was at least as wide as the door and definitely taller. It didn’t budge. “Help me.”
“We can’t move a wall.”
“I think it’s a piece of furniture.”
“Dana, why would furniture be in front of the bathroom door?”
Dana turned completely around and stared at Alice. “Why do you think? To keep us in, Al. We can’t get out of the room.”
“Why would Shane and Carmen lock us in?”
Dana turned back to the furniture. “Help me push.”
They tried together and nothing happened. Alice stormed out of the bathroom. “This is fucked up. What do they think they’re doing?” Alice went to the closet and grabbed her overnight bag, searched through it, and then dumped the contents out onto the bed.
Dana came out of the bathroom. “What are you doing?”
“I’m looking for my fucking phone. I know I dropped it in here. I’m gonna call Shane or Carmen or somebody. I don’t like being locked in here.”
“I don’t like it, either.”
Alice was picking up articles of clothing and tossing them onto the floor behind her. “Where. . .is. . .my. . .phone?”
“I didn’t touch it.”
“Jesus.” Alice ran her hands over the bed. “It’s not here. Did you bring your phone?”
“Yeah.” Dana looked around the room. “Carmen needed to make a call, so I gave it to her. Hmm?” Her eyes skimmed over the furniture—the night stands, the dresser, the bureau and didn’t see her phone. She searched the bed, too and even stuck her hands under the pillows where the quilt had been tucked around it. “Shit.” She looked at Alice. “Do you think she took it with her?”
Alice rolled her eyes. “Just a guess. . .” She added a pregnant pause and said. “Yes!”
“Okay. Nobody likes a smartass, Alice. Okay.” A lightbulb went on in Dana’s brain. “Oh, yeah. Carmen said we can just call downstairs if we’re having any problems with anything.” Dana turned from Alice who was on the floor gathering her belongings and walked to the phone beside the bed. She pushed the button for Security.
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Early Merry Christmas to us for getting an update! *doing a happy dance* Be back at some point for a real comment. lol
I’m really pleased to see a new chapter so soon. Excellent plan by Shane and Carmen to get Al and Dana back together. I have a good feeling that it’ll work. Dylan and Hels, what can I say? They’re hot. I dunno how they’re going to get rid of Danny completely, but I’d think besting him would be easy, because he’s a complete idiot. Can’t the Peabody billions just hire a couple of thugs to muscle his sorry behind out of LA? Bette and Tina: Eureka! I think Porter’s got it! I cannot *wait* for Nicastro, Colley, Marcos and any other hatahs to get put in their place. And last but not least, you actually made me like Henry. Maybe it’s Christmas cheer, maybe it’s that you gave him a heart. Either way, I’m very glad you posted, great chapter, and dare I ask that you post again soon? Why yes. Yes, I do. (She who dares, wins!) Post soon, please!
omg omg, I can’t believe you’ve posted again, so soon….Wow, how lucky are we, and regardless is you give us 30+ pages or 60+…it’s great all thru…No, I don’t wan’t this to end, we need to continue it to your version of S4 then S5….pls pls…Tks for your dedication portia
Thank you so much for posting so soon…I loved how you reversed the pov of the infamous photo. Good plan by Shane&Carmen,last chance for Dana & Alice and they better make good use of it. Great news all around for Bette & Tina. I hope Tina’s dream will be a beautiful one this time around. Thank you!
OMG you’re genius for getting danish back together, throw in some hot steamy danish making up and I’ll worship you forever lol :P
wow… i love this story… and i even like your henry now… i love how you are tying everything together… and i can’t wait till your next post…
i so hope that bette’s plan will work, tina will have dreams about bette and angie, and also for al and dana will work things out…thanks for this chapter, i hope that they all can have happy endings
You made me happy Portia and my monday a little less dreary! Merry X-mas to me!
Thank you for posting this chapter. Happy Holidays!
Shane covered her mouth with her hand to keep from laughing. When she was six or seven, she thought that the words lavatory and laboratory were the same words. Her father had caught her with a glass Pyrex dish and a steak knife in the bathroom on her knees, pulling her poop out of the toilet to begin some experiments in her laboratory. She recalled that her dad threw away the baking dish. – LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Nicastro has got to GO! At least Bette got the ok from Henry to see Tina and that Bette is working on a plan. Helena and Dylan was freakin’ HOT!!!!!!!
Ahem…”I only know what I know…the passing chapters will show…you’ve kept TiBette love so alive and so new…cause time after time you’ll hear me say that I’m so lucky to be reading you…Thank you!
Here’s my vote [X] for best reconceptualization of Season 3. I raise my glass in toast to your excellent series. Thanks Portia!
Brilliant. I like the ending of this chapter soooo much better than the last. Lots of good scenes in this chapter from funny to sexy. Thank you so much for this top notch story.
The day seemed to end too perfect for B&T what drama do you have planned next? I just want Tina to get better and get up out of that hospital real soon. Stephanie is going to get the help she needs in jail if she keep taking that man’s money. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
What a brilliant chapter. I’m glad that Bette didn’t end up in the slammer! I can’t believe that Whit wouldn’t have thought of the new Power of Attorney if that was plausable…I’m not seeing that as a viable option,,,get to the retreat, Bette!
Beautiful story! Helena & Dylan are hot!pps. thank you!