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Lucky in Love (Chapter 35)
In so many ways it was a morning like any other. Alice and Dana rose at seven, reluctantly shedding their warm bed on a cold and rainy early fall day. They shared a cup of coffee, some juice and a piece of toast, finding comfort in their easy routine. On the other hand, this day was far from normal. Alice had her meeting with Public Radio International at eleven and Dana’s appointment with Dr. Wilson about having a baby was at two, having been hastily scheduled the day before when the doctor’s office called and offered them a rare open slot.
Dana grabbed a bottle of water, kissing Al on the forehead before heading off to the treadmill. Alice padded into the office and reviewed her materials for the meeting once again. She smiled when she heard Dana working the machine, picturing the sheen glistening over her well-defined muscles and the semi-blissful look of concentration that appeared on Dana’s features as she pushed her endorphin levels and heart rate higher. Briefly, Alice considered dropping everything to have her way with her wife. With a sigh, she decided against it and turned her attention back to her work, absently adjusting her glasses from time to time. Alice was so caught up in developing some bullet point answers to the questions she knew she’d be asked that she didn’t notice when the noise from the treadmill stopped some forty-five minutes later, nor did she realize when Dana appeared in the doorway.
Dana entertained her own lascivious thoughts while watching Alice. Not only was she wearing the sexiest of all her glasses, she was biting her lip as she typed furiously, her notes spread around in the system that looked like chaos, but was, in fact, brilliantly organized in its own way. Dana reminded herself of the importance of this day to them both and reluctantly pulled herself away, heading off to the shower with a slight waddle, protecting her rigid clit as best she could while attempting to will her arousal to dissipate. By the time she reached her bedroom, visions of Al were still dancing her in her head and her need had grown. Dana debated her next move for a second, her hand unconsciously tracing the outline of her hardening nipples. She might have held off until she was in the shower had it not been for the image of Alice brushing her hair back from her eyes, then playing with the ends before letting it fall back to its starting place so she could pound her next thought into her laptop. Dana surrendered to temptation, pulling her tee shirt over her head and pushing her sweats down. In her haste her pants and panties only made it as far as mid-calf before the fingers of her right hand found her moist lips. She trembled as stroked her center slowly, mimicking the lazy eight movements that Alice loved. Her eyes closed, Dana pictured Alice’s face in the throes of passion and increased her speed, her breath coming in ragged bursts. Every nerve in her body focused on one goal and Dana’s knees closed against her hand as she rolled to her side, her hips pumping hard against her fingers. Her eyes flew open when soft moans reached her ears. A loud groan filled the room when Dana saw Alice, her man’s white oxford cloth button down shirt completely unbuttoned, glasses perched on the end of her nose, with one hand working her rock hard nipples and the other a blur of motion between her legs.
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Again you’ve outdone yourself. I wish my writing could get better exponentially every time I post, but I suppose I’ll leave that to the the true authors like yourself. I can definitely see a lot of openings for followups to this, and not just in the Danish department, although everyone knows that’s the storyline I’m most interested in. I’ll read whatever you write, though, always will. I’m glad the Winnie thing seems to have reached a resolution, though if I were Helena I’d never even consider letting her near those kids regardless of explanations/apologies. Anyway, wonderful chapter, I hope you never stop writing.
That was truly excellent. I’m with De_Leish, I really hoped to see Al and Dane raise their kid(s). Maybe another sequel??? I like that they’re both gonna try to use their brothers as donors, if not Harrison would be a great idea (I miss him, he was so fun and flamboyant). Hope the next chapter won’t be the last one you write totally!
Surely your next chapter is not going to be the last in this wonderfully written fiction. It has been a truly fantastic journey you have taken us on, and will be sad if we don’t see our Danish girls raise their child(ren), but I am sure your next story will be just as pleasing for us. Thanks again – you deserve a Fanfic Award for this.
Fuckity Wow McFrack – you really keep getting better and better. I Loved – loved Alice/Dana getting down with the get down – uber Hotness! For the record I never want these characters you’ve developed to end. I’m giddy at the thought of a sequel – I raise my Mojito to you:)
Dang, I can’t believe it’s almost over. At least we can enjoy it while it lasts; this was yet another amazing chapter. I hope there are lots of sequels, and I can promise you that I’ll be reading them.
Loved this chapter,you are one hell of a writer!Glad Dana got the ok to have a baby,and i hope you continue this story like you always do!(still think you should of won the fanfics) Glad im here,so long Quad Sh*ttes! PPS and awesome chapter!!!
Nicely done, “It was the glasses, right?””And the damn shirt,” Dana answered, smiling. “How’d you know?”I hope you are planning on continuing this story as a sequel…because I love this story! PPS
So, Winnie’s finally finished… what of Gail? I hope, like Helena said, she’s having the first of many crappy days to come. Babies? Via Harrison? That could be… interesting. I think after Shane’s come this far, New York should be a piece of cake. She’s strong enough to handle it. That was heck of a nice way for Bette and Tina to say goodbye to the house. Great chapter, SG. Cheers
U gyrl so deserve the nominations!!!!!! This story has been a great ride, so entertaining, humorous, dramatic, romantic, sexy…all that and more!!!! love it, love, love it…..altho I’m not too hot on forgiving Winnie…I don’t trust a word that comes outa that tramps mouth; Helena has too much heart and too little brain; she should take Lara and her kidz and start life afresh without the dangerously ditzy Winnie and her off-sider Gail…HOPE AL AND DANES GET TO HAVE LOTS OF BABIES.PPS
Oh no 2nd last chapter, so we’re not gonna see Dana and Alice raise their kid :( Can you do a sequel, pretty pretty please with cherries on top? Oooh and about LA its kinda changed, I’m off to NY now which is a bit of a bummer since I really wanna meet you guys, if you know a cheap way to get from NY to LA then let me know! :) Thanks for this amazing chap though, still loving it. xxx
wow, sad to hear that this is coming to an end. :( I really do hope that you will continue it somehow. Lovely to see that Dana and Alice are preparing themselves for a baby. Nice ending for everyone. Great as usual, can’t wait for the next one, although it’s going to be the last one.
Wonderful as always! By all means take a break and then return with the rest of the story, there is still so much to tell isn’t there? Seriously either way this is fab story that i’ll re-read over again :)