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Now Kit talks and Bette listens
“Nothing to do with cooking but I do have skills in other areas that I wouldn’t mind sharing.” By now Bette and Tina had fallen back into the recliner and Bette was gently stroking her exposed midriff.
“Really?”
“Really.” Bette moved to kiss Tina but the blonde held her off with a finger to her lips.
“Babe it’s getting really late. I better get going.”
“I don’t want you to go Tee. It’s almost one o’clock in the morning. I won’t have you driving by yourself. Please stay the night.” Bette and Tina had yet to share a bed so Tina had a room at Peggy’s that she used whenever she spent the night. Their make-out sessions like the one they had that evening were intense but the lack of privacy and readiness to consummate kept them from going to bed together even if it was just to sleep.
“OK but I’ll need to borrow clothes again.” Tina relented not putting up much of a fight. She was exhausted and didn’t feel like making the drive either. She would much rather stay snuggled up against Bette.
“Not a problem.” Bette said while holding her for a while longer not wanting to move.
“Are you ready?” Tina asked feeling Bette’s reluctance to get up.
“Not really” Bette said distractedly.
“Babe you seem distracted. What’s on your mind?”
“You. Us. Being here with you like this. I can get used to this Tee.”
“Me too babe.” Tina placed a soft kiss on her lips and Bette kissed her back with the same tenderness. They’ve progressed to another stage in their relationship and the weekend getaway would be pivotal to where they would go next.
“Come on. We better get some sleep.” Bette starts to unwrap her lithe body from Tina’s and immediately misses the warmth of body contact. She was glad that Tina agreed to the weekend retreat; five days and counting.
Tina stood at Bette’s closet looking for something appropriate to wear the following morning while Bette pulls out night clothes and underwear from the chest of drawers. Loaded down with the borrowed clothes Tina bids her girlfriend goodnight as they share one last kiss pressed up against Bette’s bedroom door.
“Good night Tee. I’ll see you in the morning.”
“Good night babe.”
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Hope things get heated up quickly. Too slow for those two. Enjoyed it
wkm – is it too slow for Bette and Tina or are you getting impatient for things to heat up :-). I can’t promise fireworks because I don’t really get into writing NC17’s but they will break a sweat soon.
Good update. They are taking very slowly. I expect the weekend away will provoke opportunity for action.
azmama – the weekend will definitely provoke opportunity for action …
You made a comment early in this story (chapter 11) where you said “In order for this Bette and Tina coupling to work, Tina has to modify her life plans. At this point, she is physically attracted to Bette but nothing has occurred so right now it all seems so sterile, no panting, no sweating, no carnal desires have been revealed. Seems too much like an arrangement, all very platonic and business like. Looking forward to the next chapter”.
I responded that I thought their behavior was appropriate for the stage of their relationship at the time which was platonic friends but I also said that if you stuck with me I would address the supposed ‘lack of passion’. We’re almost there and they will have that conversation during the cabin weekend but there will also be ‘action’ to support it. I’m not an NC17 author and I don’t feel the need for graphic detail when the sex is implied but I hope you will see my point of view in having them take it very slowly – the main reason is they are not ready for sex for the sake of sex.
Now that’s what I call a post! Thank you!
Hope the Weekend away isn’t all cooking in the kitchen though!
Looking forward to reading 25b!
Hey SassyGran – thank you for continuing to read and for commenting. I promise they will do more than talk and cook during their weekend get-away. Remember this is also their date night weekend :-).
Hey bat, did you have a change of heart about Helena? I am not expecting an answer as I know you never give anything away about your stories, but it was just too tempting reading that Winnie and Helena are going to the Planet together and about their interaction during the baby shower. Glad Bette and Tina are going to take some time out to just be together without any distraction. They really need to discuss how they are going to proceed with everything that is happening and what they expect from the other. Thank you so much for taking the time to re-post this intriguing story.
Hey as1219 – Thanks for commenting. No I won’t give anything away but as is my usual style in writing these stories you can expect me to introduce a lot of different directions in the storyline as I set up future chapters. I try not to be too predictable or redundant so hopefully I will keep the interest of the readers since I don’t do NC17’s – :-).
I did some heavy editing in this chapter (25/25a) and the next (25b) from when I originally wrote this story. I actually softened Bette’s character a little because she was sounding like a commando but I didn’t change Helena. You were very observant to pick up on the Helena/Winnie match-up because if Helena does change for the better Winnie has something to do with it.
Thanks for reading and for checking up on me.
Great chapter BAT!! I actually like the progression of Bette and Tina in this story and look forward to their upcoming date weekend and interaction…Helena/Winnie of course I saw that one coming
I like your story and appreciate the way
Bette and Tina you take relationship, I confess
I’m a fan nc 17 this is true, however
I never fail to enjoy a great history as
this, just because they do not have a Nc: 17.
I love this charm that this discovery is
Bette and Tina, I love those moments of conversation
they have with small moments of snogging,
you write without elaborating.
10 Stars.
Note: My reading is delayed with many history
and am trying to upgrade it
December is Christmas and New Year, and the
Bethlehem Airport becomes a boiler of people
coming and going