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Meet Me In Montauk; #05
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I saw her standing alone, ordering a drink. I took a deep breath and straightened my dress as I decided to walk over to her.
Oh my gawd, what was I going to say.
I stood behind her and tapped her shoulder. She turned around, her eyes widened with shock.
I smiled, “Hello stranger,” I greeted.
She laughed, “Why, hello yourself.”
“Nice to finally meet you, Bette Porter,” I said, extending my hand, “It’s a pleasure.”
“The pleasure is all mine,” she replied, taking my hand and giving it a customary shake.
The moment we touched, a warmth spread through my body. This eclectic electricity surged through my being; I felt my knees grow slightly weak. As we pulled away from each other, I realized that I didn’t quite want to let go.
Damnit, what was it about her.
This crush had my mind boggled on a continuous basis. I needed to get it together.
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Bette
Wow, I thought to myself, she was even more beautiful in person.
Could she feel that? That surge of electricity through my bones the moment we touched? Perhaps it was just my imagination. I kept smiling, making sure I kept my cool. On the inside, her being right in front of me had already turned me into mush.
“Would you like a drink?” I asked, gesturing to the bar.
She smiled, “Sure, what’s good here?”
“The bartender made me this Lychee Martini,” I replied as I lifted my glass towards her, “Would like to try one?”
“Definitely, I’d try anything once,” she said with a twinkle in her eyes. I laughed, trying to hide my nerves from her.
Her presence disarmed me. My thoughts and worries about Tina suddenly disintegrated.
“So, I wanted to express my disappointment that you didn’t get to meet that infamous pup of our dear Mr. Bennett,” I told her as I gave her the drink. Our fingers brushed again for a moment and I felt like I could have dropped the glass onto the ground.
She took a sip of the Martini, giving it a smile of approval, “Ah, my colleague promised to give me all the details of his visit, stay and departure. Believe me, I wanted to meet that dog as much as you.”
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I guess this is it, the start of the unstoppable force that is known as Belena. *sighs* I guess I’ll just have to deal with it. PPS
These two ladies are so in trouble. Wow, Bette flies all the way to Singapore from LA and she have to attend a meeting that same night, spends all night talking to Helena….man, she must be exhausted.
This was an excellent update. You know after working another long hour day, it feels good to come home and read several good stories. Thanks for the update! And I’m also happy that you like my story. Thanks for the support!
E this was a great chapter, and how finally how these two women met in person it was,,,,,ELECTRIFYING!!!!
Great update! I loved it! MORE MORE MORE!!!
You write their attraction very well. I would have to say they are in trouble. I’m still holding out for their partners at home. A one night stand hopefully won’t kill anybody. I’m so torn
Well Kena…let’s just go ahead and shed a tear now! Wahhhh! Maybe I should join the hopeless romantics, enjoy the dreaminess of it like Z and just be happy that they found each other! Not! lol! Seriously, really nice chemistry…they are indeed in trouble! Enjoying the story…PPS!!!
well done…loved the parallel thoughts!!! But how can you leave is hanging like that!! You are right, both have interesting relationships that aren’t exactly …but while you can manage your response, you cannot always help who you love!!! PPS
Oh no you did NOT just leave it there!! Not oven one kiss?? Now it is absolutely true that people get tired and can forget to meet obligations one time, or even more than one time..but it appeared to me that this was a habit with Tash, to let Helena take care of everything, to be the parent. I have to also imagine that Tina is making a habit of not being there for Bette, not just one time. Because if they are both lovely spouses who messed up one time, then Bette and Helena are just going to be complete jerks, and I don’t want them to be jerks. I want to be happy that they are finding each other and that they will find what they need with each other, and be happy with each other. As far as Tina being a workaholic like Bette was, I was under the impression that Bette was trying to keep her job, which was immensely demanding, cos she was the sole support of the family. i do not think she enjoyed working herself into the ground. At any rate,soon I hope, that they, at least, KISS!!!!!
Im first lovely update…I have to admit im captivated by all the women in this story…i could date them all nah just joking my gf wouldnt let me.and as always im a true loyal admirer of Helena…And btw our gfs are alike Euni because my gf loves Bette.Thanks for the update and advice…i do actually nofrmally hate critical advice but i have to admit i was a lil bummed like i was slipping all of a sudden…but i guess i can say ive took it in amy pride and with the next chapter you will see the improvements…Its made me day reading im having such a horrid time at the moment with me being ill and my gf even worse than me waiting for an operation it kinda sucks. Ok im boring you but keep up all the good work.
**Sigh** “She smiled and as our eyes met, I felt as if she was reading my soul.” … Oh, she was! She was! … I just woke up, eunibaby…but reading this put me into a dreamy state…Tanks!
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