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Original of the Species
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Chapter 7
Bette arrived to the place and parked her car behind the main mansion, where she was told. Everything in this place was done in a practical way, Bette thought with great delight for she loved organized and functional things.
“Okay, let’s do this” Bette said to herself as she entered her place of work for the next three days. She was extremely happy to find a huge and modern kitchen with absolutely everything she would be needing there, plus her staff.
“Hi guys!” She greeted every single one of them, plus the waiters and waitresses and cleaning staff who were actually not a part of her crew.
“Ok people listen up! We’ve got tons of things to do. But first the rehearsal dinner in a few hours and although it’s only fifty people, we still have to do our best. So here’s the plan: Laurel you’ll be the sous-chef so you stay close to me. Mark you’re in the sauces station, Susan you’ll do the chicken station, Phillip you’ll handle the side dishes” Bette was talking directly to every member of her team as she pointed out their assignments for the night.
“And Mary tonight you’ll be in charge of the desserts station. I’ll handle the starters and the final presentation of the dishes along with Laurel” Bette clapped her hands a few times, indicating it was time to start working. “And people remember that we also have breakfast to serve tomorrow morning, so I want you all well rested and focused… now let’s get to work!” Bette concluded.
Meanwhile inside the house Tina was heading towards her friend’s room. She knocked and when the door opened two loud high pitched screams were heard almost around the entire floor.
“Oh I’m so happy you’re finally here” Kelly said overly excited hugging her friend. “Come here you little slut, you have plenty of things to do besides telling me all bout your last Friday” She quickly added.
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Pancakes…Tina…hmmmmm. Great story
Ah, breakfast is going to be a bit of a revelation for someone, I hope. Nice chapter, thanks! :)
ahh, pancakes for breakfast….again. this will be an interesting breakfast. one has to wonder if bette will be introduced as the chef who tuned this variation together with the help of her staff. hmm. thickening plots and near miss meetings between these two. YOU are a tease!!what a great story. bette is a chef. how great is that? can’t wait to read more of this story. and thanks for taking the time to share with us.
Great pacing – draw it out a bit to tease us! The pancakes are a nice touch….will Tina choke as she suddenly realizes who “Elizabeth” is?
Tina must be sure to get up for breakfast and have a meal that she will never forget. How will she handle all the emotion that will be happening to her, with her parents present. Great update. Thanks for posting.
I love how you have written both Bette and Tina. I can’t wait for the pancakes to appear and to see what Tina’s reaction will be to those pancakes. Do you think you could pass on the recipe for the chocolate desert?
Hoping Tina tumbles to the pancake revelation and then what? Hope to see another chapter from you soon. Thanks for writing!
I am so loving this story!!! Wonder how pale Tina will go when she see’s the pancakes. Thank you PPS
hmm Tina’s gonna love breakfast! nice twist, pps.
Too cute. Thanks for the post and I’m still driving around trying to find this damn wedding! ;)
The rub lies within the pancakes…
oh this is killing me..
Yummy pancakes….Love your story, pps.
I love this story so much! I can so see Bette as a chef mmmm. I can’t wait for those pancakes!
I still can’t get over Bette being a chef lol. And a great one. Love it. PPVS
Pancakes… well looks like tina will guess who made the pancakes… love this story… pps
Huummm Pancakes. Knowing that Tina had never eaten a pancakes so tasty, I’m thinking that Tina is going to connect to a special pancakes Bette Potter. Can not wait for the reunion of the two. More please………….
Alright that was good, now let see Tinas reaction when she eat pancake lol. Please post more, thanks!
THE PANCAKES!..I think Tina should recognice the one that Bette made! oh THIS SO EXCITING!!!I Can’t wait! ..
THE pancakes! Will TIna recognise their taste? This is very appetizing!
Oh boy…meeting time…can’t wait! Are you going to make Laurel a twisted character in the triangle of young love? Or will she just pine away for Bette? Interesting twist and options that you have. Ok…let the games begin!
was partying last night but was so nice to get up this morning and read another chapter, cant wait for Bette and Tina to meet again in the next one
Thanks for this story! It’ s so good!! :DPPS
Oh Wow! I can’t wait for breakfast. This story just gets better and better. Thank you.
So, Laurel has a thing for Bette.