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Masked Feelings CH 72 Out of her Control
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Roxy knew more then the both of them that they weren’t ready for a relationship. She knew Alice wasn’t ready, due to the fact that she cheated on Dana in the first place and in her own house. She was sure that it had to do with issues with Lara. Even though Dana wasn’t responsible for what Lara did to her, a small part of the blame fell on her shoulders. Roxy knew that Alice loved her but it was something that was going to keep a wedge between them. As for Dana, she couldn’t trust Alice even though she’d never admit it to her. Dana couldn’t even get herself to admit it to herself. Roxy was the scapegoat in Dana’s eyes, but when it really came down to it… it wasn’t her that started things that night. This was one of many reasons why they’re relationship was tumultuous. They were bound to destroy each other.
She knew it was wrong to be here, but she found herself at the front door. Roxy was surprised when it wasn’t Alice that answered the door.
Shane – Can I help you?
Roxy – You can tell Alice I’m here.
Shane – Hmmm… I don’t think she’s here.
Roxy – That’s funny… isn’t that her car in the driveway?
Shane blocks the doorway when Roxy tries to slide in.
Roxy – What are you… the resident watch dog?
Shane – Just keeping out the riffraff.
Roxy – I see Dana’s keeping a short leash on Alice these days.
Roxy sees Alice pass the hallway.
Roxy – Alice! Hey, Alice!
Alice turns around and walks toward the door.
Roxy – Want to call your friend off so we can chat a bit….
Alice – It’s ok Shane, I’ll only be a minute.
Shane – If you think that I’m letting her in you’re crazy.
Alice – I’ll go outside then….
Shane – I’ll be close by.
Alice closes the door behind her.
Roxy – Your friends are something else, Alice.
Alice – The tape is in my car… on the passenger seat.
Roxy – Are you mad at me for showing up here? I wasn’t plannning to but you weren’t at work. Are you feeling ok? You look a little pale.
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EVIL … JUST EVIL!
Oh fuck, that was an insane chapter!!! Tony that ass pisses me off. Can’t you hand him over to David? Please, please, please? I hate such sleazy guys. Alice should definitely kick his…..ehm, that would be NC-17, lol. But hey, he deserves that. More than anyone. I knew that Roxy would watch that damn tape, even when she promised not to. I’m actually pretty sorry for her. She’s kind of a misguided poor woman with no ability to lead a normal life and socialize with other people. “Friendship” is probably a foreign word to her. Sometimes I think she’s also quite naive although she seems to act serious and determined when someone’s around. No idea what she would do knowing what Bobby’s got on his mind. Most likely blow his head away, but that’s just a simple guess, lol. Roxy should go to a therapist…why not taking Dana, Alice and Andrea with her? All of them need help. Such a session would be fucking interesting, especiallywhen all of them were facing each other in the same room. YAY, mud-wrestling:-)R>Of course not literally spoken….but that would be also fun, lol. I doubt that Alice and Dana are going to work out at the very moment. Mostly, because they don’t trust each other. Dana asking Shane for staying over at her house and watching out for Alice proves it even more. Not sure how they’re going to handle this in the future. Communication should be the key but even that seems very difficult because Dana withholds what she really wants to say. Sex can’t be the answer on a continuing basis. I fear, they’re going to lose each other when they don’t start to face their issues and take them seriously. To me it seems that Dana always backs away when Alice tries to close the gap that’s in between them. Women….at least, I have still faith that there are good people out there, like that gentleman on the airport:-) If it wasn’t for him Alice would go nuts. She’s a bundle of nerves anyway, lol. Hope Dana finds out something about Roxy’s mother and that this “spice girl” gives her a hint on where she could get some information. Have you ever been to a strip club,brteyes? Just wondering for you wrote it pretty detailed, lol. I wouldn’t mind a lap dance on my birthday….but it should be someone special:-) What about you? Oh Andrea….she’s such a crazy bitch. But I like that. I wish I knew where those right spots are. Did Roxy and Andrea practice that at school? Maybe you should just give me their phone numbers,lol. And I totally agree with Andrea: Dana has ‘the body made for fucking’. Dana should never find out what happened between her and Andrea in that hotel room. But everythingresurfaces eventually. Alice should see the marks on Dana’s back. Am looking forward to more angst, manipulation, distrust, lies, torture, infidelity, sex and drama in the next chapter:-) This was a brillant installment and I can’t wait to read what else you have in store. You got me completely hooked. You’re the sweetest! I heart you, darlin’:-)
You had me worried that you stopped updating. I do wonder why Bobby doesn’t just order Roxy to kill Dana, maybe he likes to play with his prey first, like a cat. Roxy is right about one thing, Dana and Alice need to work thur their trust issues, too bad they don’t remember the mess they made the last time they both kept secrets form each other. They might love each other but I don;t think it will be enough to keep them together. I also wonder if Dana will remeber Andrea’s violation of her and if it will re-open and wounds from the times when Lara also violated her. I really hope Andera leaves Dana alone from now on, but I have a feeling you have other plans. PPS
Fantastic!!! i love love love this story :)
Dana is such an easy mark.
I’m starting to think these two just need a clean break from each other. And the corrupt law enforcement type people are pissing me off. Can’t Danish go to the real police? I mean, seriously. Yikes. They just can’t seem to find any sort of common ground that doesn’t involve sex. I’m all for a little dirty stuff, but that can’t be everything…I dunno. That Andrea chick weirds me out. I still love this, though, and I’m curious to see where you go from here. Two people can only take so much before they snap.
OK. I really wish this was a book so I could skip to the ending and make sure my Danish live happily ever after. I’m in this for the long haul, though. I think a lot of their communication issues would be resolved if they didn’t have to worry about bad FBI agents, the mob, and miscellaneous psychos. LOL. Another good chapter — I am glad you are back.
so roxy’s friend is just as evil as she is. you are one twisted sister my dear. why are you beating up on alice and dana so much? those two sweethearts don’t deserve all of this hell you are putting them through. don’t get me wrong i love your story, obviously because i haven’t stopped reading yet. and i still look forward to each new chapter. but golly gosh gee cut them some slack. : )anyway, i hope you are busy at work on your next installment. oh and guess who i saw the other night?! the one and only gabby. it was hard not to buy a drink and walk up to her and throw it in her face for being such a shithead to alice. fortunately i can seperate reality from television. anyway keep those twisted thoughts going and get the next chapter up soon!!