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Lucky in Love (Chapter 35)
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“See that, Dane?” Alice tried to alleviate Dana’s tension. “You can have a baby and keep that amazing figure of yours. The miracles of modern medicine.”
“Now, ladies, have you given any thought to where and how you’d like to do the insemination?”
Tina suggested that they spend one final night in their old house before their last dinner party. It was her way of exorcising the final vestiges of any bad memories that might have been lingering before the next day’s momentous events. Bette found her in the pool after putting Angelica down. She was holding two perfect martinis, dressed only in a smile.
“We’ve got to stop meeting like this,” Bette said, peeling off her sheer Amber Kayne silk blouse.
“Like what?” Even Tina had to laugh at her failed attempt to feign innocence. “Babe, come on, you and I both know you wanted to say goodbye to this house the same way we christened it.”
“This is true,” Bette chuckled, “but I was planning on sometime tomorrow before Dana and Alice get here.”
“Well, who am I to stand in the way of your master plan?” Tina stood, the water level just below her superb tits, pool lights shimmering against her chest and face.
Bette nearly had her first orgasm from that sight alone. She kicked off her jeans and thong with lightening speed and joined Tina in the warm water.
“No reason we can’t go with your plan tonight and mine tomorrow, is there?” She took the cocktails from Tina and set them on the side of the pool, spilling a little in her rush.
Everything in her wanted to abandon her carefully planned proposal, but she managed to stifle the urge. Little did Bette know that Tina was struggling with identical feelings. Instead, they merged their bodies into one, tongues fused, breasts and hips pressed closely together, the crystalline water lapping against their silken skin. They took their time, savoring the moment and each other, building their desire slowly, precisely. When they could no longer tell if the goose bumps were from their foreplay or the cool night air, Bette guided Tina into deeper water, allowing their feet to make firm contact with the bottom, their heads just above. Tina wrapped her legs around Bette’s ass, pushing her mound hard against Bette.
“God, I love the way you kiss,” she said breathlessly. “I need you inside of me. Now.”
Bette pulled back, smiling as Tina tried to recapture her lips. She managed to keep just out of reach while she entered Tina with three fingers and held completely still. The tease was working. Tina resorted to feathering kisses along the side of Bette’s perfect mocha shoulders, hoping to distract Bette long enough to resume the kiss. Bette relented and began stroking in and out forcefully, seeking Tina’s mouth with her own. She felt Tina’s walls contracting and added a fourth finger, taking her to the very brink before slowing her movements long enough to allow Tina’s roaming fingers to find their mark. Tina matched Bette’s pace until she could take no more and surrendered to her overwhelming need to cum. Bette kept her from slipping underwater when her head reared back.
“That’s it T,” she murmured into Tina’s neck. “You are so beautiful.”
As soon as she was able, Tina resumed thrusting as deeply into Bette as she could. Leaning forward to nip and nibble Bette’s collarbone, Tina added a third finger and pressed her thumb hard against Bette’s swollen clit.
“Tina,” Bette cried. “I love you!” She slammed into Tina’s hand and lost herself in consuming pleasure.
A few minutes later, they grudgingly dragged themselves from the pool, dashing into the bathroom without bothering to cover themselves. Bette pulled Tina under the soothing rush of water.
“You are everything I have ever wanted,” she whispered. “And this moment right now is everything I have ever needed.”
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Again you’ve outdone yourself. I wish my writing could get better exponentially every time I post, but I suppose I’ll leave that to the the true authors like yourself. I can definitely see a lot of openings for followups to this, and not just in the Danish department, although everyone knows that’s the storyline I’m most interested in. I’ll read whatever you write, though, always will. I’m glad the Winnie thing seems to have reached a resolution, though if I were Helena I’d never even consider letting her near those kids regardless of explanations/apologies. Anyway, wonderful chapter, I hope you never stop writing.
That was truly excellent. I’m with De_Leish, I really hoped to see Al and Dane raise their kid(s). Maybe another sequel??? I like that they’re both gonna try to use their brothers as donors, if not Harrison would be a great idea (I miss him, he was so fun and flamboyant). Hope the next chapter won’t be the last one you write totally!
Surely your next chapter is not going to be the last in this wonderfully written fiction. It has been a truly fantastic journey you have taken us on, and will be sad if we don’t see our Danish girls raise their child(ren), but I am sure your next story will be just as pleasing for us. Thanks again – you deserve a Fanfic Award for this.
Fuckity Wow McFrack – you really keep getting better and better. I Loved – loved Alice/Dana getting down with the get down – uber Hotness! For the record I never want these characters you’ve developed to end. I’m giddy at the thought of a sequel – I raise my Mojito to you:)
Dang, I can’t believe it’s almost over. At least we can enjoy it while it lasts; this was yet another amazing chapter. I hope there are lots of sequels, and I can promise you that I’ll be reading them.
Loved this chapter,you are one hell of a writer!Glad Dana got the ok to have a baby,and i hope you continue this story like you always do!(still think you should of won the fanfics) Glad im here,so long Quad Sh*ttes! PPS and awesome chapter!!!
Nicely done, “It was the glasses, right?””And the damn shirt,” Dana answered, smiling. “How’d you know?”I hope you are planning on continuing this story as a sequel…because I love this story! PPS
So, Winnie’s finally finished… what of Gail? I hope, like Helena said, she’s having the first of many crappy days to come. Babies? Via Harrison? That could be… interesting. I think after Shane’s come this far, New York should be a piece of cake. She’s strong enough to handle it. That was heck of a nice way for Bette and Tina to say goodbye to the house. Great chapter, SG. Cheers
U gyrl so deserve the nominations!!!!!! This story has been a great ride, so entertaining, humorous, dramatic, romantic, sexy…all that and more!!!! love it, love, love it…..altho I’m not too hot on forgiving Winnie…I don’t trust a word that comes outa that tramps mouth; Helena has too much heart and too little brain; she should take Lara and her kidz and start life afresh without the dangerously ditzy Winnie and her off-sider Gail…HOPE AL AND DANES GET TO HAVE LOTS OF BABIES.PPS
Oh no 2nd last chapter, so we’re not gonna see Dana and Alice raise their kid :( Can you do a sequel, pretty pretty please with cherries on top? Oooh and about LA its kinda changed, I’m off to NY now which is a bit of a bummer since I really wanna meet you guys, if you know a cheap way to get from NY to LA then let me know! :) Thanks for this amazing chap though, still loving it. xxx
wow, sad to hear that this is coming to an end. :( I really do hope that you will continue it somehow. Lovely to see that Dana and Alice are preparing themselves for a baby. Nice ending for everyone. Great as usual, can’t wait for the next one, although it’s going to be the last one.
Wonderful as always! By all means take a break and then return with the rest of the story, there is still so much to tell isn’t there? Seriously either way this is fab story that i’ll re-read over again :)