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Now Kit talks and Bette listens
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“I know I’ve been overprotective with Francesca. I’m sorry if I’ve neglected you but now that Peggy and Kit are here I feel more comfortable that she’ll be looked after.”
“Are you sure?”
“I’m sure. We need to have our time too especially before the baby is born. I want to do this for us Tee. I want to spend time alone getting to know and for you to get to know me. We have so much to talk about in regards to how our lives are going to change once Alex is born. I know you said we would deal with things as they come up but I’m sure you’re having some thoughts and feelings now and I’m struggling with some things that I want to discuss too.”
Tina understood and couldn’t agree more. She too was struggling but hadn’t known how to approach it with Bette. It was too easy to get caught up in the emotional aspects of their relationship without taking into consideration the practical ones.
“So when do you want to leave?”
“My schedule is open. You tell me what works best for you and I’ll make all the arrangements.”
“Will I still be able to plan our date night on Saturday. I was looking forward to making it really special for us.”
“Just having you to myself will make it special. We don’t even need to leave the cabin but if you want the community of Big Bear Lake has great night life and fabulous restaurants. There’s a restaurant club called Lakeview that’s situated right on the lake. They have a five star restaurant and the club is next door for live music, dancing, and cocktails. There is also a quaint repertoire theatre that brings in the latest Broadway shows and of course there’s year round outdoor sports and activities. The best part is that you have the choice of being around the populous or just hiding away in solitude.
“It all sounds wonderful. I’ve got a busy week but I’m sure I can take Friday off. Do you want to leave Thursday night or early Friday morning; whatever your preference.”
“It’s a two hour drive without traffic so why don’t we plan on Friday morning. We can leave around nine o’clock and be there by lunchtime.”
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Hope things get heated up quickly. Too slow for those two. Enjoyed it
wkm – is it too slow for Bette and Tina or are you getting impatient for things to heat up :-). I can’t promise fireworks because I don’t really get into writing NC17’s but they will break a sweat soon.
Good update. They are taking very slowly. I expect the weekend away will provoke opportunity for action.
azmama – the weekend will definitely provoke opportunity for action …
You made a comment early in this story (chapter 11) where you said “In order for this Bette and Tina coupling to work, Tina has to modify her life plans. At this point, she is physically attracted to Bette but nothing has occurred so right now it all seems so sterile, no panting, no sweating, no carnal desires have been revealed. Seems too much like an arrangement, all very platonic and business like. Looking forward to the next chapter”.
I responded that I thought their behavior was appropriate for the stage of their relationship at the time which was platonic friends but I also said that if you stuck with me I would address the supposed ‘lack of passion’. We’re almost there and they will have that conversation during the cabin weekend but there will also be ‘action’ to support it. I’m not an NC17 author and I don’t feel the need for graphic detail when the sex is implied but I hope you will see my point of view in having them take it very slowly – the main reason is they are not ready for sex for the sake of sex.
Now that’s what I call a post! Thank you!
Hope the Weekend away isn’t all cooking in the kitchen though!
Looking forward to reading 25b!
Hey SassyGran – thank you for continuing to read and for commenting. I promise they will do more than talk and cook during their weekend get-away. Remember this is also their date night weekend :-).
Hey bat, did you have a change of heart about Helena? I am not expecting an answer as I know you never give anything away about your stories, but it was just too tempting reading that Winnie and Helena are going to the Planet together and about their interaction during the baby shower. Glad Bette and Tina are going to take some time out to just be together without any distraction. They really need to discuss how they are going to proceed with everything that is happening and what they expect from the other. Thank you so much for taking the time to re-post this intriguing story.
Hey as1219 – Thanks for commenting. No I won’t give anything away but as is my usual style in writing these stories you can expect me to introduce a lot of different directions in the storyline as I set up future chapters. I try not to be too predictable or redundant so hopefully I will keep the interest of the readers since I don’t do NC17’s – :-).
I did some heavy editing in this chapter (25/25a) and the next (25b) from when I originally wrote this story. I actually softened Bette’s character a little because she was sounding like a commando but I didn’t change Helena. You were very observant to pick up on the Helena/Winnie match-up because if Helena does change for the better Winnie has something to do with it.
Thanks for reading and for checking up on me.
Great chapter BAT!! I actually like the progression of Bette and Tina in this story and look forward to their upcoming date weekend and interaction…Helena/Winnie of course I saw that one coming
I like your story and appreciate the way
Bette and Tina you take relationship, I confess
I’m a fan nc 17 this is true, however
I never fail to enjoy a great history as
this, just because they do not have a Nc: 17.
I love this charm that this discovery is
Bette and Tina, I love those moments of conversation
they have with small moments of snogging,
you write without elaborating.
10 Stars.
Note: My reading is delayed with many history
and am trying to upgrade it
December is Christmas and New Year, and the
Bethlehem Airport becomes a boiler of people
coming and going