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My Skin is Painfully New – Chapter 11
Tina was drowning. Slipping further and further away from shore, her lips parched by the sun, surrounded by water but unable to drink, she was going under. Panic had come and gone, leaving a resigned emptiness in its place. Her lungs filled with briny water and calmness came over her like a warm blanket. It was easy, so easy, to relax and let her body be pulled further and further out into the cold darkness. She saw the shoreline becoming smaller and gave up hope of reaching it.
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I dont give a damn about your regulations, Im staying with her, announced Bette in a deadly calm voice while climbing into the back of the ambulance.
The EMT had seen this type of determination before. You dont separate a mother bear from her baby and you dont refuse a woman like Bette Porter.
Go ahead, get in, he said redundantly, as Bette was already in the vehicle.
The ambulance sped towards the hospital, easily navigating through the streets of LA on a lazy Sunday afternoon with little traffic. One EMT continued working on Tina while the other was speaking into a radio to the physician waiting at the hospital.
We have a woman, approximately 30 years old, she started.
Thirty-two, corrected Bette.
A thirty-two year old woman, approximately 25 weeks pregnant, she looked over at Bette for confirmation.
24 weeks, Bette said.
Temp 40.1 degrees centigrade, pulse rapid and irregular, BP 100 over 60 and falling. Skin is dry to the touch. She was found unconscious approximately 15 minutes ago, but no indication how long she had been there, continued the EMT.
The technician working on Tina called out, collapsed veins are making it impossible to put in an IV line, said the young man nervously.
Any medical history? the female technician asked Bette.
No, said Bette, stroking Tinas hair and letting her tears drip on Tinas face.
Negative, she replied into the radio. Our ETA is 6 minutes.
The woman came over to Tina and took the needle from the young man. Here, watch. She inserted the IV needle into a vein in Tinas neck with practiced ease. When you have dehydration at this level, its typically a waste of time to try the extremities, she instructed confidently as she hooked up the saline solution to the IV and set it to drip at the fastest rate. Bette looked on, grateful that the self-assured woman had taken charge.
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(62 votes, average: 4.08 out of 5)
You go get your woman BETTE!!!! awewome post.. great story..please post soon…
I’ve recently gotten hooked on this series. You go Bette! (Be well, Tina and baby-T).
Good cliffhanger.
SO GOOD!!!
Awesome! Please continue, I just love the way you write. It always keeps me on the edge of my seat.
So, the doctor grabbed Helena’s arm thinking she’s Bette!! Hopefully, Helena will do the right thing and get Bette in the room with Tina! Great chapter…post soon!!!!!!!
Good job on the story. Hope to readmore
WOW Catfight is coming Bette and Helena WOW I hope Bette win this is going really good story that’s what I’m tooking B&T forever thank you Nice.
At the edge of her consciousness there was a nagging detail left dangling, like a sock left on the clothesline after laundry day. Something she had to finish. “Helena,†she whispered.
That’s right! Helena is just one piece of dirty laundry left to get rid of. GO tina GO!
What a perfect way to STICK IT to Helena, that Betty! Loved the last line and the rest of the story, of course.
Oooohhh – nice chapter. So happy to see this update. It’s Bette’s party now. Helena is a tactless wench! Keep up the good work.
DON’T LET HER HAVE HER BETTE GO GET HER
Woohoo! I love it. I wish I could see the look on Helena’s face. I just love the way you write. Great chapter.
Helena sucks….I think Bette should clock her in the next update. Just a hostile suggestion! haha. Great update!
Yesss.. you go Bette….I love your story…please post soon
Excellent!!!! Im so loving this story… HA HA HA right in your face Helena!
Excellent twist to the story……….poor Tina she is going to think that Bette doesn’t care as she doesn’t know she is there. Helena is a bitch to say all that in front of Bette. Do your thing Bette and get your woman back
Ha! What a slap in the face for Helena (not that im complaining!)
^_^
I agree with Phoenix that was one helluva cliffhanger.
yes, if only the show will go that way. already cant stand Helena
Go Bette, great chapter, looking forward to next post.
LMFAO!!
Dude! Stupid Helena.
“She is asking for someone to come in right now. Which one of you is her partner?” asked the doctor.
“That would be me,” said Helena, brushing past Bette dismissively.
“Come with me Bette, Tina has been asking for you for the last hour,”
Thats just…oh man, thats just great!
Yes…you go Bette and get your woman. Just throw that bitch of Helena out of there and get Tina back into to your arms. Post soon
awesome, awesome, awesome!!!
payback’s a bette-ch… go get her B!
Fan-fucking-tastic last sentence. How sad I can only give 5 stars. If you haven’t anything better to do (and maybe even if you have!) can you update with another chapter – like NOW :)