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    Love Revisted – Coming Home Part 56

    Story written on August 5, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55861
    Author Notes:

    Kelly tells the rest of the story to the Court and Jury; ‘Fraid Faye is going down for the count..but will the Jury feel sorry for her?

     

    “Is your partner a man or a woman?”

     

    “It’s a woman.”

     

    “How long have you been in that relationship?”

     

    “We’ve been together fifteen years.”

     

    “Thank you, Kelly.  Your Honor, no further questions for this witness.”

     

     

    “Mr. Peakes, you may cross examine.”

     

     

    Stan stood up.  Faye put that death grip on his arm.  “I said LEAVE HER ALONE.”

     

    “No questions, your Honor.” 

     

    “Your Honor, the State rests its case.”

     

    “Mr. Peakes.”

     

    May as well get this over with quickly, Stan thought.

     

    “The Defense rests, your Honor.”

     

     

    “Ladies and Gentlemen of the Jury, both sides in this case have rested.  Tomorrow morning counsel will make closing statements to you and then I will give you instructions before you retire to deliberate.   You’re excused for the day.   Please do not talk about this case among yourselves or with anyone else overnight.” The Court instructed the Jury.

     

    The jury was excused.

     

    Kelly was at counsel table with Nancy.

     

    “Kelly, would you like to meet your ‘look-alike’?”

     

    “Yes, I would.”

     

    Nancy took Kelly over to Bette.

     

     

    Alice, Shane and Tina were just staring at Kelly as she walked over.  It was as if Bette was having an out of body experience.  There she was sitting right there with them.and there she was walking towards them.


    “Kelly Barrett, this is Bette Porter.”

     

    Bette stood and shook Kelly’s hand.  It was as if each woman were standing in front of a mirror reaching out their hands to touch the reflection.

     

    “Bette, I am so sorry you had to experience this.  I feel now if I didn’t look as I do, you wouldn’t have been a victim in this case.”

     

    “Kelly, please don’t apologize.  Let’s try to look at it as each of us meeting that one person in the world who looks just like us.”  Bette hugged her and whispered in her ear, “Thank you so much for having the courage to testify.”

     
    * * *

    Kelly then left the courtroom and got a cab to her parents’ home.


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    “Well, Bette, that’s it.  Tomorrow will be closing statements and the judge’s charge to the jury.  Then we wait for the verdict.  It’s entirely up to you if you want to be here.”

     

    “Can you just call me when the verdict comes in?” Bette asked.

     

    “Sure.”

     

    Nancy looked at Shane and Alice.

     

    “Alice, is it?  You may want to close your mouth now.” Nancy winked and gave a mischievous grin.

     

    Alice didn’t even realize she had her mouth open, still in awe that for the past day she was looking at not one, but two Bette Porters in the same room. A backup Bette for Tinaumm, interesting thought.

     

    Nancy went back to counsel table to gather her things.   Well, she thought, it ain’t over till the Fat Lady sings.  Let’s just hope she’ll be singing a tune we’ll want to hear.   

     

    The girls stood to leave, Alice and Shane in front of Bette and Tina.

     

    Alice turned to Bette.  “That Nancy so ***** wants mecouldn’t you tell?”

     

    Bette gave her a friendly slap to the head.

     

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    Faye was in the car being driven home.  Tomorrow the jury will make their decision.  Who gives a flying *****?   Nothing really matters anymore.  I got to see the one person in my life that I really loved without question.  She left me all those years ago. Today she walked out of my life again.  I’ve been in my own prison for all these years – the new one will just have a different address.

     

     

    TBC

     

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    6. Whilst I’m hoping that Faye gets what she has coming to her I can’t help but feel for her especially after that last paragraph. They say love makes you do strange things and Kelly never writing to her whilst at Harvard clearly affected her deeply. She loved and lossed and was never able to heal from that. I feel sorry for her. She still loves Kelly b/c even with the threat of jail she refused to lie about how she felt and reacted about losing her one and only love to protect herself.

    10. “I’ve been in my own prison for all these years – the new one will just have a different address.”

      What a powerful and acurate way to resume Faye’s sploiled and lost life… Well, even if what she done – especially to our Bette – is a totally unforgivable thing, I cannot help but feeling deeply sad in front of anybody’s total mess of life. Faye’s frightening hypocrisy took rooth in an especially devastating emotional event and, yes, you’re right, since she never was able to recover, she built her own prison, year after year – like brick after brick, lying to herself much more than lying to all others, denying everything she was, all the best of hers, to become a dangerous bigot full of hate.
      You brang us a very deep understanding of this so realistic psychological case and I more than ever congratulate you for such an amazing, intense, unforgettable story.
      Thank you so much !!

    11. You…you…she nearly killed our Bette and for that she should spend years in a concrete prison – but you write so well of love lost and denied, that I actually feel sorry for F.B. – BUT NOT ENOUGH to see that she pays for the evil she inflicted on our girl. Fantastic chapter…why do I feel there’s still more to this story? Oh, yeah, HellBitch is still out there…go get her, rc! take us along for the rollercoaster ride, too!

    12. Clank. There goes the door to Faye’s cell. I’m really glad that Kelly had the courage to testify. She definitely clinched the case for Bette and Nancy. Incredible job, arc! The way you set up this whole thing was flawless!!

    13. Arc. you deserve not only to have a good weekend, but a good week after these last 2 chapters! It was a nice touch to have Nancy intoduce Kelly to Bette, although I was surprised that Bette did not introduce her to Tina. Maybe Bette will send her a thank you card with a family photo inclosed after the trail. It would have been great for Alice to use that “Back-up Bette” line during one of her rants. One does feel sorry for Faye because it is ovious that she never recovered from losing Kelly and still cares for her. But you reap what you soe, and Faye has sone some file and rank fruit in her day (Bette being the worst case serino, but she has also cast her poisionus vinume on may people in her time.). I would rather see Nancy with Shane rather than Alice. Alice is too lounie. Rather than comedy relief (Alice), Nancy needs that COOL BREEZE (Shane) at the end of a rough day.

    14. I am so overwhelmed by these last 3 chapters, I have no words to describe the feeling I have that Buckley has had her last hurrah. Never saw it coming that kelley was a twin to Bette, even with Bette & Tina’s reaction when she came into the Courtroom I did not think of the exact twin theory. Now, please, have Nancy nail Helena to the barn door for setting this all up for Buckley to go after Bette. You are one terrific writer and thanks for the twofer. Please have a great weekend.

    15. RC..thanks for the two-for Friday. OMG the drama. In a way, I feel sad for Faye (not that she shouldn’t be punished for what she did to Bette)because she really loved Kelly and turned it to hate. There is truly a fine line between love and hate — and Faye crossed it. Sad, but we have to live and be responsible with the consequences of our actions. Next head on the block — Hels. Have a great weekend…RC — it’s well deserved.

    16. Yes! You have one of the best stories on this site….thank you for sharing. Get Faye to the big house…hahaha and make sure Alice gets her some Nancy!

    18. wow…i liked that a back up for tina… we all should be so lucky… love this… another great chapter…and thanks for the two for friday…. and again give your partner a big kiss from all of us… please continue

    19. That was a powerful Chapter, Hope Bette gets to see her twin again. Faye doesn;t really care if she goes to jail or now. The life was sucked out of her a long time ago. Love is really a bitch. Thanks

    22. Thanks for the second post today. I also find myself feeling sorry for Faye…unrequited love can be a b…h. Now go get Helena, the evil witch of the west…I don’t think there is anything that will make me fill sorry for her sorry a..!

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