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Lucky in Love (Chapter 35)
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“Come here,” Dana managed to say, her voice low and husky.
Alice shook her head and continued to masturbate just out of Dana’s reach. They were both too close to stop and saw it in each other, heightening the experience. Dana tried to slow her movements, to no avail.
“Baby, I’m cumming,” she groaned, her body tense with pleasure, her eyes shut tightly as the first wave passed.
She felt Alice slip on top of her, gently pushing her to her tummy and planting her pussy against the back of her thigh, slipping a hand between them to get just the right pressure against her clit. The air created a cool trail, marking Al’s movements, as she stretched against Dana’s lanky body.
“Open a little wider,” Alice whispered into her ear.
A second later Alice pushed Mr. Pointy, their slim curved dildo, into Dana swiftly and found her g-spot. Dana bucked back hard against it and came again, this time with an intensity that surprised them both. Al followed immediately, chanting Dana’s name until she exhausted all of the air in her lungs. Somehow Dana managed to roll over and pulled Alice into a deep, passionate kiss.
“It was the glasses, right?”
“And the damn shirt,” Dana answered, smiling. “How’d you know?”
“Dave came into the office and started chewing a rawhide,” Al said. “Then I heard you calling my name.”
“I’m embarrassed,,,”
“Don’t be Dane. That was maybe the sexiest thing I have ever seen. And, for the record, I almost molested you while you were on the treadmill.”
Though it was a day later than planned, Helena and Lara met with Winnie. Lawyers for both sides were present in the room, although Winnie’s attorney was brand new and had less than twenty-four hours to get up to speed prior to the meeting. Helena’s investigators used the extra time to definitively expose Winnie’s financial ties to Gail Guthrie. The information empowered Helena, restoring a modicum of her confidence, which gave her an aura of calm that Lara hadn’t seen since the ordeal began.
Winnie was already in the tiny concrete, windowless room, handcuffed to the table, when they were ushered in. Her lawyer started to lay out some ground rules, but Winnie cut her off, saying that the only rule in force today was that the absolute truth would be told. Something in Winnie’s demeanor was decidedly different. The hateful edge was gone, replaced with something neither Helena nor Lara could quite fathom. It wasn’t contrition exactly, more like submission.
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Again you’ve outdone yourself. I wish my writing could get better exponentially every time I post, but I suppose I’ll leave that to the the true authors like yourself. I can definitely see a lot of openings for followups to this, and not just in the Danish department, although everyone knows that’s the storyline I’m most interested in. I’ll read whatever you write, though, always will. I’m glad the Winnie thing seems to have reached a resolution, though if I were Helena I’d never even consider letting her near those kids regardless of explanations/apologies. Anyway, wonderful chapter, I hope you never stop writing.
That was truly excellent. I’m with De_Leish, I really hoped to see Al and Dane raise their kid(s). Maybe another sequel??? I like that they’re both gonna try to use their brothers as donors, if not Harrison would be a great idea (I miss him, he was so fun and flamboyant). Hope the next chapter won’t be the last one you write totally!
Surely your next chapter is not going to be the last in this wonderfully written fiction. It has been a truly fantastic journey you have taken us on, and will be sad if we don’t see our Danish girls raise their child(ren), but I am sure your next story will be just as pleasing for us. Thanks again – you deserve a Fanfic Award for this.
Fuckity Wow McFrack – you really keep getting better and better. I Loved – loved Alice/Dana getting down with the get down – uber Hotness! For the record I never want these characters you’ve developed to end. I’m giddy at the thought of a sequel – I raise my Mojito to you:)
Dang, I can’t believe it’s almost over. At least we can enjoy it while it lasts; this was yet another amazing chapter. I hope there are lots of sequels, and I can promise you that I’ll be reading them.
Loved this chapter,you are one hell of a writer!Glad Dana got the ok to have a baby,and i hope you continue this story like you always do!(still think you should of won the fanfics) Glad im here,so long Quad Sh*ttes! PPS and awesome chapter!!!
Nicely done, “It was the glasses, right?””And the damn shirt,” Dana answered, smiling. “How’d you know?”I hope you are planning on continuing this story as a sequel…because I love this story! PPS
So, Winnie’s finally finished… what of Gail? I hope, like Helena said, she’s having the first of many crappy days to come. Babies? Via Harrison? That could be… interesting. I think after Shane’s come this far, New York should be a piece of cake. She’s strong enough to handle it. That was heck of a nice way for Bette and Tina to say goodbye to the house. Great chapter, SG. Cheers
U gyrl so deserve the nominations!!!!!! This story has been a great ride, so entertaining, humorous, dramatic, romantic, sexy…all that and more!!!! love it, love, love it…..altho I’m not too hot on forgiving Winnie…I don’t trust a word that comes outa that tramps mouth; Helena has too much heart and too little brain; she should take Lara and her kidz and start life afresh without the dangerously ditzy Winnie and her off-sider Gail…HOPE AL AND DANES GET TO HAVE LOTS OF BABIES.PPS
Oh no 2nd last chapter, so we’re not gonna see Dana and Alice raise their kid :( Can you do a sequel, pretty pretty please with cherries on top? Oooh and about LA its kinda changed, I’m off to NY now which is a bit of a bummer since I really wanna meet you guys, if you know a cheap way to get from NY to LA then let me know! :) Thanks for this amazing chap though, still loving it. xxx
wow, sad to hear that this is coming to an end. :( I really do hope that you will continue it somehow. Lovely to see that Dana and Alice are preparing themselves for a baby. Nice ending for everyone. Great as usual, can’t wait for the next one, although it’s going to be the last one.
Wonderful as always! By all means take a break and then return with the rest of the story, there is still so much to tell isn’t there? Seriously either way this is fab story that i’ll re-read over again :)