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Masked Feelings CH 72 Out of her Control
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Alice – I didn’t sleep well last night. It’s no big deal.
Roxy – Want to talk about it?
Alice – What?
Roxy – About what’s keeping you up at night… it might help.
Alice – I just miss Dana.
Roxy – What’s to miss?
Alice – Roxy….
Roxy – Just kidding…. I love how you say my name, by the way.
Alice – Can you just get the tape and get this over with?
Roxy – Of course… I’ll call you after I meet with Bobby.
Alice – I’ll just call you later.
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That evening…..
Dana dressed down for her outing. She wasn’t exactly in the right neighborhood to be in her regular attire. And she gave a second thought when it came to driving, the car was too nice to be left sitting on the street. Dana took a taxi instead, to the strip club that Desiree Bensen had worked. Desiree was Marvela’s mother… or who everyone else knew as Roxy. She wondered how a piece of trash like Roxy got to be an FBI agent, were they really that desperate?
The place was rundown and seedy. The interior wasn’t much better. The motif was something out of the early 70′s. She imagined that this place had to have been around for much longer then that. It was so damn smoky in the club that the walls were gray. It was no wonder her eyes burned. It wasn’t like anyone was there for the ambience. They were there for the ladies.. if you could call them that. You could tell the environment was effecting their youthfulness. While their bodies still appeared attractive, their faces showed their age. She imagined the lighting masked most of their flaws.
Dana’s skin wanted to crawl. It’s not like she’d be against going into a strip club… but not one like this. The clientele was sleazy… and it wasn’t against any of them to cop a feel. There seemed to be a backroom that was meant for private lap dances… and God only knows what else.
Dana was definitely out of her comfort zone and hoped that it didn’t show. This wasn’t her idea of entertainment. She wasn’t opposed to seeing a beautiful woman, but this was in poor taste. In some ways, she considered herself a prude when it came to tasteless displays such as this. The only person she could imagine shaking her booty in her face was Alice…. and damned if she wouldn’t look hot giving her lap dance dance. Dana couldn’t picture one of these strippers or any other women doing such things to her.
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EVIL … JUST EVIL!
Oh fuck, that was an insane chapter!!! Tony that ass pisses me off. Can’t you hand him over to David? Please, please, please? I hate such sleazy guys. Alice should definitely kick his…..ehm, that would be NC-17, lol. But hey, he deserves that. More than anyone. I knew that Roxy would watch that damn tape, even when she promised not to. I’m actually pretty sorry for her. She’s kind of a misguided poor woman with no ability to lead a normal life and socialize with other people. “Friendship” is probably a foreign word to her. Sometimes I think she’s also quite naive although she seems to act serious and determined when someone’s around. No idea what she would do knowing what Bobby’s got on his mind. Most likely blow his head away, but that’s just a simple guess, lol. Roxy should go to a therapist…why not taking Dana, Alice and Andrea with her? All of them need help. Such a session would be fucking interesting, especiallywhen all of them were facing each other in the same room. YAY, mud-wrestling:-)R>Of course not literally spoken….but that would be also fun, lol. I doubt that Alice and Dana are going to work out at the very moment. Mostly, because they don’t trust each other. Dana asking Shane for staying over at her house and watching out for Alice proves it even more. Not sure how they’re going to handle this in the future. Communication should be the key but even that seems very difficult because Dana withholds what she really wants to say. Sex can’t be the answer on a continuing basis. I fear, they’re going to lose each other when they don’t start to face their issues and take them seriously. To me it seems that Dana always backs away when Alice tries to close the gap that’s in between them. Women….at least, I have still faith that there are good people out there, like that gentleman on the airport:-) If it wasn’t for him Alice would go nuts. She’s a bundle of nerves anyway, lol. Hope Dana finds out something about Roxy’s mother and that this “spice girl” gives her a hint on where she could get some information. Have you ever been to a strip club,brteyes? Just wondering for you wrote it pretty detailed, lol. I wouldn’t mind a lap dance on my birthday….but it should be someone special:-) What about you? Oh Andrea….she’s such a crazy bitch. But I like that. I wish I knew where those right spots are. Did Roxy and Andrea practice that at school? Maybe you should just give me their phone numbers,lol. And I totally agree with Andrea: Dana has ‘the body made for fucking’. Dana should never find out what happened between her and Andrea in that hotel room. But everythingresurfaces eventually. Alice should see the marks on Dana’s back. Am looking forward to more angst, manipulation, distrust, lies, torture, infidelity, sex and drama in the next chapter:-) This was a brillant installment and I can’t wait to read what else you have in store. You got me completely hooked. You’re the sweetest! I heart you, darlin’:-)
You had me worried that you stopped updating. I do wonder why Bobby doesn’t just order Roxy to kill Dana, maybe he likes to play with his prey first, like a cat. Roxy is right about one thing, Dana and Alice need to work thur their trust issues, too bad they don’t remember the mess they made the last time they both kept secrets form each other. They might love each other but I don;t think it will be enough to keep them together. I also wonder if Dana will remeber Andrea’s violation of her and if it will re-open and wounds from the times when Lara also violated her. I really hope Andera leaves Dana alone from now on, but I have a feeling you have other plans. PPS
Fantastic!!! i love love love this story :)
Dana is such an easy mark.
I’m starting to think these two just need a clean break from each other. And the corrupt law enforcement type people are pissing me off. Can’t Danish go to the real police? I mean, seriously. Yikes. They just can’t seem to find any sort of common ground that doesn’t involve sex. I’m all for a little dirty stuff, but that can’t be everything…I dunno. That Andrea chick weirds me out. I still love this, though, and I’m curious to see where you go from here. Two people can only take so much before they snap.
OK. I really wish this was a book so I could skip to the ending and make sure my Danish live happily ever after. I’m in this for the long haul, though. I think a lot of their communication issues would be resolved if they didn’t have to worry about bad FBI agents, the mob, and miscellaneous psychos. LOL. Another good chapter — I am glad you are back.
so roxy’s friend is just as evil as she is. you are one twisted sister my dear. why are you beating up on alice and dana so much? those two sweethearts don’t deserve all of this hell you are putting them through. don’t get me wrong i love your story, obviously because i haven’t stopped reading yet. and i still look forward to each new chapter. but golly gosh gee cut them some slack. : )anyway, i hope you are busy at work on your next installment. oh and guess who i saw the other night?! the one and only gabby. it was hard not to buy a drink and walk up to her and throw it in her face for being such a shithead to alice. fortunately i can seperate reality from television. anyway keep those twisted thoughts going and get the next chapter up soon!!